RD1: Patrick aka Swerve vs. Frank Metts - {Swerve wins}

[Strikta]

5-4

Tryna see someone win by 2.

Couple more votes plz.

[Ghost1]

Pat tryna start a Revolutionary War, I'm shooting at u more. Bitch can't harm me
u want'ta be Revere'd for ur skill but that red coat covering ur body is more British army

Prolly played but i aint seen it. Dope.

The shit is alarming.. No SpongeBob or Starfish plays. Dumb'n down isn't fair
But if this faggot sinks low enough to mention my Daughter... he won't be comming up for air

Wooooo!

Think I'm young enough to care? Im at'ya clubhouse with the snub out, battling this wack clown now?
I won't just peel yah cap back.. I leave u look'n like Mickey Mouse standing in front of a black background

Ehhh not as good as the first 2

my shits better then crack, bow down. Take that or Break Bad, here's ur altered future
When I'm finished we will both be in cuffs for life... but you'll be walking like Walter Jr.

Lmao. Not really complex but still made me smirk

U shouldve fallen sooner. Ur puniness is flowing aint no Gonnies were ur going. Get to know the ground son.
I'm not here wishing well .. but ill take u for what your worth grab you with two fingers and throw you down one

Way too stretched here. The concept itself was ok....but too longwinded here

ur rank? don't care bitch. Seen'yah pic, all guys engaging in mild embracing? Plenty modest
Couldn't find a Lady Volunteer?... guess when Pat Summits the courage there'll be another empty closet

Not fellin this too much

Don't deny, stop it .. u covered in brown to yah balls u down for the cause... waiting for that one from gay cupid
U can Dance around the truth... but dont forget ur fish net shirt, swing'n ur glow sticks to that drum & bass music

Not bad




Ha, thought we were gonna get the extension....I keyed too.

Well dont u look like a stupid fuck?

Can’t take none of Swerve’s fans, they’re here for the benefit of rhymes,
So the only way they’ll convert to Francs is switching to Swiss currency in tough economic times.

Okok

Plus you and Joey ain’t tough, I’ll start to rain slugs down on you suckers,
You’re brothers in arms…but only cause you fags would rather hug it out than battle each other.

This landed. Not crazy hard but it connected.

Your voice is half retarded too, it brings up plenty of concepts,
Cause the only time FM sound got girls calling in is during on air radio contests.

I hate initial nameflips....urs was ok for what it was i guess

I’m Chuck Norris with the leg game, to start I’ll severe your wig,
Try to fuck with the kid and I’ll send nasty kicks to your chest like Ill nik-A’s sig.

Not feelin

You're too broke to support your little girl, its really depressin,
Take stock of the situation...and realize an education for her is something you couldn't invest in.

Ehhh...take stock/invest isbplayed an ur flip wasnt great

Shots to your chest, end all the wack shit that you aspiring,
Make you cough up a lung that even Strikta wouldn't be interested in acquiring.

LOOOL. Fire.

I got swag on all decks, fact is I'm swimming with decadence,
Look at me wrong and I'll turn your hospital visit into a tenured permanent residence.

Yea u def keyed. Smh.



On one hand franks bars were stretched as fuck.....he atleast had inner rhyme schemes an multis to string them together but wasted alot of words imo. With that in his davor his.concepts were def more complex.....swerve had a few bangers but nothin really hit hard cdpt that strikta line.....od say frank prolly had 3 quotes to swerves 1 if im bein really strict.


V frank

[Sharp]

(Pat tryna start a Revolutionary War, I'm shooting at u more. Bitch can't harm me
u want'ta be Revere'd for ur skill but that red coat covering ur body is more British army)
The shit is alarming.. No SpongeBob or Starfish plays. Dumb'n down isn't fair
But if this faggot sinks low enough to mention my Daughter... he won't be comming up for air
ur rank? don't care bitch. Seen'yah pic, all guys engaging in mild embracing? Plenty modest
Couldn't find a Lady Volunteer?... guess when Pat Summits the courage there'll be another empty closet

v

Can’t take none of Swerve’s fans, they’re here for the benefit of rhymes,
So the only way they’ll convert to Francs is switching to Swiss currency in tough economic times.
Plus you and Joey ain’t tough, I’ll start to rain slugs down on you suckers,
You’re brothers in arms…but only cause you fags would rather hug it out than battle each other.
(Your voice is half retarded too, it brings up plenty of concepts,
Cause the only time FM sound got girls calling in is during on air radio contests.)
(Shots to your chest, end all the wack shit that you aspiring,
Make you cough up a lung that even Strikta wouldn't be interested in acquiring.)


mad close, can see this going either way but what did it for me was swerve had cleaner wording. Franks wishing well stood out as a line that coulda hit harder but was just a lil too stretched for my tastes. edged it to swerve on pretty much that alone. dope stuff but

v/swerve

[Strikta]

6-5, Swerve.

1 or 2 more votes plz ppl.

[KwaL!ty]

Pat tryna start a Revolutionary War, I'm shooting at u more. Bitch can't harm me
u want'ta be Revere'd for ur skill but that red coat covering ur body is more British army
The shit is alarming.. No SpongeBob or Starfish plays. Dumb'n down isn't fair
But if this faggot sinks low enough to mention my Daughter... he won't be comming up for air
Think I'm young enough to care? Im at'ya clubhouse with the snub out, battling this wack clown now?
I won't just peel yah cap back.. I leave u look'n like Mickey Mouse standing in front of a black background
my shits better then crack, bow down. Take that or Break Bad, here's ur altered future
When I'm finished we will both be in cuffs for life... but you'll be walking like Walter Jr.
ur rank? don't care bitch. Seen'yah pic, all guys engaging in mild embracing? Plenty modest
Couldn't find a Lady Volunteer?... guess when Pat Summits the courage there'll be another empty closet
Don't deny, stop it .. u covered in brown to yah balls u down for the cause... waiting for that one from gay cupid
U can Dance around the truth... but dont forget ur fish net shirt, swing'n ur glow sticks to that drum & bass music

Dope ass verse bro.. a little stretchy on the on the structure but the internal rhymes made it work..


vs

Can’t take none of Swerve’s fans, they’re here for the benefit of rhymes,
So the only way they’ll convert to Francs is switching to Swiss currency in tough economic times.
Plus you and Joey ain’t tough, I’ll start to rain slugs down on you suckers,
You’re brothers in arms…but only cause you fags would rather hug it out than battle each other.
Your voice is half retarded too, it brings up plenty of concepts,
Cause the only time FM sound got girls calling in is during on air radio contests.
I’m Chuck Norris with the leg game, to start I’ll severe your wig,
Try to fuck with the kid and I’ll send nasty kicks to your chest like Ill nik-A’s sig.
You're too broke to support your little girl, its really depressin,
Take stock of the situation...and realize an education for her is something you couldn't invest in.
Shots to your chest, end all the wack shit that you aspiring,
Make you cough up a lung that even Strikta wouldn't be interested in acquiring.
I got swag on all decks, fact is I'm swimming with decadence,
Look at me wrong and I'll turn your hospital visit into a tenured permanent residence.

Holy shit Swerve, you took this battle every bar in my eyes was sharp and connecting..


Vote- Swerve,

[Strikta]

Swerve wins, 7-5.