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Adonis |
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3 | 27.27% |
Objective |
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5 | 45.45% |
Mr J |
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1 | 9.09% |
NYCSpitz |
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4 | 36.36% |
Candy |
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1 | 9.09% |
Scar |
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2 | 18.18% |
Innovator |
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2 | 18.18% |
Master Rock |
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6 | 54.55% |
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After reading Adonis verse I said say no more but then I saw Objective getting the most votes for worst verse so I said lemme check it out. Objective had the worst verse of the round.
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I agree. It was too cluttered and should have been polished thoroughly, a story driven topical wins over that unless I had executed it better. As it stands now it's a bit all over to place to say the least, haha. I still don't regret my decision for going for it, I'll keep doing similar stuff like this and take feedback to heart until I get it right.
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who are the top topical heads around here? big baby gotta be on there, right? that dude is nice.
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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big baby HLB
but lower bottom tier topical wise
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what does HLB mean?
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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check out Zombie, Darth Yoda, dullboy etc
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Lmao.
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Soon we'll see.
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I hate luke warm coffees at cafes that's been getting stale the whole day.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o Last edited by Objective; 07-28-2019 at 03:58 PM. |
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