Now that I'm 15-0 - Page 2

Chill Phil · 10-12-2015, 10:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amen

Aero v2.

Izzy Reef · 10-12-2015, 10:34 AM

Post ya audio

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 10:36 AM

Don't compare me to irrelevant people...

Inno · 10-12-2015, 10:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ekelon

Old relics/ old republic

Dem bars tho...

I believe thats from a poem I wrote lol

It doesnt even rhyme right because its not suppose to

ITS A POEM

but let me stop before you pull my tongue put my top
Like a helicopter propeller lmao

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 10:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

I believe thats from a poem I wrote lol

It doesnt even rhyme right because its not suppose to

ITS A POEM

but let me stop before you pull my tongue put my top
Like a helicopter propeller lmao

It's supposed to rhyme, because the rest of the lines rhymed, except that one.

If you're going to nitpick in an attempt to be ~cool~ around a bunch of nerds, do so without being a hypocrite.

and it's a propeller hat.

Imagery shock bars, you wouldn't know anything about that.

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 10:50 AM

C'mon Innovator,

I'll show you how to be a player
Witty in the grave? I'll show you how to be his neighbor

rip.

Inno · 10-12-2015, 10:51 AM

Lol i like how u perceive to tell me how I wrote my own material

Fact is your horrible.

Where are the rest pf your so called 15-0 battles?

All i see is that hot garbage you posted.

What waz it some shit about mc donalds fathers
And uncreatively some wack shit.

Nigga u wack

Inno · 10-12-2015, 10:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ekelon

C'mon Innovator,

I'll show you how to be a player
Witty in the grave? I'll show you how to be his neighbor

rip.

Lmao

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

Lol i like how u perceive to tell me how I wrote my own material

Fact is your horrible.

Where are the rest pf your so called 15-0 battles?

All i see is that hot garbage you posted.

What waz it some shit about mc donalds fathers
And uncreatively some wack shit.

Nigga u wack

I'm horrible yet you can't even rhyme 2 syllables...

Make a 17 syllable rhyme scheme with a punch then holla... I freestyle more multi's than you can write.

Chill Phil · 10-12-2015, 11:00 AM

i can rhyme 2 syllables with new syllables

Inno · 10-12-2015, 11:00 AM

Rhyming the same three words then changing the last one

You got bars man.

sral · 10-12-2015, 11:07 AM

17 syllables is pretty lengthy in a text line, imho

try this for size:

http://www.netcees.org/showpost.php?...0&postcount=41

EDIT: 'not' and 'up' dont rhyme

you suck

sral · 10-12-2015, 11:12 AM

hold up, how you 15-0 when i won in your last disc board thread?

you 15-1 at best

everybody said i won

Diode · 10-12-2015, 11:13 AM

seriously though @Faggot McBoogerballs owns this gimmick already

Inno · 10-12-2015, 11:15 AM

Default
Witty,
There's no such thing as a fair brawl so stop it dude
Or feel the force of fighting ISIS while they bombin' you
This what I gotta do ock cus I don't rock with you
Them Jordans tend to look different when they on top of you

wtf are you talking? First bar doesnt even have a punch?
Second line is fucking horrible. Again WHERE THE FUCK IS THE
PUNCH YOU STUPID GIMP?

I grip the joint and stab you, you netcees talkin' bout pens
I make that pen look different...when it's pointin' at you
Think having your clique tight will get votes for you
When I'm alone in this bitch, and I'm zoned at you

SRSLY? YOU USE SIMPLE MULTIS LIKE A 2 YEAR OLD
PLAYING WITH BLOCKS PUTING THREE LETTER WORDS
TOGETHER THINKING THEY JUST SOLVED GEOMETRY.
LMAO@SECONDLINE. AGAIN STUPID NIGGA WHERES THE PUNCH!!?

Uncreative as they come from the basements where yall dwellin' at
Pull your tongue through your scalp til it looks like a propeller hat
Scratch that, Put a blade in your dome in your Micky D's uniform
Make your kid go an tell your wife "Mom I seen a unicorn!"

MOM I (SEEN) A UNICORN!?!?!?

You're a thorn up against Lucifer in human form
Gag your wife with the same tube sock you use for porn
All you nerds gassing this bitch is what really made him awful
when I'm the type to squeeze out a tampon into your baby's bottle

WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO SQUEEZE A TAMPON IN A BOTTLE? UOU LIKE STUFFIN TAMPON INTO KIDS BOTTLES YOU WIERD FUCK I GOT KIDS THAT WACK ASS BAR WAS NOT ONLY WACK BUT OFFENSIVE.

Find what flexin' muscle brings ,I'm advising not to be raising fists
when I could let a couple swing like I'm spicing up the relationship
Since this was effortless, I called the cartel in Mexico and watched
Want to see the result? Find out on the next episode of Botched

INSNT BOTCHED A PLASTIC SURGERY SHOW? SO YOU GIVING WITTY BAD TITTYS AND NOW HES UPSET AND YOU TAPED IT WHILE HANGIMG OUT WITH SOME MEXICANS? I STOPPED LOOKING FOR PUNCHES

5/10

Witty · 10-12-2015, 11:38 AM

I'll post tonight.

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 11:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

hold up, how you 15-0 when i won in your last disc board thread?

you 15-1 at best

everybody said i won

Wasn't a battle.

Let alone, I killed you.

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 11:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

Default
Witty,
There's no such thing as a fair brawl so stop it dude
Or feel the force of fighting ISIS while they bombin' you
This what I gotta do ock cus I don't rock with you
Them Jordans tend to look different when they on top of you

wtf are you talking? First bar doesnt even have a punch?
Second line is fucking horrible. Again WHERE THE FUCK IS THE
PUNCH YOU STUPID GIMP?

I grip the joint and stab you, you netcees talkin' bout pens
I make that pen look different...when it's pointin' at you
Think having your clique tight will get votes for you
When I'm alone in this bitch, and I'm zoned at you

SRSLY? YOU USE SIMPLE MULTIS LIKE A 2 YEAR OLD
PLAYING WITH BLOCKS PUTING THREE LETTER WORDS
TOGETHER THINKING THEY JUST SOLVED GEOMETRY.
LMAO@SECONDLINE. AGAIN STUPID NIGGA WHERES THE PUNCH!!?

Uncreative as they come from the basements where yall dwellin' at
Pull your tongue through your scalp til it looks like a propeller hat
Scratch that, Put a blade in your dome in your Micky D's uniform
Make your kid go an tell your wife "Mom I seen a unicorn!"

MOM I (SEEN) A UNICORN!?!?!?

You're a thorn up against Lucifer in human form
Gag your wife with the same tube sock you use for porn
All you nerds gassing this bitch is what really made him awful
when I'm the type to squeeze out a tampon into your baby's bottle

WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO SQUEEZE A TAMPON IN A BOTTLE? UOU LIKE STUFFIN TAMPON INTO KIDS BOTTLES YOU WIERD FUCK I GOT KIDS THAT WACK ASS BAR WAS NOT ONLY WACK BUT OFFENSIVE.

Find what flexin' muscle brings ,I'm advising not to be raising fists
when I could let a couple swing like I'm spicing up the relationship
Since this was effortless, I called the cartel in Mexico and watched
Want to see the result? Find out on the next episode of Botched

INSNT BOTCHED A PLASTIC SURGERY SHOW? SO YOU GIVING WITTY BAD TITTYS AND NOW HES UPSET AND YOU TAPED IT WHILE HANGIMG OUT WITH SOME MEXICANS? I STOPPED LOOKING FOR PUNCHES

5/10

10/10 seeing how emotional you are about it.

I can't help that I went from Rookie to Vet in a week on the forum you work so hard at...

ekelon luvs cock meat sandwiches · 10-12-2015, 11:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty

I'll post tonight.

Nah, don't bother. Deadline was a year ago.

puravida · 10-12-2015, 11:48 AM

join the 1-2 .

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Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Lol i like how u perceive to tell me how I wrote my own material Fact is your horrible. Where are the rest pf your so called 15-0 battles? All i see is that hot garbage you posted. What waz it some shit about mc donalds fathers And uncreatively some wack shit. Nigga u wack

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Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Default Witty, There's no such thing as a fair brawl so stop it dude Or feel the force of fighting ISIS while they bombin' you This what I gotta do ock cus I don't rock with you Them Jordans tend to look different when they on top of you wtf are you talking? First bar doesnt even have a punch? Second line is fucking horrible. Again WHERE THE FUCK IS THE PUNCH YOU STUPID GIMP? I grip the joint and stab you, you netcees talkin' bout pens I make that pen look different...when it's pointin' at you Think having your clique tight will get votes for you When I'm alone in this bitch, and I'm zoned at you SRSLY? YOU USE SIMPLE MULTIS LIKE A 2 YEAR OLD PLAYING WITH BLOCKS PUTING THREE LETTER WORDS TOGETHER THINKING THEY JUST SOLVED GEOMETRY. LMAO@SECONDLINE. AGAIN STUPID NIGGA WHERES THE PUNCH!!? Uncreative as they come from the basements where yall dwellin' at Pull your tongue through your scalp til it looks like a propeller hat Scratch that, Put a blade in your dome in your Micky D's uniform Make your kid go an tell your wife "Mom I seen a unicorn!" MOM I (SEEN) A UNICORN!?!?!? You're a thorn up against Lucifer in human form Gag your wife with the same tube sock you use for porn All you nerds gassing this bitch is what really made him awful when I'm the type to squeeze out a tampon into your baby's bottle WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO SQUEEZE A TAMPON IN A BOTTLE? UOU LIKE STUFFIN TAMPON INTO KIDS BOTTLES YOU WIERD FUCK I GOT KIDS THAT WACK ASS BAR WAS NOT ONLY WACK BUT OFFENSIVE. Find what flexin' muscle brings ,I'm advising not to be raising fists when I could let a couple swing like I'm spicing up the relationship Since this was effortless, I called the cartel in Mexico and watched Want to see the result? Find out on the next episode of Botched INSNT BOTCHED A PLASTIC SURGERY SHOW? SO YOU GIVING WITTY BAD TITTYS AND NOW HES UPSET AND YOU TAPED IT WHILE HANGIMG OUT WITH SOME MEXICANS? I STOPPED LOOKING FOR PUNCHES 5/10

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