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Canned beer was high school+college, im a grown up. I'll take mine in an ice cold frosted glass thank you.
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I am not sure how preference in what a drink is consumed from has any bearing on one's maturity.
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actually i drink 24 oz tall boys and they are old man status imo
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Witty - fuck off
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Bad form
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past tense
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think im going to call you dagel from now on. cool?
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this league will take me some getting used to. it's weird for me to see so many writers without a strong rhyme scheme, at least that i can see. some guys are solid with it but it doesn't seem to be required among the entirety of the crew. i'm almost perceiving myself as a minority even though from what i've seen i think it's like fifty-fifty. it's just a change for me i have to get used to.
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Objection.
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We're unorthodox around these parts. I plan on working on my schemes though. That and better wording, diction. Then I'd be unstoppable HOF.
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This is a story league where stories> all. Write stories or gtfo
No but seriously, try writing a story
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Tsk Tsk
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In of the old breed where a topical can be anything from writing about the life and Day of a shit turd, to ants. I really do try not to write story's, although I can, just prefer the non storied topical. And @d0ubt when you say you have great skill in something, it will make us dissect it and find the flaws. I agree that there are some that do simple rhyme or less abstract rhyme. I am actually accused of this. But I disagree, to me my shit always flows to the beat when record them plus I try and have fun with some schemes. Either way, when people say I rhyme weak,which is often, I just assume they don't fully understand the depth they just read. Because quite frankly, I'm the shit This is known
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edit - lol why did i think you were my opponent this week. let's blame it on being being stoned and reading your name wrong. or me being stoned and forgetting the name of my opponent. Last edited by d0ubt; 04-19-2014 at 01:43 PM. |
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I think you take the things I say too serio amigo.
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I'm glad to know king cobras are well liked here too. Now I know I'm not the only man who still drinks like a poor high school student. |
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This is a story league where stories> all. Write stories or gtfo
No but seriously, try writing a story
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Lmao.
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Fuck stories tbh
Want a story? Throw on I gave you power or undying love or dance with the devil nigga this ain't bed time
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