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Old 09-23-2016, 03:59 PM   #2421
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Word to the wise, I don't need to edit.
i put it down then I send it.
got the whole cycle thoroughly embedded..
look at go down without an edit.
so excuse me if I misstep it..
look at the light that graced my presence.
put it down & get the message
put it down & get the message
imagine the word that get em sentence.
the high they get to wet the senses..
the ball got them rolling the same hill...
back to back seeking the same thrill.
imagine that...theuir basically giving away skill
my hand hit the table..grindin...
The caine is able....grindin...
my hand hit the table....grindin..
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Old 09-23-2016, 04:36 PM   #2422
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@Mr.J I'm glad you post. Let's keep it alive!



We're miles away, away, away from each other.
I hope she stays, I hope there's Faith... I'm aching to touch her.
Stone Cold. I swear she's a stunner.
Mi sol. The glass of cold lemonade in the summer.
I beareth all. I'm bare to ya'll. She knows that I love her.
My spirit. She can only hear it, she walks off to the beat of this drummer.



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Old 09-23-2016, 11:45 PM   #2423
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Grip on reality or in realities grips.
find me where her fantasies live...
The thought of me makes her anatomy drip.
my proper plumbing will handle her quick.
fixing her up real nice before management flips.
Down & up those walls like plaster & brick...
the cable guy looking for the proper vantage for it.
if you mad...then God be damned by the forces
give your name at the stand of the florist...
bodies get buried deep...deep in her oriface...
carry out the vigil, play the organ & sing a chorus.
that's life. Sinatra could vouch for us
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Old 09-25-2016, 06:04 PM   #2424
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Lol you hit a couple boys of mine on the way
You lost afternoon and face fulla day
Ya missing a rap not kill you like a fag
Especially picked at the trash like barrel dog you wack
Real big tittie bitch tho where was the proper stack?? clip for that wad of cash.

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I stood up said yeah I like this but not that my rhymes are fat
I ain't going all-out American though cause I bake u for edoug and Stan
I didn't want to know really.....it was all a secret
Whish I was decent still ain't no way paying for cigarettes

Kissing when we Meet

Kidnapped he was lost
Jack Frost beanflock motherfucking king tut
Now your dead u die and die now fag surprise u ducked
Two bit shaking his hand crunching it or on top of it
We dropping sick with it replied from each corner of a tropic

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Old 09-28-2016, 01:25 AM   #2425
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If this theory is theoretical
I'm a universe ahead of you.
3rd eye blind, 4th dimensional..
Foresight leaving you behind schedule.
opportunity knocked.....
ding dong ditch, hit the vestibule
background check at the festival..
Shots come quick, its inevitable.
pour one out & toast to the death of you.
liquid courage, a skirmish that ended true...
to endings and how it ends with you.
hollow head in a hollow head...
Just imagine what you'd swallow next.
Look at that silly ass looking bobble head.
I deliver the finishing combo...
bless..

Arm rest in the open, wind..
Talent misused by these broken men.
ya skills sound like broken wind.
full of shit & gross with sin.
humble ya self corn hole, buy a hat.
think before you decide to rap.
if you're buying that, buy a strap.
say hello to tomorrow & say goodbye to that.
my pride lie where the lions at...
your pride is as shallow as the iron flask.
seeing 12 got em thinking the mayans back.
rolling in mummification in a Super Saiyan flash.
Catch this belt & watch Orion collapse...
this knife slice like a spy vs spy attack..
put your mind to where the rising horizons at.
Burn baby burn...put ya tires on that...
exhasted never, thoughts lost in forever.
foghorn leg horn with a cotton treasure.
a stench you have to love caught in pleasure.
cat & mouse, such monotonous measures..
plan backfires...such & such...
I forgot I was writing...what the fuck
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Old 09-28-2016, 08:19 AM   #2426
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He was like yeah you almost did it but you didnt post long enough
Said yeah inside stuff you just a nut i gots ta screw ya niggaz suck
Fuck yall cause im the best like a sunset heading west like jerry stackhouse
Fill ya with doubt brick fulla house da deck was a system you aint make it out
Fire ablaze my life is not straight filled a page still cant shake the heat
Got a name like a street and a couple lightposts surrounded by beats
You aint deep put my dog ta sleep bitch you has got to die now
Looking like lighthouse presidential like white house
Im giving in i admit type a nigga ta stick it like an apple tree
You so whack trying to battle me whack as some balcony
Doubt my faculty i put together a team irredefensible
Heads will roll ya lines whack u die acting admiral
Collateral??? Screw you over like a wrench
Deep end still aint keeping depth attracting pests
Wasnt finished yet dude was like catch up bro
Im dope keep a baker aint bake no dough
Ive been stoked shit still seize to amaze
Im like a pasture you just aint need to graze


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Old 09-28-2016, 03:57 PM   #2427
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This place is under new management..
get with the act or become an activist..
if you can't follow the rules, that's a trip.
one hit will send you traveling with ya baggage gripped.
look at that sack of shit...
live with it, that's your answer kid.
a tumor, rumored to be cancerous...
watch if it seeps through the bandages
we'll all have something to regret..
look at the canvas'
eww, what a bunch of amateurs.
eww, look at all the cameras..
Ugh, beef in moldy sandwiches.
yeuck, who are the food handlers. .
monkey slap from a gorilla palm
my drink clink a that Vanilla song
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Old 10-01-2016, 05:52 PM   #2428
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How you going to bribe God?
pack it up & try to take time off...
walking in my shoes & my socks?
antisocial vagrant dressed as a Crime dog.
gasoline drip into nicotine spit...
I question marks so riddle me this..
how the slow flow kill ya squadron.
a balance found over pills Im poppin
the loose change that filled them pockets.
show your lack of willpower, skill obnoxious.
sippin from a canteen filled with toxins
yo presence goes, still unwanted...
as for I, I retain order..
double up on the same order
embracing the pain & torture...
of carrying this game...voyeurs
appreciate my game & say wow.
your WCW had no way out...
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Old 10-02-2016, 10:49 AM   #2429
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Damn man i just trying to make a grand
You thought you should be ill but it turns out u cant
Had to think about that for a second
Fake as sum thugs that be swearing they carry weapons
Im so sylistic people be all on my johnson son
You got bullets but none that fit the calibur of my gun
Dress u up like sum nuns
You just cant get off my nuts like a bee u stay buzzed
And im writing myself a shopping list for this week
You like a mountain or valley except ya bitch neva peak
Fuck yall yall suck
Id say you were smart but only cause you stupid as fuck
Lol keep feeling my presence bro
You like an old man about to have a stroke
And i aint even trying to attempt to be ill
You got gas lol me im like some natural water way i stay still
Underground like new orleans
Im kinda itchy guess its cause i decided to wear sum fleece
Flew to greece still aint popping no dope shit
And im all up on it since way u spitting u sound like a bitch
Gonna end this at some point
Ill be riding by in a rolls royce two sides to every coin
Fuck it this wasnt my best got more shit to get off my chest
My lines so confusing i got ya shorty feeling perplexed
She stay on it cause i a true g
Cats keep it tight tho so i gotta watch em like im sparking a doobie
Cyphers stay fresh im too overwelmed by the thought of death
But fuck it im just a loser and yall keep attracting the pests
Might as well call u an insect way u keep bugging son
Im like a poker player way im calling ya bluff
Go ahead tho and make a response
Im like bags way i stay with numbers i gots to crunch
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Old 10-03-2016, 02:00 AM   #2430
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As the knife deepens, it defies reason..
the potent poison that hides in sweetness.
I was blind, puzzled by my weakness.
where science leads in with the silent treatment...
I smirk, give the world a slide show & theme song
consume tears like the pillow they sleep on.
catch a arrow Smith, continue to dream on.
a theory beyond nonsense presented in bows
one swift kick denies any mention of hope.
presently blown, in a blunt the competitors pathetically rolled
ya squad could turn into the Human Centipede homes...
you thinking sports when people are mentioning goals.
the embarrassment alone should threaten ya road...
twirling into a spiral of bloodshed & beef..
three stooges it was Beavis & Butthead & Me...
your hair was held up by a tub wet with grease.
I laugh, spend moments on & off the court.
theres no backbone in you, whats the posture for?
I get by on the moments the clock ignores..
so tell yaself fuck pain...thats what the doctor is for.
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Right that wasnt bad but u barely threw any jabs
Im like history class way im all about the facts
Not really feeling the board today to tell the truth
Ive got nothing to say like someone thats mute
I guess that was a bit harsh and very irregular
I aint like the way it sounds guess i need an editor
Wish i could write this about something your interested in
But i aint no rubbish but still toss ya shit like im a deck i gotta flip
I cant wait to get back into sessions and strart writing more
But just like thunderstorms the clouds about to pour
Im sympathetic with those that invest into my cause
Im like a dvd way im something that u could pause
Its a lotta work doing this rap shit.. and it aint never going to stop
Im reading ya your rights as if i was a cop rip up three city blocks
Guess thats about it better start rolling the credits
Im about to bring death to life u backing out like a brain hemmorage
For real stay reading and writing.. learn the tools of the site...
Ill be darker than night and still rise early like some sunshine
Gotta end this somewhere i know a lot of it was basic
But if u looking for a funeral best believe it aint hard to arrange it
Thats about as much as some of these rappers can take
Im like a lake in florida since u so fake they all manmade
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No.
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This guy says no, but I'm the guy who says so
Soften him up a bit first, like I was playing with Play-Doh
You've got a problem with ducking so I always aim low
The only reason you think you're hot is cos I let the flames throw
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this new watch was taken from the graves host
J smoked his fair share of the same jokes.
now....see me cold as when the rain po...
they say be cool J, boy gimme that Kangol.
boombox, card board, & new pair of Adidas.
the way I kick it, throws off your goalkeepers.
or something like that, listen to your teachers.
seek a GED, go eat your wheaties b.
go smoke some PCP, youll never see me leave.
my high road is located on easy street...
youll always be wishing you could be me...
peace...

Even the cops is ducking when they see me creep
duck hunt gun with my bitch up front giggling..
making my wee wee speak, now her chin is tickling.
or some shit like that...
dudes come around looking like Da Brat..
when my hammer come down...splat
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They So Whack and cant counter when we Attack Back,
punches in the Rck make them All Crack,
They don't realize that they are All Trapped,
We got thugs ready to bust in the Back Strapped,
On another dimension like the Dark Warpped,
All of them my soldiers they are All Marked,
All their Maps Tracked
Decided to sign the Sacred Contract and Follow Satan Ways
So fly i am now making contact with Alien Greys,
Assailants and those Prevailing Near,
Those in track Trailing Beware,
I Assault with Blazing Spheres,
See the future through Radiant Glares,
Of shards blasting apart Assailants Near,
The region major and Marvelous Rap Lover,
got Legions of Angels tucked under a Dark Cover,
So big I may be All Over,
Call me alcoholic but today i am Not Sober,
Manipulating the system from Secular Bases,
Using blood to sign oats over Several Pages,
Invoking Lucifer's Phantom to trap opponents in Interstellar Mazes,
How can you defused atoms dare Wanna Face This,
When we all know you loose battles on a Regular Basis,
Well my Illustrious Main Aces are victorious on Revered Cases,
The Leader of the world most Feared Races,
Make them Dissappear without Clear Traces,
for trynna invade where me and hades Share Stages,
Guarding the mythical beast Frozen in Kryostasis,
Chained down with a Hundred Braces,
Serve a platter of your head in Golden Cases,
An abominable monster who Rose from the Dark,
Devouring the hopes of those shooting Guns in the Park,
Mending together pieces that were Broken Apart,
Salute and pay the Enigmatic Master,
Who is responsible for raising the Problematic Bastard,
The Einstein of lyrics with that Heavenly Flow,
My mind contain secrets too Deadly to Know,
Battle in my element feel the Energy Grow,
We wont call this beef caz you Already a Cow,
See the wounds open and I Am Going to Sew,
In this race you need to Thoroughly Row,
you cant catch me caz you are Going too Slow,
Smoke a Bird faster than these Herbs that i Blow,
Rat tricks dissapper within Bombs that we Throw,
Fame is Immense for those that Hopelessly Now,
Witness the Hellish revenge for Cofronting the Crow,
There is no Chance to Escape,
The Advance Ape in a Trance State,
Hot wire a car and crash through your Mom's Gate,
Enter the mind of the man with a Dark Cape,
Blasting Flames till you look like Charred Stake,
Smelly Shark Bait, My punches make your every Bar Bake,
then make you gather the pieces with a Damn Rake,
The Priest and the Reverent gather to Preach a Sentence,
at enemies Adrift in pain that Seems Endless,
The spirit that came to Feast on your Essence,
Walking over worthless Pieces of Remnants,
Getting paid to slaughter strange Emcees in Attentance,
The outcome wont change Even if you Bring your Defendants,
The head behind Mass Investments,
will have legends of this time Chopped in Segments,
Don't look at me caz we Got no Resentment,
Feuding in dreams we Collapsing the Present,
I am just a Cocky Peasant, Everything I say is Probably Unpleasant,
To the critics that stand behind the Godly Descendant,
This Hide and seek so start Counting you Dummy,
Caz Nothing gonna stop when we Come for the Money,
Defeat you with a spectacular Verse that is Funny,
Open the tabernacle Disperse the Unholy Curse of the Mummy,
Now its time to post a Rhyme that is Sicker,
and see who can slip through the Line Quicker,
Enter the Mind of a Killer, every Line Iller,
When it comes to Life i am the Giver,
Get deep inside like a Knife in your Liver,
Toss your corpse on the Side of the River,
A Murder cold enough to give Wifey the Shivers,
The Brother Dreamer Under Achiever managed to Conquer the Leader,
With lessons like this I am Beyond just a Teacher,
A friend of death like i am Down with the Reaper,
Punish Cheaters and Slice Tongues with a Rusty Cleavers,
Hot enough to give a Ghost a Fever,
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How am I supposed to leave ya?
hanging, just like the rope & ceiling..
rattled just like that broken thesis.
tell me..how will you cope with ether?
thoughts riddled in a broken sequence.
shots fired homey...its open season.
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yo rap aint easy bro im telling ya
you be like rule except you missing the jah
forget ya raps son they childish at most
you burned like a piece of white toast
for real ya crusty ya lines aint edging shit holmes
not gonna even battle cause this shit wasnt close
yo im dope i can spit some hot shit ya know
im like the water in a hotplate it bout to overflow
call me the fountain of youth from here on out
got ya head full a cloud im the best at the grounds
yo bro get ya head right keep writing them texts
no i aint cool wit ya friends i just aint that good at chess
fuck yall if you hating tho for real i aint no joke
you werent finished so i applied another coat
yo plant you like some pot ya carcuss i leave to rot
im just trying to jot got nothing on me ya threads get clogged
yo i see shit differently then a lot of these rappers
the shit i talk about is real im not sharp but keep a dagger
possum on the patrol hunting for his dinner
funny how come life begins in the spring and dies during winter
i question life even if its just some sorta mental exercise
its just patrenizing..i stay pumped and dont mean to saternize
yo i know i might be taking this shit a bit too far right
its like slaves way they escaped the whites by travelling at night
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anyway....


This goes out to those who know how to cypher
this goes out to those who truly are writers...
the fuck happened?
fuck rapping, you about to see some trunk action
subs blasting, a tight rope with no wiggle room
lines that give em white nose & a little tomb...
little whom? I dont like those who came back & think this is cute.....
like...like....

Metaphorical genius talking to God & battling demons
Metaphysical thesis corroborating with a traveling Jesus.
or some shit concerning the darkness in the deepest soul
the pain of a million souls that tends to keep him home.
a bunch of dumb shit that would make the septic nervous.
got me feeling like rubber to another electric current...
i aint feeling yall

dudes that write rhymes like..like...call me cake...
cause Im baked, come layered & could never be fake
check my tiers, tell me who been lying to dude.
short handed, short attention span, short as a bride & groom
what else do they say? you got beef? I got cheese son
when it comes to vegetables, you about to be one...
fuck rap, continue life taking orders at the drive thru
make a decent attempt at those GED finals...
you digging your grave boy...
got me coming out of pocket...this is gameboy...


back to me, this is how the cypher should go
where concepts & ideas have a good home.
not none of this dumb shit
written by a bunch of dumb shits
look at that dumb shit...
above this rhyme....talking about that dumb shit..
what a dumb shit
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how many different forms does it come in?
it morphs every time it absorbs someone like the Borg to become one with
through your speakers you can feel the force that was summoned
conjured up from being bored, it was forged out of nothin
so go ahead and turn it up and let me hear some more of that dumb shit
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stereotype me: and judge me more off assumption,
black guy, white folks know i'm up to somethin
black lives, black folks know what the huntin is
channel 5, morning news, more of that dumb shit
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