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Agreed @the white boy craters
Breathless, I'm very impressed with your verse in thre, quickly becoming a fan of your writing and styles. Just throwing that out there. Good shit.
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Thanks man, hey, are you GenTheGod from rapmusic?
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although i do appreciate it's a new way of doing things, beginning with my ending known is not as beneficial to the writing process as I first expected it would be.
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Job interview in the morning...ugh hate being nervous but it a damn good job
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So it's 2 a.m. I have to be at work by noon. But I have laundry that I really want to do tonight.
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@Frank wtf happened to 64 lines? You got near 100 man that's basically 2 verses bruv
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With that said, that battle is a fucking bear.
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He said 64 lines, I agreed. Look at the deleted posts that's a line agreement wtf. I don't want him dq'd just atleast a semi close line limit...I offered to cut an entire stanza from my verse if he ain't want a line ext but we agreed on 64 an he went 100..that's just not right or I coulda added another 2 stanzas entirely
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If you'd like a chance to add to your verse, you can take it down.
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With that said, brevity is the soul of wit.
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I don't got the time to add to it now with the job interview an work smh fucked up that I'd have to change my verse cuz Frank nearly doubled the line limit he set. I ain't bitched once. Since the start of the season but that shit ain't cool real talk.
Highly disappointing
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I understand the frustration, but don't allow yourself to think that it's going to cost you the battle.
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it's 99 lines dude. chill out
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@Vulgar, I'm ready when you are. I wouldn't mind more time to look over my verse, but if you want to post tonight, I'm game.
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I have barely started. I'm fucked. I almost refuse to extend though.
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Yeah, I've never asked for an extension (though I've used them when opponents have asked).
You're in the championship match now, though! Don't wait until the last possible moment like I did.
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trying not to. just started writing. i might need a bar extension though, if this becomes what i want it to be...
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I hate to remind you, but Mr. J already rejected that.
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Dying...
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Man, them write night pieces are a bitch to decide on already. Hard enough to pick the winner between 2 verses here, let alone 5. Criminitly! I honestly hope there aren't any more good ones today.
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