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Old 04-12-2016, 04:58 PM   #2101
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Hunting for opponents while Exploring the Underworld,While u Covered in make up Glowing like Covergirl,
The Sargent Concurs making these Serpents Uncurl,
The Cosmos Obscured during the Miraculous event and no one Knows How it Occurred,
After the competition this was the verse judges Obviuosly Preffered,
These rhymes are 100% Satisfaction Guaranteed, sick enough to get the whole Faction Quarantined,
Drinking plasma in Mansion with Constantine,Beating emcees like Pounding Tamborine,
I am not real you see I'm am Just a Dream like monster emerging from a Profound Ravine,
A ghost wandering the Coast Unseen, Your punches are softer than Dough and Cream,
You got no flow Like a Closed Cantine,
To many who are lost something Incredebly Threatening,
Constellation of Stars even the Fairies Defending Him,
I appear on the gates riding a Blazing Seraphim, have you Shaking like Gelatin,
You dont have what it takes to stand Face to Face with a Nephilim,
A Feared Paladin fighting in Space like Anakin with the power to levitate a Ship that is Sinking,
Enter the mind and Erase every Lyrics they're Thinking,
The one that made Decapitating a Sport, Auctioned by demons in the Day of Birth,
You Can tell he is a killer from all the Blood Stains on the Shirt,
Throwing roses at the enemy Laid in Dirt, Battling Till the spirit of Hades Comes Forth,
I speak in a Classic Tone, the rhymes resemble bullets from a Sparkling Chrome,
Mangling the Domes of these Flaccid Clone,
You stand there with an Asthmtic Drool, Drowning in Acid Pools,
The Grousest Problematic Sign with Obedience,Or begin Undergoing a Traumatic Experience,
These hos are Deceiving Too busy to Notice the Reason, A World where the Treason Never Goes out of Season,
The one Leading the Lane, walk out of rooms filled with Victims Screaming in Pain,
To battle me you have to be Really Insane, everything said will be embedded Deep in your Vein,
Eventually Sealing your Brain They might never See you the Same,
Your style is just Weak and Profane caz Focusing mainly on just being Mundane...
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Old 04-12-2016, 05:08 PM   #2102
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I like to copy & paste, its almost like joggin in place
everyone duck down, at this price Id be robbin the game
lost in space while my touch light up the town..moonwalking away
poppin off strays, killin rabid dogs while knockin off lames
the most verbose pearl flow is in your presence you girl ho
you gerbil, Mr Slave got you worked up & wrapped in nerves ho
if you a hurdle you caterpillar straddlin the earth ho...
Im a murracle down in the south like IM OVER HURRRR ho
put your head in the toilet & swwwirl, Im outta this worrrld
I thought I done told you that Im too quick as a nuisance
boredom & music turns me into a beast with the inevitable rudeness
turn teachers to students, turn students the thickest of mucus
the quickness got them on a g unit mixtape screamin whooooooooooo kid
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Old 04-13-2016, 03:51 PM   #2103
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Attention Stranger No One, This is the brother of Danger Dolan who is being Trained by no other than the Major Zohan, Goku is my father call me Raging Gohan,
The wicked minister who Drink from Life Elixers will leave your face Needing Massive Fixtures after submerging it on Heated Acid Mixtures,
The Best in the Clash standing Next to the Grass will have your neck Spattered fast then burnt in the Depths to Ash,
Your Text is Trash, You are on top but we are Wondenering how long your Expression will Last,
Unleash venomous Lectures Infecting the Class,
Leave ya physics severed then Disect you with Glass, Explode your imperfect mass just for Inspecting the Blast,
Dont be Scared Aight let me put this Really Clear, I'm Engineered to Fight When you See Me Prepare,
You Need to Beware I can Confiscate your life without Being There,
Make way for the Golden Raging Omen Blazing Opponents in Flaming Ovens,
Where did he come from? No one Knows Exactly, He carve rhymes from an Underground Faculty,
That Paint the skies burgundy paving Road to Anarchy, Cruise through the Ozone Gallantly,Cross my path and end up an Ominous Casualty,
Open the door to Reality You better than me is a statement that can be described as Preposterous Blasphemy,
Just to find out you were Clouded by Vanity, No one can save you from the Emerging Calamity,
You will never see someone Performing moves So Rapidly, Have your entirely Submerged in the Gravity,
I Sit in a Tall Building in the Dark Dreaming, The most twisted Art Wielding Monster Dragging you into the Fog Bleeding,
Slashing you repetedely till you Stop Screaming, Silence your mouth when Baal is Speaking,
I am that Devil on the Back Grinning, Compose to a rebels Heart Beating,
Give you a Mad Beating you Sad Weakling Couldn't win if you were All Cheating,
Morons Bound to the Scene Mourn and Plead during combat with Sodom Seed, Giants emerge to Burn all your Monarchies,
See me on the scene handling biz with a Modern Steez, I need a real battlist who is cursed you are Just a Tease,
Have your ashes disperesed and Crushed Beneath the Southern Seas,
My Soul is above on the Clouds Adrift, The Flows we Spit are cold indeed Causing the whole Globe to Shift,
Let me tell you Whats the Matter, The Godly Father sniping the competition with a Bob Lee Swagger,
The Bomb Blaster Sparker Show Stopper with a thats Flow Darker for Sure Smarter,
Giving a speech to all Young Brothers like the Coach Carther,
I didnt have a rich mother and Father like You, Found peace precticing the Art of the Few,
The Rap Spew from a path so obscure here to Slaughter your Crew,
Slugger its True brain will splatter When the Slugs come Through,
Laugh at the Dopeness being Slapped in your Face looking All out of Place Cracked like a Vase,
I be the commander flying in jets deep in dark space Deploying grenades when Assaulting a Base,
Got tyrants and slave Cleaning and Mapping the Base,
The subtle anti nice here to Break the Competition, Using multiple satelites positioned to triangulate on the Position,
Berate the Competition, beat you on the Wasted of Condition,
Smile at the heat that will Haunt You, While you eat Bizarre foods like you're Andrew,
Swallow back you Pathetic Disses, The shots you thought landed were just Epic Misses,
Not after high maintenance Sexy Bitches Directed by Witches, I will a virgin to this merry existence and give her Many Kisses,
Cook her Plenty Dishes Grant her all the Healthy Wishes,
Simply Spectacular with an Intrinsic Vernacular, Bring beef i Flip it with a Spatula, Sip on blood like a Living Dracula,
Then have a speech that is Popular Imprinted Deep in you Ocular,
I am a pychopatic Rapper addicted to Grotesque Necronomy, Spend time Reconstructing the Colony,
The bars scripted will be Quoted by Tholome, There might never be Another Me,
My mic is a scalpel Encusted Suddenly Borrowing into a Busted Anatomy,
A win against this is impossible you Wasting your time like Studying Astronomy,
Unbeaten by lies that Punish you Thoroughly, I can Teach you how to Thrive in a Demolished Economy...
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Knee deep in a bleeding sea of grief as I'm beating these emcees
Defeating them with steeze
They flee like a weak receding disease pleading to be free
I'm secreting this flow until they begin to believe
I'm in this for the win, not for the friends I'd receive
I squeeze this pen and blend in the recipe to succeed
Invest in me and you'll see i'm a blessing to the beat
I'm addressing my degree of elite by impressing who i meet
Ode to my crew, yeah the whole fleet is in view
Running the streets and constantly makin the news
But don't be mistaken this for some ruse
We'll stand our ground and put a stake in it too
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Old 04-13-2016, 06:13 PM   #2105
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This is like Saw to me, want to play a game? take a shot or leave
any style is a like a pawn to me, I write so ill, so awesomely..
my right so skilled, there no wrong to me, but for the sake of mockery...
I go off, offn MCs, writers, rappers often...see the robbery?

My pen causin embarrassments
My keyboards lost in appearances
My ideas locked in the mysterious
I lay out the coffins for the inferior
they remotes lost in the interior...

but Im universal, touching on anything they brought
did everything they thought, simplicity is way off...
I could take time off & they couldnt catch up with my drops
with every line drawn on a blank piece, poppin off side arms
lazy boy signed off, greasy fingered bart simpson my god...

trickery is for kids & I have no sympathy to give
imagery equipped with flow the spigot could get
kicking it to pricks til they see what the differences is...
intimate shit, get the tip? you so limited bitch.
dividends split just as the thighs do when Im visitin cribs..

tossin drawers to hampers, you thought it was pampers
but Im too awesome & dapper, you get lost in the grammar
she fake it, I body the actor, act stressed prolly the standard
she dirty we give props to Diana & Im tossing cadavers...
you idolizing Pac & The Answer like you in high school
prolly listen to Young Joc & answer to the nickname typhoon
whoever you blow gets wet over your simplistic stability
simplistic ability Im adding & dividing till arithmetic is killin me
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Old 04-13-2016, 07:05 PM   #2106
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Yo Mr. J, I seen your word to assemble...
So lemme bring a verse to make these virgins all tremble
I bring the hurt with utensils. perfect with pencils
Rhymes so sick they need a surgeon general warning
Better yet, a surgeon in general..
So aim your pitchforks and torches at the monster
Bunch of followers, bring those sheep all to my slaughter
You a robot, dawg, they should call you Goddard...
My bars are so heavy they still looking for a spotter
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Old 04-13-2016, 07:39 PM   #2107
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You know me, holding the contraband with a conch in hand
I been beating up these pussies so much their shells are soft & damp
similar to the Loch Ness man, only a few lucky enough to spot this mass
she like stand up men then I shatner n took off like rocket man
their squad similar to the partridge fam, roadside attractions....damn
me? Im the type to billboards while my face stay with em while they racing by
thats why the hating right? just ask em what my dust is tasting like...
theyd say its fine because they couldnt keep up with the pace I ride...
the pace I write...is similar to what you put on toast & paste it right...
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Old 04-14-2016, 02:47 AM   #2108
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My thoughts melt into a puddle Im muddled
I struggle to find the meaning behind the hustle
a big fuck you to those who are lookin for trouble
I love you & hate you, but Id hate to become you
quick to scuffle, shots blast & easily outrun you
what do the signs lead to when you bleed blue
I bleed red & make a deal just to see the equal
your thoughts leak through a bandana to greet you
I see you, with your judgmental ass on a steed who...
rides in the sweet blue sky...me I wear a cheap suit
cheap shoes, no ties needed, in the ground I leave you
the modern day evils, raise flags for the street use
align to these dudes who claim theyd never leave you
what a silly predicament that lacks sentiment...
you brother to many men but that also implements..
blood in, blood out, no need to be a mexican.
your next to kin could be in the hole you end up in
thats what you get for meddlin with that metal &...
riding them blocks, backseat pop down, hiding em glocks
when they ride through they always timing them shots
grinding in spots with undercovers who are silent or not
who cares...you tying them knots & buying them lots...
got your grandmother on the northside right in the shops
purchasing new furniture while you high off them rocks
whether you provided or not you still wind up in a box
ready to pop like Jack, slipping of shots of cognac...
BLAT...
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Old 04-14-2016, 09:44 AM   #2109
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..I know a guy who's actually pretty good at remodeling furniture and material,
Hook you up with his number -he can help you be ethereal,
Put that bowl down -stop eating all that cereal -your spelling is hysterical
I don't believe in miracles.
I'm an orator
like Pericles,
If you got the power -expect from me the sword of Damocles,
these damn emcees,
need edit-ing. or manag ing,
you're panicking -my 'lil prince -you can't be king!
even though i stabbed your dad
-&shot the queen,
i like to pat -myself on the back, becuz i key
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sorry i Haven't been Voting,
consider my vote killing a beat with your shit, or later on -Indirectly Quoting,
ileave your stainedglass windows Soapy,
u r incredibly Foul Mouthed,
u were a beast but your Fowl Now,
you had game -but i found out, you fouled out...
didju plan-to-be-Dark?
my Damaging Bars are from another Planet like Mars,
a Savage like Lars, ripping your brains apart like Cabbage Shards,
treating your paranoias 'n sobrieties as a game, like Cards,
i find my own tempo to march, so don't expect my text to be sharp
this April i've been downing a lot of Dayquil
(it)helps wth my sickness -helps me stay chill
plus it's delicious
enough about medicine.
enough about penmanship.
enough about foodstuffs like Venison.
i've got the remedy -it's a New rug &bowling pins,
bt u were 2 dumb ta notice it.

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Old 04-14-2016, 02:09 PM   #2111
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straight out the cobra spit, kicking it with dojo kids
looking for another broad I can watch watchmojo with
Im over it. I like my coffee with a nice mocha twist
they rhyme to look good, I rhyme for the shits & giggles
I flip a little & make money off a solid 16, pissed a little?
nah they pissed a lot, outshine their art with this shit I scribble
I bibble & babble, tittle & tattle with the riddles from scrabble
if them bitches battle it must be for the scrips & scraps dude
this shit is bath too a man riding rapids come pick a paddle
I was flipping Matthews to revelations while I was speculating
twin tower escalating, put them tears in the pad...quit menstruating
if I played low key theyd see me blowing my horn like Jim Carrey
with the brim barely covering my eyes, get your gist buried
get your wits carried in a urn then watch em burn its absurd
if we went word for word I switched up each line from the 23rd
of January...cross your heart with holy water its unsanitary
Im bored off my rocker still but now Im listening to instrumentals
its detrimental...nah fuck that, down to the pits I send you
with a pen & pencil to etch a sentimental letter bout stress...
& rentals.........lmao....
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Old 04-15-2016, 09:52 PM   #2112
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If you are Dark then I'm Sunny in between all the corruption you created Wrapped like a Mummy,
Everytime you talk about family matter you Sound like a Dummy, Keep bringing whack raps and I'll Chopp of your Thummy,
Serve your Head in a Platter with a side of Soft Maccaroni and do it All for the Money,
The people you put in charge of the Site are all Baited, Their Light is all Faded but dont wonder away caz we Slightly Related,
I'm the Boldest Rapper, Pretentious Mocker with a Flow that is Darker, was told you a Slacker with nothing Precious to Offer,
and that makes me mad enough to Drive over you with a Stolen Tractor till your Bones are Fractured,
Molded by the Omnipotent Father comparing me to you is like Comparing some Golden to Copper,
They were Born to end up Shook and Sell Out mad at me caz I Took Next Route,
If we get even the slightest amount or Smell of Doubt,
We will take to the jungle to face a Ferocious bear that will Snap your Neck like a Trout,
Complling Thoughts from a Hellish Scout throwing punches that leave them with a Swelled Mouth,
Got to meet my True Creator,The Dudes a Major, His teaching in my mind Disperse Through like Vapor,
In battles we Entomb a Hater Doomed for Failure, Fold a Sly Flamer in Two like Light Paper,
Throw from the roof of a Sky Scraper, then Disected in parts with a Bright Lazer,
Read it Believe it, Dream it Achieve it, Hate the true me but Keep it a Secret,
Under Fear you crumble Scared to Rumble but Master said the better way to Remain is Humble,
Lets Start a Rhyme the moon and the Stars are Mine, The Saddest Mime with the Grandest Mind behind the Darkest of Crime,
Altering the world by releasing the Sands of Time, Negativity is all we offer if you don't wanna Bargain then Fine,
The Captain Lurking Behind Harnessin the Force an Shine will eat then take him down with Glasses of Wine,
Something Mad and Benigh throwing Bars at your spine, Commence a Battle with Every Artist you Sign,
I am Not like the Rest Spar with the Best,Haunting the Rest Flaunting a Vest, The Shots I Eject will put a Crack in your Chest,
Go Bezerk in Battles with flamethrowers Scorching Cattle, Pound you like Gavel make you hang around twisted like Portrait that Dangles
From a Rotten Wall, I Stash and dismember bodies in a Forgotten Stall,You Standing Tall but the attacks you spawn are softer than a Cotton Ball,
The Ruler with a Scepter slash Impure spectre Feuding with Inspectors, post raps So advance practically Schooling the Professor,
Bathing in Nectar Shooting from all Sectors,
You vote against me in all battles but I never Made you the Elector,
Switch to Meditating mode like Buddha in a Sacred Temple, Spitting Rap so cold they cause Lucif ef to Tremble,
A Snake like the Devil Break you like a Pebble, Dreaming pretenders unable to walk through the Gates of this Level,
My Raging Temper is what causes the earth to Quake and Tremble,
The punisher who made a deal with Invincible Satan, Now harnessing knowledge from Invisible Aliens,
Ignited flows make you Sizzled with Radiance, Bringing the Mayhem in Brig where i Lay Them,
Making spells with the Witches of Salem, Reighning in hell under Steady Surveillance,
My flow is laced with endless traces of Pathogenic Agents, That leave souls in the matrix shaking like Epileptic Patients,
A gorgon rupturing and Wrecking Skulls with the Deadliest Blows Till they are Dented With Holes,
My mind is a dungeon for Lamenting Souls, When Venting it Grows,
Have you Meddling Crows beaten to death with a Scepter that Glows...
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It's those deceptive posers I don't connect with
The closer they get, I wreck them with the flexes
so how much you bet that they won't attempt to test this?
I'm established, set in stone, ready to ravage
any vet or noobie that come through gets damaged
They hungry for success but I famish the text
corrupt the pest's and abduct the luck they get
turn it to my advantage and destruct their rep
utation, sign up, then earn your resignation...
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Old 04-16-2016, 05:03 PM   #2114
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One punchline will send you to space destinations
Ill knock out the ring of Saturn & send you through Uranus
I handle the fakest like a jeweler, its Rick the ruler
youll black out your cerebrum cortex & lose your medulla
I get stoned like Medusa, lyrical equation abuser...
Im such a nuisance I get hated on for not being like you losers
if you play funny with the unfunny or try to one up me...
that green shroom must have put in a green room you dummy
without adding particulars I substitute the benefactors
they dont understand what I equate until they end in answers...
that I sent em after get your thoughts blown in a sense of matter
the questions shatter Im better when enraptured in clear...sense...or laughter
wtf...Im bending rappers & popping out their chocolate filling
if they get pissed about it I brush em off, like Id get caught in feelings
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Your hearts appealing...but that dont mean much
they wont see us no matter what they gon dream up
Im star concealing...I shot the sheriff with green puffs
bullets in each snub, I aint quitting til I spit each one
why trip, Im a beast son, better start with squealing
a piece of peace pieced up...peace pipe hard chiefing..
the way I leave you seized up, Ill leave your arc creaking
if they calling for Jesus, you know they arent leaving...
no dove, no love, no matter what you aint touching land
no dust, no trust, homey batter up homerunning fans
catch up, end the series when the boy steering the boat
if they listen I find it eerie that they here being exposed
ya boys cheering alone standing by the mirror to boast
Im in a leer or boat, letting flow carry me, beer on the coast
tears in the river, dreams in a lake, the weirdest to date
clearness debate, no need to act like we need to,...




wait....what...lol
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Its a slippery slope but its giving me hope...
as we decline I put it all on divinity...growth?
is in the eye of the beholder, time for closure
sit back, the gifts are hidden in the mind of Oprah
tune in, lose it once you lasso the antennae
life is mad random when the skies turn Atlantis
Im sinking into a fresh patch of dead grass
minor setbacks in a death wish, my head scratch
my lead itch, meet me on the page you bad bitch
pinch her if she a doberman especially if she mastiff
you wont find anyone doper man even if Im mad stiff
blowing chronic into a rain cloud & other wack shit
the world is my bowling ball, hit the lane twinkle toes
matches strike, perfect game without a single rose...
encores cause angor like...what you throw the game for?
I make these fruits loop & close that same door...
we mage or, my wizardry came with a voodoo doll
I take it apart & piece it together & swoop through, God.
Used to send messages on templates written in Latin
just blue myself outta depression its Dr Manhattan...
holding a clip board with a strained back carrying Atlas
carrying the world & the story arc that they had backwards
my dreams meet in the same room of interrogations
make sure the flow hits the bathroom & its irrigated...
I hear debates, if one outdoes the other its obvious my brother
we all form an indescribable notion & fall underneath one another...
what the...
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Old 04-17-2016, 06:09 PM   #2117
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It's funny that you keep posting in this thread
I'm happy with everyone ive met
Like a good luck charm I'm a four leaf clover
More discovered than Darwin you stay lost on corners
Beg your pardon like you sneezed
Since it was an indicated by recognizing disease
Don't ever say I ain't ill enough
I'm like sports illustrated inside stuff
Gonna fill the clip in the magazine
Or fill you with unleaded gasoline
I had to reread half your verse before it was understood
Couldn't put it down like a good book
Driving twenty five in a thirty zone
Except couldn't make it round all the cones
Someone called home repair
Tossed the west side while staying on the air
Pick out my description
I'm outlandish aint need predictions
She said she wanted more
What you love when I treat u abhore
Dope wordplay and pers nameplay
Any last remarks you been prolonged like astray
Some say you give it away
Living today for those I feel responsible
I read you up and down like a newspaper article
Your almost home she spoke again
I ripped the ligament and at once the vision put to its end
Production wheels start turning
You only got degrees because my lines blurred kid
What a waste to engage within its amazement
Put you in the past the fame of its containment
In languages and words that were ancient
Some fifth course of arraungements
I've gotta stop ending this piece
It's like the Swiss cheese or the temples in Greece
I see it coming soon she whispered
make room for others
I says okay dokey and that was for my homie
Call your concrete argument illustrious like hair that was curly

She shouted....your finisher could have been better
Said you wouldn't mind but pressure kept me under the wheather
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My flow unlimited
come & get it
get it up in a minute
spending about an hour
pussy is gettin devoured
you salty or sour?
Kim said pussy is power
who put you pussies in power?
you must be sniffin powder
playing the debbie downer
we dont give a fuck about cha
this is for the haters
for those chasing their paper
my life built off rhyming capers
get fucking real player...
I run the game.
the one you claim
give up the chase
we just touching base
me...of my high horse...
what the hay......
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I'm still doing this precisely
You can't jailrock and I ain't talking Presley
Say you can kick a tune
But don't control the tides like the moon
Think u cypher but never quoting bars
I'm a pool shark a man who played his last card
I'm half punk garage style flows
My band keeps u sucked in like undertoe
Omgoshgollygee making prophecies but I've travelled with steez
And just like the rings in a tree I'm giving age a breeze
Two pods but aint no seeds
If u an army it still ain't at peace
Ya mind beckons you
Thought oh how to do and anywho
I've said too much
Cut in half like a Dutch
A magician who has you under a spell
Drop a bucket on you here's for wishing well
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