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First few lines, dope. Next few lines, meh. Last few lines were really good. I like how you rhymed in eighteenth notes (stupid Netcees doesn't care rabble rabble this muzzle is clamping down on my urethra rabble rabble) and I also liked how you rhymed, randomly with rhymes in your rhymes, first few lines and also the middle few lines also. [Tangential reference to subject matter here]
Not very good deriving some quick calculus beep hoop limit integral mean value theorem Calculus 1a on my resume slooop beepity honk SIKE NIGGER 3/10 YOU JUST GOT MUZZLED YOU HOOPTY TROUNCER HEUEHEUEHEHEHEEH @Bags
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10-04-2014, 01:31 PM
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entire legacy is for jest killed me
Split's on point itt
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10-04-2014, 01:55 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Also I'm just about done with this hellish work week and finally will get around to returning the favor for those who voted on the Short-Verse semifinals.
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10-04-2014, 01:57 PM
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Sometimes when I write drunk I think about why I'm writing drunk and think to myself 'Stop' but I don't because I think what I'm writing is The Great American Text Verse but then I wake up and I'm like 'wtf el dancake you might, legitimately, be mentally retarded' and then I delete the verse and drink some coffee and play chess then realize 'who cares if you're mentally retarded, dancakebro, it's just a netcees' and I shrug and do some chores around the apartment then I go lift because I'm letting myself go because I drink and sometimes when I drink I write and I think about
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10-04-2014, 04:55 PM
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Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
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Lmao. Awesome. Hey bro's, first time in the league, if i signed up for this league am i automatically entered in for all of the weeks unless i sign out? Or do i have to sign up again for each week? @Certain
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10-04-2014, 04:58 PM
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10-04-2014, 03:17 PM
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whats good writers?
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10-04-2014, 03:26 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 387
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Votes on the short verse finals would be appreciated friends
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10-04-2014, 03:35 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: NJ
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Whatsup withat bacon fucking eggs been cooked
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10-04-2014, 06:08 PM
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whoever has been repping Muzzl3: if given the chance, I will rape you
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10-04-2014, 06:18 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: Beer Goggles
Posts: 4,834
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10-04-2014, 06:45 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
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- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
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- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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@Certain if i sign up this week can u match me up wit myk wreke?
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10-04-2014, 06:48 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
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10-04-2014, 06:49 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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nah eye aint perzonal fan club but wut if i was??
wud dat be weird? ur not better at bb at anything and bb tries 2 suk dats how bad u r wen i try to suck my writing still outdoes urs how does it feel to suk that bad i cant even try to be bad. my writing still turns out ok u went awol after ur aowl rape dats y i bring it up u disappear like a lil bb maybe u want to adopt dis name lmao. dats why u want me 2 abandon rite? cause u suck ass? i actualy dare u 2 rite something good if i do or dont sign in this week plz i dare u.
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599682 |
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10-04-2014, 07:15 PM
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AWOL beef, lol
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10-04-2014, 07:24 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
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Can I be in the PancakeBrah fan club?
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10-04-2014, 08:49 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 10,026
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I'm drunk. Pretty.
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10-04-2014, 08:49 PM
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Posts: 12,480
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@themuzzle3
OVERALL OVERALL OVERALL
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