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Old 04-25-2013, 11:00 AM   #181
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Fucking martyrs, the lot of you. Common breed, stay rhymin open source.
Riding tsunamis kamikaze style in friendly gates like some kinda Trojan horse.
Life's not a bitch, stupid or spending your trust with other suitors,
She's a beautiful bride, beat, brushed aside loving every lie ya pourin,
Waiting in the dark for you to batter through that door.
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Old 04-26-2013, 03:34 AM   #182
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i asked the open forum of human kind to believe
and they opened doors of hell exposing their beliefs
asking truth to tell a lie in hope to stay between
the open space left between hope when leaving the scene
it's hard to know what's real and fake when real mistakes take life
like staring at severed veins in your wrists wielding a knife
i couldn't tell the world how to hold on to the threads of reality
but i guarantee the judge's dredd taking hold of falicies..
resting now in piece.. between a million layers of know how and thieves
we can try and still believe it's all true, but then again we all do
it's fall proof. this world we live in where give all
just to watch others step on our face at the moment we fall
will dissolves.. Earth still revolves.. quill's dissolve resolution
but the one's that still live realize restitutions paid by slaves
and we live in the pollution of a society that kills the end of days
will be engraved inside the tomb of a catacomb that's composed
on the testament of my next of kin will control
only my last requests, seeing my last dying breath as my last regret
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Old 04-27-2013, 12:43 AM   #183
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Old 04-27-2013, 04:53 AM   #184
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I'm a Natural with the most masterful and radical
Rhymes. I flaunt my attributes to really capture your
minds. I got a vicious Attitude call me destined to
Thrive. I got the stature to have you meet your
demise. I'm spitten faster with friction causing heat
when i grind. My swags at peak and baggin geeks not
makin a dime. I'm savage see, rap's in my anatomy, I'm
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Old 04-28-2013, 09:45 PM   #185
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It's spunk when i rhyme..constipated. stuck in shits creek. population..
swollen members head and hands probing - constant racing..
Or racism. race is him. race is me.
delaying fate - days parade prayers: rest in peace
the left’s connected with details, on the right an angel roam
they say the devil’s in the “d...” - well you know how that saying goes
planes exploded pressure cooked - bastard in every sense
Plastered on CNN. Gathering best of friends
matters are tragic they dilly dally with evidence
Sadness. Impending death. Battle in Mass is set
fragile motive spanned explosives tampering dividends
dashing the distance when...a crash. like a sudden swept
of glasses pressing deep gashes inflicted on flesh
capturing an event so tragic as millions wept
so we stand and reflect holding candles in vigilance
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Old 04-29-2013, 10:29 AM   #186
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I'm keen on your faults, a few white lines from me will have detectives kneeling on chalk
I'll ride past blasting Grandmaster and Melle Mel just to open up your wounds and fill em with salt keep the 9 iron in the caddy for those teeing me off I'm happy gilmore, happy to kill more, you feeling me boss? I'd slap puppy water outta yah baby soft ass on a whim brother, the flows mean but I'm still nicer than you're average than yah great grandma's kids mother, you aint built for the tussel, I'll kill you with knuckles, gahead and work on yah muscles, I role around with real muscle
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Old 04-29-2013, 01:45 PM   #187
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Lyrically adequate or maybe just average
facing accidents and fuck ups on a regular
madness..keeps my muse lookin' to pressure
or...even push me passed what just happened
so I keep a stove top abyss..in a plastic bin
acid to break down nutrients OH what an accident
I'm bored off my rocker and I'm back again
looking for pets, children, even homeless africans
the body count is based on what happens
I don't even care now..it's funny what's considered rappin
MC'n what have you...
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Old 05-01-2013, 11:25 AM   #188
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you say you wit it lady, but baby, dont play me
you doin 180's claimin its ur version of waiting
worst tasting sensation ive ever had in my mouth
every time i say your name its cuz im spittin u out
you can sit there and pout, keep playin me boo
bout to get me them digits of every bitch in ur group
did i mention u cant beat me, i invented this game
jordan, brantley, pimpin, we all one in the same
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Old 05-01-2013, 04:25 PM   #189
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I got a few screws loose in my spruce goose
laughing, because I'm literally a riot in a zoot suit
far from what your used to, so this is new News
broadcasted from cavity fillings knocked out your loose tooth
satellites, falling quicker than a shooting star
I'm quick to toss you under it than a moving car...
like I really care who you are...
make money yea thats cute...
win battles? yea that is too..
I'm bored again...tell me...who you are
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Old 05-01-2013, 07:25 PM   #190
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On a scooter lookin out for the loot... my raw ruler

made your mothers cooter looser than Anderson Coopers pooper.
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Old 05-01-2013, 07:28 PM   #191
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I'm the most gifted, lifted off wisdom
twisted off image, in a pissed off dimension
shifting into a different position..slipping...
dipping off in a whip with plates unlisted...
who am I kidding...
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Old 05-03-2013, 11:24 AM   #192
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A lost cause in a sea of depression, i stop and pause for a minute..
pray to god for forgiveness as im caught in a siege of aggression.
whats the use of repentance if in the end you choose it again?
my souls draught in a black abyss, staring up amidst a devilish grin
illusions, staring through a tubular lense; see a future looming in sin
where did this confusion begins? why does it hurt so bad, when will it end?
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Old 05-04-2013, 12:37 PM   #193
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should be rolling a may bach for how I turn a phrase
need to get this fire out my hand before it burns away
don't matter what I write down, the burden stays
and germinates around the pen like a swirl of flames
muhfuckas
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Old 05-04-2013, 02:10 PM   #194
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a swirl of flames can be extinguished in essence
but a light shines bright from mights mere presence
i try to right the wrongs when i write this sentence
still the stained they remain chained from sacramental penance
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Old 05-04-2013, 11:46 PM   #195
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perfectly wasted. the hyperbole makes it.
say three words I scraped from bottom the waste basin,
stay crossed. faded. dropped, latent in this conscious state,
the acrostic face/ constellated occident maze I've been lost in as of late,
Boston in basements honestly a different city-
quantum entanglement, product of pity- say it ain't so stupid
fatal- wait dodging this whale real quickly like KO Cupid
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Old 05-04-2013, 11:53 PM   #196
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It's funny....




I show a pearl smile, drive the world wild
see you stroll up like you stole ya girls style
s'all good though, keep it in your circle jerk
covered in purple urkle, ash on my purple shirt
I put my words to work, but your bars to shame
let my speech alone show...that you're all the same
in a game that's hard to play with styles hard to name
this whole thing is a Nintendo cartridge maaaaaan...
it's been a long ass time since we parted ways..
so what else do I gotta say..hold up..hold up...
stop me if you heard this one before.......
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Now you lay you down to sleep tucked so snugly under sheets
Hiding from the black of night and all things that crawl & creep
Wiping beads of sweat away from the stench of deaths decay
Creepy demon at your feet you better not move to take a peep
This is evil creatures in the major league waiting to invade indeed
This is hades deep coming straight from hell to take your soul
Strangest behavior mode when you are taken over though
Satin comes to choke your throat and make you a human slave
He'll make you pay if you don't do things just his way right away
Annihilate sin is good in his book he will smile when he looks
violent style is a plus fight and get wild thats the stuff he like
Cuss and fuck the feeble people who are blind in the behind
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I take a solo shot of bourbon and breathe
and experience the lift off of birds in the trees.
Nerves are at ease, the perfect release,
it fucks with my lifting stats,
but sometimes a Cake deserves to be free.
Swerve to the beat of the Black Keys when I leave
for Dorritos Tacos, I'll be taking three for the fee.
And yes sir, extra hot sauce sleeves, if you please.
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It steam when I pee. I sting like a bee - Pelican beak.
I arrange the letters to read - Alphabet soup - Elementary steez.
I beat a pussy for looking dikish. Ceaser hair cut. She like the violence.
I told her goodnight and put her phone on silent vibrance like a typist.
I'm short yellow school bus with the windows rolled up. In a gold tux.
Eating doughnuts with robust hoes son; hoco pocus blow this nose hun
I'm so dumb I don't even know dun I'm gone run or fall flat on my face.
I'm all that and a case of cognac and a eight of marbs - splat yack ehh erase
paste some new shit - making music when I press the keyboard
i hear the keynotes
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FUCK YOUR ADOLESCENCE IN A MATTER OF SECONDS I'LL GRAB THE WESSON WITH MY ADDED AGGRESSION I'LL LEAVE YOU FRACTURED, BREATHLESS
THE FAGGOTS IN QUESTION ARE PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE WHO WOULD NEVA BE GRABBIN THE WEAPON THEY B BOYZ SO THEY GET TO STEPPIN
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