Week 8 - Chat and Predictions - Page 10

ThisisDAM · 11-13-2013, 07:46 PM

Dying is the leading cause of death. Be careful.

Inno · 11-13-2013, 07:46 PM

I love road rage.

Certain · 11-13-2013, 08:51 PM

Have any of you had Peruvian chicken? It's the best.

Just Write · 11-14-2013, 02:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Have any of you had Peruvian chicken? It's the best.

I can't spell it but there is this peruvian dish called lomo sen tathos or something like that. Bomb as fuck

PancakeBrah · 11-13-2013, 08:56 PM

This week's chat topic > the others.

No, Certain, I have not.

PancakeBrah · 11-13-2013, 09:00 PM

My boss had the audacity to question my grammar in a report today. He's a buffoon. He said some sentence didn't make sense grammatically. I curtly said it does. Awkwardness ensued.

Certain · 11-13-2013, 09:03 PM

It's like a significantly improved version of regular rotisserie chicken. It's pretty much the only way I eat chicken now.

King Ra. · 11-13-2013, 09:05 PM

The fuck is up niggas?

Mike Wrecka · 11-13-2013, 09:30 PM

im starting to think I need to buy this hat.

King Ra. · 11-13-2013, 09:32 PM

Yes. Do it. Because I say so.

Inno · 11-13-2013, 09:48 PM

Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on
My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week.

I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty.

Thank you.

Certain · 11-13-2013, 09:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on
My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week.

I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty.

Thank you.

Isn't that called voting?

Pent uP · 11-13-2013, 10:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Isn't that called voting?

i lold

ThisisDAM · 11-13-2013, 10:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on
My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week.

I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty.

Thank you.

Thesaurus.com/sucks

Split · 11-14-2013, 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on
My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week.

I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty.

Thank you.

you NEED stronger multis, mechanics, schemes...

Your style is often described as "poetic". This is true. However, the subliminal meaning behind this is that your style cannot be described as 'topical'. Oftentimes you rhyme a single syllable or heavily justify your rhymes with slants.... this is bad practice

quite frankly, you are a better writer than me. that is why you champed the RSTL or whatever it was called, and I did not.

however, us Netcees voters are obsessed with the idea of stylistic flair. If you cannot
a) give your verse an authorial voice
b) rhyme (heavily, and perfectly,for multiple syllables)
c) give your verse a unique and distinct take on the topic

Then you won't champ the league.

SRS.

Inno · 11-14-2013, 08:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Split Eight

you NEED stronger multis, mechanics, schemes...

Your style is often described as "poetic". This is true. However, the subliminal meaning behind this is that your style cannot be described as 'topical'. Oftentimes you rhyme a single syllable or heavily justify your rhymes with slants.... this is bad practice

quite frankly, you are a better writer than me. that is why you champed the RSTL or whatever it was called, and I did not.

however, us Netcees voters are obsessed with the idea of stylistic flair. If you cannot
a) give your verse an authorial voice
b) rhyme (heavily, and perfectly,for multiple syllables)
c) give your verse a unique and distinct take on the topic

Then you won't champ the league.

SRS.

Thank you good sir. Appreciate the honesty.

Same with you @Certain

YDK · 11-13-2013, 10:54 PM

Im in training for my job still an wasn't pointing out grammatical errors an acronym fails all day, they didn't like that I pointed out that electronic bank transfer is not abbreviated to ebp smh idiots.
On the entertaining side, I set up a fake email address on break an sent a pic of my balls to everybody in class...idk waiting to get fired now. The percs made me do it

Certain · 11-13-2013, 11:34 PM

I miss my laptop. Trying to write on my work laptop sucks. It's a narrower setup and the keys aren't as comfortably laid out.

I'm starting to think Frank spilled water on my laptop.

Certain · 11-14-2013, 12:21 AM

Innovator, what you need to do is start focusing more on the meaning of every word in that order. Not the intended meaning but the meaning that readers are going to pick up. You struggle with writing clearly.

Split · 11-14-2013, 12:27 AM

Certain is wrong

11-13-2013, 07:46 PM	#1
ThisisDAM Significance over Purpose Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: nYc Posts: 141 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 38	Dying is the leading cause of death. Be careful. __________________ Twitter - @ThisisDAM

11-13-2013, 08:51 PM	#3
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Have any of you had Peruvian chicken? It's the best. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-13-2013, 08:56 PM	#5
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	This week's chat topic > the others. No, Certain, I have not. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

11-13-2013, 09:00 PM	#6
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	My boss had the audacity to question my grammar in a report today. He's a buffoon. He said some sentence didn't make sense grammatically. I curtly said it does. Awkwardness ensued. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

11-13-2013, 09:03 PM	#7
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	It's like a significantly improved version of regular rotisserie chicken. It's pretty much the only way I eat chicken now. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-13-2013, 07:46 PM	#2
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	I love road rage.

11-13-2013, 09:05 PM	#8
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	The fuck is up niggas?

11-13-2013, 09:30 PM	#9
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	im starting to think I need to buy this hat. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

11-13-2013, 09:32 PM	#10
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Yes. Do it. Because I say so.

11-13-2013, 09:48 PM	#11
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Can some one or more than one give me an honest critic on My writing. Like a quick analysis of what present each week. I would appreciate all 100% blunt honesty. Thank you.

11-13-2013, 10:54 PM	#17
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Im in training for my job still an wasn't pointing out grammatical errors an acronym fails all day, they didn't like that I pointed out that electronic bank transfer is not abbreviated to ebp smh idiots. On the entertaining side, I set up a fake email address on break an sent a pic of my balls to everybody in class...idk waiting to get fired now. The percs made me do it __________________

11-13-2013, 11:34 PM	#18
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I miss my laptop. Trying to write on my work laptop sucks. It's a narrower setup and the keys aren't as comfortably laid out. I'm starting to think Frank spilled water on my laptop. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-14-2013, 12:21 AM	#19
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Innovator, what you need to do is start focusing more on the meaning of every word in that order. Not the intended meaning but the meaning that readers are going to pick up. You struggle with writing clearly. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-14-2013, 12:27 AM	#20
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Certain is wrong __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com