06-15-2013, 11:26 PM | #61 |
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theres that superior wit we all are clearly afraid of because we can't match
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06-15-2013, 11:28 PM | #62 |
official hypedaddy.
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sorry i didn't realize every post had to be text based. ur virginity is astounding
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06-15-2013, 11:30 PM | #63 |
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06-20-2013, 06:35 PM | #64 |
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Tyson an my battle's ready for votes
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06-27-2013, 12:28 AM | #65 |
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So much estrogen in here.
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06-27-2013, 01:37 AM | #66 |
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Word.. But yo, where does that avatar of yours come from? Shit's dope af. Tell me it's based on a show/movie or somefin'.
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07-07-2013, 09:40 PM | #67 |
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@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon
Topic line max 20 due Wednesday the 10th inbox your verses then I'll create a clean thread with numbered verses: v1, v2, v3 anonymously. understood ? cool.
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07-07-2013, 09:44 PM | #68 |
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Word alrigt
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07-09-2013, 04:16 PM | #69 |
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yo @Animosi T
you aren't bad but you're basically doing longbar which went out of style on any good text site awhile back. the only thing you didn't do too well was wording. think of each bar as a joke, setup and punchline, overwording it will make it less effective. hang around, there should be another 101 thread soon or if not i'm adding more assignments to the nameplays one to give you guys something to work on. |
07-09-2013, 09:25 PM | #70 | |
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07-09-2013, 09:49 PM | #71 | |
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07-09-2013, 09:53 PM | #72 | |
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07-09-2013, 10:00 PM | #73 |
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not at all dude, always happy to help. i know vinny's good but most of RR's top guys couldn't hang very easily tbh. most of the vets here are old longbar heads who made the switch too.
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07-09-2013, 10:01 PM | #74 |
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Shiiiit, that would be abandoning everything I've been thought. I see what you mean, I just don't know how i'd write a punch in fewer words. I like to use personals, so the bars always end up long to fit everything lol.
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07-09-2013, 10:07 PM | #75 |
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its easier than you think, if you want to. i'll shoot you some feeback on your verse in a pm when i get home.
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07-09-2013, 10:11 PM | #76 |
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07-09-2013, 10:37 PM | #77 |
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07-09-2013, 10:40 PM | #78 |
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@Coup and @Rawn MacDon I I hadn't stumbled in this thread I would have never known the topic lol I didn't receive a notification for some odd reason but I'll wrIte now and have it sent you to coup in the AM
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07-10-2013, 06:23 AM | #80 |
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