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04-30-2023, 09:45 PM | #1 |
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Week 3: Blue Bayou (2-0) vs. Diablo (2-0) - DIABLO WINS VIA DQ
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @Blue Bayou @Diablo |
05-01-2023, 02:43 AM | #2 |
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Sup, Jetson Maid?
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05-01-2023, 10:37 AM | #3 |
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Nice of you to flip my put on a clinic and dark passenger concepts
What are we thinking?
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05-02-2023, 12:58 PM | #4 | ||
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lmao can’t believe that this faggot bit just to seal the Dynamicz win this moron a legend? rhetorical question - bitch u shouldn’t have needed to Answer it You have a kid too, teaching ‘em bitings acceptable makes you a horrible dad ur kid lifts arms to be picked up. bitch if I lift arms, his 1st birthday gon be his last NBL plus toddler stress as well? bruh, you must to be shattered all the crying, wailing and sleepless nights. & that’s just every time you lose when it matters Fuck you and your faggot son. Blue Da 4’9” truly a loser with you parenting takes a back seat cuz ur so short your wife sits you in the booster |
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05-02-2023, 03:23 PM | #5 | ||
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Lars Lars Lars.....
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claim you don’t flip my shit, but yet again my sick flows get mimicked the only Bigger Stretch is the Limo you had to rent just to fit those chicks in it keep my concepts out your verse next time you write a wack key Play off these Bars again, you’re Catching Hands after the Flip like a Trapeze & take your ass to the dentist bro your molars are fried they’re coated in slime. Tartarus so bad Hades himself keeled over and died this Brit has got NO hands so a fist-fight is barely a thrill if i told em "put your Dukes up", he'd post pictures of Harry and Will
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05-02-2023, 07:57 PM | #6 |
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Diab
Dope opener Lift arms had potential but it needed far different wording & another tie-in imo Next misdirection fell flat. Error in the setup didnt help Closer is ok. Seen the idea done a handful of x Blue Forgot a 'to' before 'fit' and added an extra 's' in the setup, otherwise this would be a cool opener Trapeze punch is lotb, very dope Tartarus lol cool Closer is extremely average, almost under Vgt bayou I wish yall took more time with the verses n went max, not min
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Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open Last edited by Barcotic; 05-02-2023 at 08:00 PM. |
05-02-2023, 09:15 PM | #7 |
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* opener was nice,
* 1st birthday was cool.. I liked it * sleepless nights made me laugh * closer was alright, nothing crazy vs * trapeze was a good concept, the wording didn't feel right to me tho This felt one sided to me. I've never read anything from Diablo before but his verse was pretty consistent and just vibed with me more. Blues verse didn't really stand out too much to me. v/Diablo |
05-03-2023, 06:17 PM | #8 |
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Tough choice
This battle was alright to me, bars could have been better both closer and opener was nice I felt like Diablo had better concepts. Vote-Diablo |
05-04-2023, 12:57 AM | #9 |
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lmao can’t believe that this faggot bit just to seal the Dynamicz win
this moron a legend? rhetorical question - bitch u shouldn’t have needed to Answer it a good concept and personal angle here but the wording/execution wasn’t the best, took away from the impact. Decent overall You have a kid too, teaching ‘em bitings acceptable makes you a horrible dad ur kid lifts arms to be picked up. bitch if I lift arms, his 1st birthday gon be his last nah not feelin NBL plus toddler stress as well? bruh, you must to be shattered all the crying, wailing and sleepless nights. & that’s just every time you lose when it matters this was good, I liked this Fuck you and your faggot son. Blue Da 4’9” truly a loser with you parenting takes a back seat cuz ur so short your wife sits you in the booster ok closer, wording hurt a bit Vs claim you don’t flip my shit, but yet again my sick flows get mimicked the only Bigger Stretch is the Limo you had to rent just to fit those chicks in it ehh decent opener keep my concepts out your verse next time you write a wack key Play off these Bars again, you’re Catching Hands after the Flip like a Trapeze nice here & take your ass to the dentist bro your molars are fried they’re coated in slime. Tartarus so bad Hades himself keeled over and died took me a few mins to get the wordplay but this was pretty cool this Brit has got NO hands so a fist-fight is barely a thrill if i told em "put your Dukes up", he'd post pictures of Harry and Will nah I hated this Damn this is tough, really close battle. Both had 1 clear miss each but I feel like blue had the heavier hitting bars overall. Like barc said, kind of doing yourselves a disservice by posting the minimum, I think I’m going to increase it to 10 lines to make voting easier. Overall a cool little battle here but I have blue slightly edging it. Vote Blue Bayou |
05-04-2023, 12:40 PM | #10 |
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BLUE BAYOU IS DQ’ED FOR EDITING HIS VERSE/CHANGING A BAR AFTER VOTES CAME IN.
DIABLO WINS! |
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