04-18-2023, 08:25 PM | #1 |
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Week 1: Saint vs. Mac - SAINT WINS
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You know the drill. Due Dates: Verses this week are due Friday and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ @Saint @Mac |
04-18-2023, 11:27 PM | #2 |
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04-19-2023, 10:32 AM | #3 |
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04-21-2023, 05:56 PM | #4 |
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I'll take the ext dawg
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04-22-2023, 10:55 PM | #5 |
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Saint,
Yeah let’s do the bare min I don’t see the fun in this yet Economies of Scale. The more Inf writes the cheaper it gets woooooo Say your prayers. cuz this Mac is tooting Saints on their fuckin knees like this a church mass shooting This blooding would put some color to ya career inf Cuz its been so dull the only color in it is Blue carryin ya to a win I’ll go for a political spin cuz this gets under my skin and crawls Screw Socialism. It’s ok INF if u don’t share anything u produce at all =) |
04-23-2023, 12:43 AM | #6 |
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vs. me cower in fear. ya wont go out in a blaze of glory
1 bar have Mackinaw....he'll Turtle up like natives creation stories &&& this creep in public exposing his ween to women restraining orders? Mac Mall stalking til it's an illegal business long clip have em like a gym rat. his back needs attn. If i get Hyper, Extension slumping him down in a 45 degree position geeky lil faced dude. bullies stressd to my knowledge U skipped pictures cuz Boil Notice more widespread than a area outage
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04-23-2023, 02:09 PM | #7 |
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I don’t remember even writing my verse but damn this battle isn’t good
Mac this verse seemed rushed. Inf and win don’t even rhyme and I really got nothing quotable from you Inf… mackinaw dope wordplay but no idea what it has to do with natives. &&& this creep in public exposing his ween to women restraining orders? Mac Mall stalking til it's an illegal business long clip have em like a gym rat. his back needs attn. If i get Hyper, Ext V/Inf I hate text |
04-23-2023, 03:49 PM | #8 |
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This blooding would put some color to ya career inf
Cuz its been so dull the only color in it is Blue carryin ya to a win I actually liked this one from Mac, easily the standout from him IMO. Mackinaw was good from Inf, wording could perhaps have been tightened up more but it was fresh. I’ve got Inf in a close one here. |
04-23-2023, 06:12 PM | #9 |
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04-23-2023, 06:23 PM | #10 |
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Hyper extension n boil notice we’re pretty cool here
The execution from Mac was a bit underwhelming I digged ur first two concepts just not how they were delivered All n all V. Saints |
04-23-2023, 06:31 PM | #11 |
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Yeah
let’s do the bare min I don’t see the fun in this yet Economies of Scale. The more Inf writes the cheaper it gets I want to like this but I honestly don’t get it bro Say your prayers. cuz this Mac is tooting Saints on their fuckin knees like this a church mass shooting this had a lot of potential, kind of underwhelming. Overall decent This blooding would put some color to ya career inf Cuz its been so dull the only color in it is Blue carryin ya to a win nah I’ll go for a political spin cuz this gets under my skin and crawls Screw Socialism. It’s ok INF if u don’t share anything u produce at all I don’t get what the punch is lol Vs vs. me cower in fear. ya wont go out in a blaze of glory 1 bar have Mackinaw....he'll Turtle up like natives creation stories mackinaw is solid wordplay but that’s all this is &&& this creep in public exposing his ween to women restraining orders? Mac Mall stalking til it's an illegal business nah long clip have em like a gym rat. his back needs attn. If i get Hyper, Extension slumping him down in a 45 degree position this is cool geeky lil faced dude. bullies stressd to my knowledge U skipped pictures cuz Boil Notice more widespread than a area outage ok solid closer Mac had a lot of cool ideas and was on the right path but the execution was underdeveloped and I think things would have been better if he focused more on that. Inf had some good wordplay scattered around and overall had better constructed punches Vote Saint |
04-23-2023, 06:50 PM | #12 |
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Mac's opener with the saint on their knees jab was clever. Then it seem to falter off, could be due to some type of previous engagement that involves Blue. Saint on the other hand can with The native creation story...bro!!! Fire! Other than that that line alone won him the battle.
V- Saint
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04-23-2023, 09:40 PM | #13 |
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Got Saint here
But don't think it's a huge blowout...could be kinda close because: I thought Mac had a damn strong opener...cool, but, His 2nd punch the rhyme@ the end seemed kinda dull or tiny bit sloppy...Not as crisp as tight opener. So I guess Saint's W would be overall efficiency/better wording IF we look from top to bottom and have to make a call. Over the past few mnths I've seen Saint as a really strong Writer 'round here and even if he quicked this up it's pretty cool...That said I would caution him: most of it's tight but I am not loving that near/stretch rhyme of ween to women/ illegal business maybe stretching for fun/humor-punch but let's try to keep it tighter like the rest of your winning verse here. Thx both for drops; GL wk 2. |
04-23-2023, 09:46 PM | #14 |
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Saint Wins 6-0
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