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12-22-2022, 09:44 AM | #24 |
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I was gonna drop vs today but Frank close thread
It's all good waste vs because he didn't show |
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I'll see if I get a couple votes in today.
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12-22-2022, 07:30 PM | #28 |
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good idea but I have a 100% show rate and don't want that messed up because frank abused his powers to inflate shit. I'm pretty proud of that. I'm certainly not counting any no shows accumulated from this.
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not sway but honestly curious how you read some of the lines (so I understand how other people read my shit) - not that it'll really change the way I write lmao... just wanna see when I'm going too far into my own head. does this help? https://voca.ro/1bA8PxPF6stM definitely, a long line that entered a different cadence so I feel you. I won't touch on the fucking BARS THAT WAS. |
12-22-2022, 07:47 PM | #30 |
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also I'll vote on uni/frank tomorrow jesus y'all long bar fuckers sometimes I regret stanza breakdowns already
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you totally swayed bro lmao --- it's cool -- my arrogance and questionably weird subject matter has always had it's fans/critics since I started writing here.. but in terms of that story alone and this is me being subjective as the reader it lost cadence flow bboyism in certain areas but that's just my take .. I had to vote cause it was pretty much a tie ''almost'' i thought your overall creativity was better then pharaohs army.. but certain wording just did not keep your cypher in motion... as you can see whenever i drop beats with my verses there's a certain tempo style rhythm I personally enjoy writing and reading... it's not that you should change your writing it's the delivery to me personally as a reader on how it makes me feel reading as ''you"" while also being ''me'' if that makes any sense. and when i say thing's like ''soft'' i don't mean it personally cause i don't even fucking know you ...i mean it in terms of the feeling it induces it's some shit a kid that shoved into a locker might say or the guy who get's beat up at the bar infront of his girlfriend after he started the fight lmao it breaks a certain standard on what i look for.. that ''battle'' or ''street'' aspect hip hop is based on... for lack of better term ... but once again it's subjective ... my style of hiphop is different then your's and that's the beauty of the art... Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-22-2022 at 09:46 PM. |
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Will try to get my votes in tomorrow night...and IF time permitting might write up a few very brief feeds for the no-showed verses.
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similar hip hop roots... i guess i could say i started with East Coast 90s stuff...for sure, but now have branched out considerably, as I guess you might have also. |
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I understand I challenged you on exactly ONE (1) Long Multi this week, then humbly conceded to you that I stood corrected when Symetrik pronounced it with his helpful accent. Is this perhaps a source of your animosity towards me? I can handle a vote against me, no problem. But you seem to have made an ad hominem attack. It was a "war report" with rhymes, plain and simple... I've done plenty of 1st persons or self expressions in the past and decided to switch it up again...You really need to get control of your emotions your jealousy is showing or you just can't admit that you're better than most YET you hold everyone to YOUR standards? Lol. I actually tried this week buddy yet it was your most explosive hate-fest yet. I'm not too bothered...you seem to need some meds, or perhaps if I were to copy your 48-64 line multi style some time it would be a perfect 5/10 for effort. |
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