08-02-2022, 09:41 PM | #1 |
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LGI vs Adverse - ADVERSE WINS
Netcees SOL Season II @White LGI @Adverse
Week 6 Due Friday, August 5th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
08-02-2022, 10:34 PM | #2 |
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08-02-2022, 11:15 PM | #3 |
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08-03-2022, 04:29 PM | #4 |
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty? When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead 2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns? Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit @White LGI Last edited by Adverse; 08-04-2022 at 08:53 AM. |
08-05-2022, 10:02 AM | #5 |
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Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer...
Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure.... He bust in the door four four waving and spitting... Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking... It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction... I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell... Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale... Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it... She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament.... |
08-05-2022, 12:39 PM | #6 |
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This was a pretty GOOD BATTLE..
THE EXCALIBUR line was dope.. BAR OF THE BATTLE.. V/ADVERSE |
08-05-2022, 10:17 PM | #7 |
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Decent read here. Seemed to me both were pretty sloppy putting this together. Mostly misses punch wise from both. But the cut the cord line was the best punch here and think adverse was overall more solid throughout his verse so I'm voting for him.
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08-06-2022, 02:39 AM | #8 |
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no time for a full breakdown on this but I’ll do my best to explain..
For me, LGI had line of the battle with his opener.. black family structure dope (even though without a head was a slight reach) fire concept and well worded In regards to the rest.. overall, Ad was more consistent with less misses For that reason, I gotta vote - Adverse |
08-06-2022, 06:59 PM | #9 |
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Voting soon
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I liked LGI's opener a lot but I've got Adverse taking it. More aggressive and did a better job working the personal angles.
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08-08-2022, 10:41 AM | #11 |
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Your rap style’s butt cheeks, you’re black and you’re ugly
And I hate to split hairs... how could I with dreads that fuckin crusty? good wording, basic punch When I switchblade, there’s NO hesitation slittin your neck When Rod switchblade, just means he wants to fuck his sister instead switchblade is a bit of a stretch for me. Still works, and by no means is it easy or intuitive to make a bar about LGI's wife's discord nickname, but switch blade as a verb feels a little off 2 2 packed for that action...really fam you packin guns? Last tutu you packed went to dance class with your faggot son solid Your girl got a bulldog face, I bet you’re regretting your wedlock Arthur drew Blade from the stone, I’da smashed her head into bedrock I am EXCALIBUR I was never going to be unbiased on this one Seth always trying to ban you from the chat room...that shit ain’t fair They ever ‘cut you from the Cord’ hope it’s after you kicked the chair nice personal Wife’s a slut, son’s a faggot and you ran through your sis One look at yours got Dom Toretto rethinking this whole family shit gotta be honest, had to google, which loses impact for me, but that's not your fault here imo. Safe reference tied to the personal well Warned Ad to retreat, or be prepared to Tragically Suffer... Now Sons in the street and missing a head like black family structure.... this is dope He bust in the door four four waving and spitting... Not a robbery...thats just adverse retarded ass making a entrance this doesn't rhyme but otherwise good When blade gets to topping, its sloppy, she tha queen and it's great When your wife thinks messy topping...she's aggravated from cleaning your face gone. Don't love that you're referencing a pic that was used a month ago tbh. Still could be done in a way that isn't just clowning on that pic I got a goal when I emerge with the tech and get to bucking... It's population control, like adverse effect on reproduction... wtf this is dope I got a trio of shooters, that'll send you to hell... Ad ain't seen 3 9's this bad for his heath..since tipping the scale... kinda reminiscent of yo mama so fat jokes. Predictable punch Ya wife's a groupie, BBC junkie..loves to lick and swallow it... She's at the mercy of black rods like the British Parliament.... solid This is mad close. I'll reread and do a point breakdown I think this is the best verse I've seen from both this season. It's close and comes down to preference but I think they were about equally consistent, I just thought LGI had slightly stronger punches. Def gonna be a preference thing that will take forever to close, good shit guys V/lgi |
08-08-2022, 10:24 PM | #12 |
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Adverse had more heat than lgi. This was a good battle tbh… jokes aside rod come correct when he’s zoned in
Adverse verse had a cool vibe the start to finish… no real bangers but not many fillers either. Consistent verse Rod had some comedy bustin jn the door waiving the 4 4 almost won the battle by itself lmao but rod had some really weird lines also like the closer and the three 9s was a bit forced By a hair, vote - adverse
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Burnt chiglet had sauce face bar vs monster man's sister fucking shots. Great battle and by great battle I mean fucking sucked thanks fucking moron stupid idiots. V ad
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