07-25-2022, 09:22 PM | #1 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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CtrlF4 vs Incredible - INC WINS BY NS, OPEN FOR FEED
Netcees SOL Season II @CtrlF4 @Incredible
Week 5 Due Thursday, July 28th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
07-25-2022, 10:14 PM | #2 |
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07-28-2022, 07:20 PM | #3 |
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Was going 10 but he probably won't show so here's 8
He said "I was Holding it down" when its just the nickname he was given Turns out NC no different than prison, from A block - D block he wasn't known for spittin Rittenhouse his fam, turn the chants to screams litter out this clip, AK all custom, this an active shooter scene I'm miles ahead of this clown and that's nothin but facts "Ran the yard" yeah ok pussy, we know you was just runnin up laps Talk all this tough shit but ur named after a computer shortcut...just stop it I push ctrl w/ the shotty no alt but to delete him, Task manager reads "end his whole process" |
07-29-2022, 12:26 PM | #4 |
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First bar was cool (don’t know if dude’s actually been to prison but if he has, makes it nicer) I honestly don’t get the second bar Wasn’t feeling ran the yard Can see the potential in the whole ctrl alt delete thing but it’s a tad cliche and was too choppy for the execution to come off Opener was your best, Shame about the no show Keep doing your thing |
07-29-2022, 11:20 PM | #5 |
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I remember incredible as having dope concepts but not executing them, was definitely the case here, opener was decent, the middle bars weren’t great and closer had potential but Is really low hanging fruit that’s probably been done a dozen times .
That being said, a W is a W so good looks on that |
07-31-2022, 10:28 AM | #6 |
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Opener is wild. Idk if you were here for finding his mugshot, researched it in discussion, or just guessed right, but it's a great personal. The second bar is confusing. I feel like that's the kind of bar to someone else ahead of time like 'does this work'. Ran the block is really basic and I believe has been done. Can't remember a specific instance so I won't say for sure. I think the closer was cool. Ambitious, execution def needed some more work
Solid NS verse. I'm not looking to harp on wording issues cause it sounds like you knew he was no showing. Concepts are generally cool. Looking forward to you getting an opponent who shows |
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