07-21-2022, 12:07 PM | #1 |
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WEEK FOURTEEN: DOMINATE (8-3) vs SINACOG (0-6) DOM WINS 3-0
AOWL Season X WEEK FOURTEEN @Sinacog @Dominate Verse Due: MONDAY JULY 25TH @ 11:59 EST Line min: 10 Max: 20 Rules: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150311 Topic: GOOD LUCK |
07-21-2022, 11:20 PM | #2 |
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I am ANDREW JAMES FLORES KING ARUTHUR/AUTHOR WITH THE PEN' with EXCALIBUR..
REX CHALLENGER; Who's my next challenger; I DAMAGE BIRDS AND CABBAGE HERDES.. I ended the life/light of ten thousand horsemen storming forces of light.. I came from the alley of black egyptian cats crossing me for light/life I am andrew james flores; excalibur's weapon; i wield excalibur; I AM EXCALIBUR.. I am EXCALIBUR; challenging demons in the demon REALM; SEMON CELLS.. I'm from the conundrum gallows of HELL; SOUR WILL MELT.. DEVOUR A SHELL; DEVOURING CELLS FROM SEMON DRAWN ASTEROIDS// HAIL the asteroids belts filled with alien flys' and ARACNID'S hanging like ORAGUTANGS.. I am a salvage man; wielding excalibur to damage land; the PROMISED LAND.. AWESOME MAN;; I CONJURE BLACK MAGIC; attack salvage.. backhanded aracnids; don't have arms; they're legs and KARATE KICS.. EIGHT LEGGED FREAK; sea the awesome cenobite' pen dragon.. I ENDED MANGUMS with red tangents; I AM THE EYE/I of the STORM COMING IN SWARMS!? I conjured the LORD; as a mysterey.. I am HISTORY; eating mysteries from HISTORY.. I am the OMEN OF LIGHT: conjuring black and white magic// I attack habits and SALVAGED the underworld.. THUNDER WORLD;; I am the rocket from DAVY CROCKET.. I am the CENOBITE PEN' DRAGON; END TANGENTS WITH RED TANGENTS.. I AM EXCALIBUR;; EXCALIBUR SWORD WITH FORCE.. I am EXCALIBUR SWORD WITH FORCE..CONJURE FORCE.. I AM A SWORD WITH FORCE: HORDES OF SCORES and CHOPPED TO BITS.. ROCKING SMITH'S AND SMITE LIKE BLACKSMITHS.. CONJURING BLACK AND WHITE MAGIC WITH MY EXCALIBUR SWORD.. VEX CHALLGNERS ARE NEXT TO DAMAGE!?? I AM WITH FORCe..// Force you down the conundrum gallows of HELL with PORTAL USAGE.. I am the student of extreme recluse; damage ruse's..// For i am the cathedral steeple; conjuring EVIL.// MOCKING THE PEOPLE: PROLONING AS EQUAL// I woke up from a DREAM it was BYZATINE (BUSY TEEN)// For what is a dream but real life from the GULLOTINE!??!?// I am excalibur sword; damage the force// FORCE U DOWN A CHESSEBURGER FOR BEING HEALTY AS LORD// I am the demon from HELL'S CITY: EATING CELLS SWIFTYLY// THere is a price on my head from BOUNTY HUNTERS THAT FOUND THE RUPTURE// I AM THE RAPTURE: ABRACADABRA! ABRACADABARA// I am the rapture!?!?! ABRACADABRA -- ARACADABARA// I am the meat of the sheathe; a white skeleton// DAMAGE MELANIN; and BREAK GELATIN// For when I wield excalibur I SLAUGHTER ORGRE'S AND MONSTERS// COKE AND THE MONSTER: EXPOSING THE DAUGHTER// I am the ELEPHANT DEMON; CELIBATE SEASON???! I had sex under the MISILETOE; GLISTENING GLOWS// MISSILES AND CROWS; PISTOLS AND CROWS// SISTINE CHAPEL WISDOM: ALGORITHM// SALVAGE VICTIM; ELCTRO MAGNETISM; PETRO WISDOM// CLEOPATRA SIEZING; from the egyptian glass house// PYRAMIDS MADE OF GLASS ARE SHATTERED TO PIECES LIKE RECESS// I am the LORD OF THE FLY'S STORMING WITH PRIDE// THe end of the world happens with AIRPLANES AND FLAMES// MOUNTAINS OF FLAMES//MOUNTAINS OF RAGE//MOUNTAINS OF RANGE// FOUNTAINS OF DRUNKS;// FRUIT IN A BUBBLE IS KILLD BY PIZZA// I DRUNK COKE FROM THE NOZZLE: BROKEN BOTTLES// SOAKEN MODELS WITH THEIR PANTIES WET; STORM THE SHADOWS WITH A HATCHET REX// DRINOSAURS ARE SLAUGHTERED WITH MY SWORD (EXCALIBUR))// VEX CHALLENGERS: DRAGONS ARE BEHEADED AND SHREDDED// MEXICAN POET'' EATING PIZZA AND ICE CREAM// I AM THE RIGHTEOUS KING BEYOND THE RING// SONGS AND THINGS: PSALM AND RINGS// BEHEMOTH BEATS SLAUGHTERED FOR THE GLISTENING TREAT// I |
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07-22-2022, 11:21 PM | #4 |
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You wake up in a strange room, no memory of how you arrived The door & window are locked. No-one answers your shouts and your cries There’s a pot of tea on the windowsill. Next to it, a pair of glasses Plants and flowers everywhere, - some c.acti and arid grasses You notice some shelving above you. Some post-its on the wall There’s something written on them but you can’t make out the scrawl What is all this? You wonder. Is it all some optical ruse? You’re determined to find out. The question is… what do you do? See what’s on the shelves – go to verse 15 Try on the glasses – go to verse 5 Drink the tea – go to verse 10 2 You see your hands tremble as you drip the sap on the picture Hoping the c.actus’s liquid is some kind of magic elixir The book glows, then intensifies into a blinding, dazzling light There’s a deafening roar… you hear a c.ackle, a CRACK, then a silence A sudden weight in your hand. You look down at a magical sight The golden pommel, the jewlled hilt… ‘Excalibur’ scratched on the side You’ve done it! You summoned the sword, just as the post-it said Now to turn your attention to those other notes your read… Drink the tea & eat the flowers – go to verse 3 Shout out “Eyjeyissagod” – go to verse 7 3 This option was appealing. You’re hungry, and thirsty too But… Does the order matter? Which one should you first consume? Eat the flowers – go to verse 6 Drink the tea – go to verse 10 4 In your hands you twirl the frisbee. The pattern is hypnotic You can’t seem to look away…. it spins faster and faster, robotic You hear a voice in your head, posing a puzzle of logic: I AM NOTHING AND SOMETHING... The tone is almost demonic I AM NOTHING AND SOMETHING, it repeats... What does it mean?! It’s a riddle without an answer… “Impossible!!!” you scream I AM NOTHING AND SOMETHING - now less talking than taunting You’re paralysed, despairing at this great philosophical quandary I AM NOTHING AND SOMETHING. Over and over, over again You scream. This really wasn’t the way that you hoped it would end. 5 A lighthearted distraction while the gods are deciding your fate You’ll die here or be rescued - might as well look fly while you wait You don the glasses, check the mirror… forget for one long minute You flatter yourself a little thinking you look like a young John Lennon But as you turn away, you shout with glee at the spectacle - It seems those sweet little spectacles make the post-its easily legible! “A sappy sacrifice supplies the sword”, you read, still short of answers On the next note, “Eyjeyissagod” … could this be some sort of password? “It drinks the tea, it eats the flowers”, the final note instructs Now… decide your course, cross your heart and hope for luck Drink the tea & eat the flowers – go to verse 3 Shout out “Eyjeyissagod” – go to verse 12 See what’s on the shelves – go to verse 11 6 The flowers were beautiful. You should have known to ONLY DEVOUR THE SUITABLE. Now after hours of puking you’ll die howling, delusional. 7 “Eyjeyissagod!” Your mouth tingles and warms as soon as you utter the word The sensation fades quickly but leaves you somewhat disturbed You hear a sudden, primal screech. You turn to the window to see A flap of wings. The glass shatters. You get a glimpse of some teeth The side of the building groans under the weight of its giant claws Shimmering crimson scales reflect the pale light of the dawn Afraid and yet awed, you hold your blade in your palm, considering Should you attempt to slay the dragon, or bow before it quivering? Attack – go to verse 14 Bow – go to verse 16 8 You cut yourself with the c.actus and stain the image with blood Holding your breath, you wait… you hear a sinister buzz The book glows, then intensifies into a blinding, dazzling light There’s a deafening roar… you hear a c.ackle, a CRACK, then a silence A sudden pain in your chest. You look down and gasp at the sight The golden pommel, the jewlled hilt… ‘Excalibur’ scratched on the side The blood is warm on your body as it gushes from the wound Then suddenly, you’re cold… Your suffering is through. 9 Amongst the books you spy a classic: The Legend Of Arthur There’s an illustration of a sword and… the word “BLOOD”, written in marker Is this calling for a sacrifice? You wonder with a shiver You search the room, looking for a knife or something like scissors There’s nothing of the sort, but one thing does look sharp The c.actus’s thorns are beckoning, - all you’ll need is one good barb Poised to prick your thumb pad, you hesistate. Do you want to do this? Maybe just wait for rescue, drink some tea… Would that be foolish? Blood sacrifice – go to verse 8 Wait and drink tea – go to verse 10 10 The tea is demon semen. Satan appears before you in the form of a Greek policeman OPAAAA. YOU TAKE MY SEMEN. NOW MUST MAKE EVEN-STEVENS. I SUCKA YOU DICK… You nod in meek agreement It’s amazing. It’s too good. You can’t believe it, even. Your mind explodes and you die, still tasting that sweet secretion 11 On the shelves you find a frisbee and a couple of dusty tomes Observing the former closely, you think you see it subtly glow It seems to be… calling to you…. you have an urge to twirl it Should you go along with this impulse? Or not? What’s the verdict? Twirl the frisbee – go to verse 4 Read the books – go to verse 13 12 “Eyjeyissagod!” Your mouth tingles and warms as soon as you utter the word The sensation grows stronger… you scream; suffering, burning And as the flames engulf you, you hear a voice in your head “…UNWORTHY…”, it whispers… you should’ve made other choices instead… 13 Amongst the books you spy a classic: The Legend Of Arthur There’s an illustration of a sword and… the word “BLOOD”, written in marker Is this calling for a sacrifice? You wonder with a shiver You search the room, looking for a knife or something like scissors There’s nothing of the sort, but one thing does look sharp The c.actus’s thorns are beckoning, - all you’ll need is one good barb Poised to prick your thumbpad, you stop and think, do you really HAVE to? Does it have to be YOUR blood? Maybe you could use the plant juice? Would the book even know? You ponder this all for a minute Then nod sharply, committed. You’ve made your call, your decision: Use your blood – go to verse 8 Use the c.actus juice – go to verse 2 14 It’s over in seconds… Before you even move, the dragon knows your intentions. You hear a monsterous roar the instant you go for your weapon. Feel the furnace blast of its breath. Burning, - ashes and flesh “PATHETIC MORTAL.” you hear, then jerk and collapse into death 15 On the shelves you find a frisbee and a couple of dusty tomes Observing the former closely, you think you see it subtly glow It seems to be… calling to you…. you have an urge to twirl it Should you go along with this impulse? Or not? What’s the verdict? Twirl the frisbee – go to verse 4 Read the books – go to verse 9 16 Gripping your sword, you kneel. Seconds seem an eternity Afraid to look up, you wait… until you hear a voice, internally ARISE. You stand up shakily and lock eyes with the powerful beast SUSTENANCE. It commands you… You offer the flowers and tea It seems to work… ! You feel your grip on the sword relax COME. YOU ARE WORTHY. The dragon gestures towards its back Climbing aboard, you feel strange… more confident and light You take two steps to the window and launch into the skies Below you, only insignificant mortals in their T shirts Leathery wings beat upwards. You soar into the ether. Blood and fire and steel. You understand your immortal truth You are the sword and the dragon. The dragon and sword are you.
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07-28-2022, 08:19 PM | #9 |
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This was dope, A+++ level troll from sinacog vs domination with a choose your story vibe. This reminded me of a special edition goosebumps I read in middle school where there was ONE path to salvation and every other choice lead to gruesome deaths and shit. VERY entertaining, never been done in this medium before so thank you for that. I’ll have to vote for domination but sinacog had some bars::
DEVOUR A SHELL; DEVOURING CELLS FROM SEMON DRAWN ASTEROIDS// HAIL the asteroids belts filled with alien flys' and ARACNID'S hanging like ORAGUTANGS.. I am a salvage man; wielding excalibur to damage land; the PROMISED LAND.. ^^^ can’t sleep on that Demon cells semon cells was fire V I’m pissed / domination
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Thought Dom would roll over and give Cog a no show victory this week but damn, the concept of this was nice especially for a quick write. Felt really reminiscent of the click adventure, interactive games of the early internet. Also like that you snuck in some jabs at your opponent and the nature of his content, was pretty funny, also kinda funny and ironic no matter what you choose it didn’t really end well for you, mirrors life in a way. I know it’s not THAT deep I’m just saying lol
I feel like Sinacog is being more responsive to the board and what people are saying perhaps he updated his AI? Anyways if he’s listening he needs to pertain his verse more to the topic given, flow and multis are nice and all but it all comes down to content and attention to details. Dom wins V/Dom |
07-30-2022, 12:28 PM | #11 |
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