07-11-2022, 08:14 PM | #1 |
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Adverse vs Mac - ADVERSE WINS
Netcees SOL Season II Week 3 Due Thursday, July 14th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Adverse @Mac |
07-11-2022, 08:52 PM | #2 |
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07-11-2022, 10:41 PM | #3 |
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Mac AKA the Brazillian
About to show this mangy terrier how we bang in America My threats come true when I run into you, only thing Mac runnin into’s the language barrier Ya girl wasn’t used to a dick this big, best believe I had to break her in You came home to me using the long bar, n thought you was battling MaCe again Even fucked her at your birthday last year, you ain’t know that I hammered her? Helped decorate the staircase, pulled out and hung rope on the banisters Come swinging pistols akimbo, armed with two specials Your ass get lifted when I grip the sticks and pull up, so call me Geppetto @Mac Last edited by Adverse; 07-15-2022 at 04:17 PM. Reason: @ing mac |
07-14-2022, 05:47 PM | #4 |
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07-15-2022, 10:29 PM | #5 |
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@Adverse .. kill yourself already
stop chasin a lead . it'll get in over ur head like an afterthought push the right buttons and you'll feel the snap.. thats a screenshot empathy with this suicide watch brat. let the prozac follow thru hell, if my wife looked like a trans fat i'd clog my artery too works on an assembly line & can't put his life together if he wished ever seen a verse on his Prime day. bitch wrapped 300 orders in a shift user beat ya on a slim. losing by a couple votes is never a good look u know tony's robbins hurt ya when u now find comfort in self help books |
07-16-2022, 11:22 PM | #6 | ||
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Mac had good concepts but wording held him back. Adverse got it.
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07-17-2022, 12:29 PM | #7 |
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Adverse
Long bar was made cooler with the personal touch Birthday was cool I didn’t like the way you handled geppetto but It def had potential Mac Trans fat was the only one I could compare to ads best You also had more potential in that verse with your concepts but I feel the execution was off Vote Adverse |
07-17-2022, 02:00 PM | #8 |
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Vote adverse,
He was just a Lil more clever. Had better wording...his verse just was better put together Mac seems like I wrote his verse, concepts were good but the wording sucked |
07-17-2022, 02:49 PM | #9 |
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Ya girl wasn’t used to a dick this big, best believe I had to break her in You came home to me using the long bar, n thought you was battling MaCe again Dunno what Dom is talking about this bar is jokes.. Dom talmbout WP, aint no WP here this is straight up jokes lol. shooting ropes of semen was gross bc you're poor... Gepetto line was almost Mac: works on an assembly line & can't put his life together if he wished ever seen a verse on his Prime day. bitch wrapped 300 orders in a shift lol'ed Rest of the verse is almost.. kinda like the concepts.. tony robbins lol that was kinda dumb tho Good battle but Adverse pulled through with better wording
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07-17-2022, 03:44 PM | #10 |
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language barrier was solid
longbar was jokes, a lil light banisters decent geppeto needed better wording but ok vs screenshot was aight feelin trans fat prime day was solid did not like the closer this is clossseee.. mac with some execution issues but prime and trans fat were both good hits.. tough as ad was a bit more consistant in this short battle.. i think macs closer was the deciding factor here.. if that was a good or above avg line he woulda take it buttt v adverse
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07-17-2022, 04:16 PM | #11 |
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Ya girl wasn’t used to a dick this big, best believe I had to break her in
You came home to me using the long bar, n thought you was battling MaCe again Even fucked her at your birthday last year, you ain’t know that I hammered her? Helped decorate the staircase, pulled out and hung rope on the banisters Vs works on an assembly line & can't put his life together if he wished ever seen a verse on his Prime day. bitch wrapped 300 orders in a shift Decent battle, closer than the votes show, if macs wording was a better he could took this Vote adverse |
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