WEEK TEN: BROKENHAL0 (4-4) vs INNO (0-0) HAL0 WINS VIA NS

Adverse · 06-12-2022, 03:33 PM

AOWL Season X WEEK TEN

@brokenhal0 @Inno

Verse Due: THURSDAY JUNE 16TH @ 11:59 PM

Line min: 10

Max: 40

Rules: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150311

Topic:

GOOD LUCK

Inno · 06-12-2022, 05:03 PM

In

brokenhal0 · 06-15-2022, 12:23 AM

''Crashed Landings''

Waking up after passing out
crash landing on a planet of squid ink colored clouds
hovering down looking for some ground acceptance the attitude
aluminum particles zoom past my dirty parachute and disintegrate
the whole craft is in flames looking like a fading vimana.

I radio to control houston we got a problem static white noise silence
as im floating in colors of gas looking for a horizon
I start seeing some fauna like grass the humidity mist my helmet like a sauna.

High quality ejection seats thank god for protecting me overlooking 3 suns
illuminating opal tundra a crowd gathers under the trees with the look of wonder
constant lightening but no thunder eternal day light with no shadows
excited frightened faces exotic curious animals.

Welcome the spaceman smooth landing tuck and roll
used my butterfly knife to cut the cords stuck in my coat
the lavender sky canopy lit up the floor standing on sand that looked like little stars.

I heard grunts and groans seen a bunch of naked woman wearing black sashes
there was one with a pointy nose her voice left me froze
ethereal tone echoed from my head through my toes.

She spoke about her world and hidden mystery's unknown
how by divine will I landed here from outer-space to be cloned
to advance her race and help her species overtake the universal throne
woman who only dream of a man from earth
with a phallic pepsi can between his legs.

There was at least 40 of these feminine beings
all beautiful as if they never aged she said even the villainous race masters
failed to escape so who run's the game were left without a choice
for the naive such a event might seem glorious to feel something nice and moist.

As the days past i came to realize these planetary porn stars are really
mutant-like blood-thirsty evil-minded sorcerers rare shape-shifters
written in folklore over throwers of an old world feeding me exotic vines
that taste like coconut and pine sending shivers up my spine see in time
you'll see the best and worst of who we are as humans
you'll see what awaits us in the future
mating succubus with horizontal vaginas that feed off thee illusions.

Satellite engineer turned demon assassin slave season im dreaming to leave this planet
before they suck me dry and leave my bones to become little homes in a demons eye
a fleeting man to create a plan that takes months to design but wont go array
i miss my earth woman they at least make sex feel like it's worth my time.

Repairing scraps of the craft it a task to keep it hidden away passing days
boring exotic metals from jungle caves lush trails curving like dna strings
the art of righteousness is best served by slitting the throats of hypocrites
probably take over 60 bars to finish it but let me not pivot from the path.

I started the engine using science I learned in Nasa's university lab
tuition few could ever afford (thanks dad) the combination price was optional
being double-fucked by some spiteful god , probable.

One evening while i was crucified getting milked by the corn
the main one to be worshiped and obeyed had a stomach of 90 hybrids
looking like a walrus with two legs with all my semen inside it
to my horror I vomit time to put a end to this primal gauntlet
I drew a map of how to escape this planets hyperbolic gates
got some water from the lake and slowly crept to my craft
before the sleeping monsters wake it started fast
that's when I released the brake.

Hovering higher and higher I see them running grabbing spears of fire
chucking them at me but the retardant I acquired from this giant papaya tree
made this stainless teflon radio flyer light as paper tempered like dried molten iron
cabin in the woods an excerpt of einstein's conferences concerning holes in space
as I leave the ozone layer of this hopeless place the engine starts smoking
my hope for survival ceases when shadowy truths are revealed in bits and pieces
lucky for me the ionosphere of that realm was cool like the mist of pacific beaches
my craft entered a gravity warp that had me faint as it increases
punctured through a black hole within nano seconds I was back in our solar system waking up in my own spit and feces.

I get a radio signal from nasa saying we thought we lost you
glad you made it back never say a word of this or we will make your memory's
fade to black asking me about the hideous human experiments in ground zero
as I start to laugh they might have loved the treatment I got on their behalf
the closer I get to earth I relax until I notice the great wall is now totally flat
volcano's going off everywhere start loosing energy from my battery pack
to relived to react im glad to back.

I can feel a sense of rage and fear as I enter earths atmosphere
people doing what they want to do and being what they want to be
how I missed this chaotic circus we call society
smooth landing on the tarmac send a radio to the agency
what a beautiful day to be alive remove my helmet and I couldn't believe my eyes
im greeted by the naked queen she smiled and asked why do I look surprised ...

Inno · 06-16-2022, 11:37 PM

Ext?

06-12-2022, 03:33 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	WEEK TEN: BROKENHAL0 (4-4) vs INNO (0-0) HAL0 WINS VIA NS AOWL Season X WEEK TEN @brokenhal0 @Inno Verse Due: THURSDAY JUNE 16TH @ 11:59 PM Line min: 10 Max: 40 Rules: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=150311 Topic: GOOD LUCK Last edited by Adverse; 06-12-2022 at 03:39 PM.

06-15-2022, 12:23 AM	#3
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 493 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	''Crashed Landings'' Waking up after passing out crash landing on a planet of squid ink colored clouds hovering down looking for some ground acceptance the attitude aluminum particles zoom past my dirty parachute and disintegrate the whole craft is in flames looking like a fading vimana. I radio to control houston we got a problem static white noise silence as im floating in colors of gas looking for a horizon I start seeing some fauna like grass the humidity mist my helmet like a sauna. High quality ejection seats thank god for protecting me overlooking 3 suns illuminating opal tundra a crowd gathers under the trees with the look of wonder constant lightening but no thunder eternal day light with no shadows excited frightened faces exotic curious animals. Welcome the spaceman smooth landing tuck and roll used my butterfly knife to cut the cords stuck in my coat the lavender sky canopy lit up the floor standing on sand that looked like little stars. I heard grunts and groans seen a bunch of naked woman wearing black sashes there was one with a pointy nose her voice left me froze ethereal tone echoed from my head through my toes. She spoke about her world and hidden mystery's unknown how by divine will I landed here from outer-space to be cloned to advance her race and help her species overtake the universal throne woman who only dream of a man from earth with a phallic pepsi can between his legs. There was at least 40 of these feminine beings all beautiful as if they never aged she said even the villainous race masters failed to escape so who run's the game were left without a choice for the naive such a event might seem glorious to feel something nice and moist. As the days past i came to realize these planetary porn stars are really mutant-like blood-thirsty evil-minded sorcerers rare shape-shifters written in folklore over throwers of an old world feeding me exotic vines that taste like coconut and pine sending shivers up my spine see in time you'll see the best and worst of who we are as humans you'll see what awaits us in the future mating succubus with horizontal vaginas that feed off thee illusions. Satellite engineer turned demon assassin slave season im dreaming to leave this planet before they suck me dry and leave my bones to become little homes in a demons eye a fleeting man to create a plan that takes months to design but wont go array i miss my earth woman they at least make sex feel like it's worth my time. Repairing scraps of the craft it a task to keep it hidden away passing days boring exotic metals from jungle caves lush trails curving like dna strings the art of righteousness is best served by slitting the throats of hypocrites probably take over 60 bars to finish it but let me not pivot from the path. I started the engine using science I learned in Nasa's university lab tuition few could ever afford (thanks dad) the combination price was optional being double-fucked by some spiteful god , probable. One evening while i was crucified getting milked by the corn the main one to be worshiped and obeyed had a stomach of 90 hybrids looking like a walrus with two legs with all my semen inside it to my horror I vomit time to put a end to this primal gauntlet I drew a map of how to escape this planets hyperbolic gates got some water from the lake and slowly crept to my craft before the sleeping monsters wake it started fast that's when I released the brake. Hovering higher and higher I see them running grabbing spears of fire chucking them at me but the retardant I acquired from this giant papaya tree made this stainless teflon radio flyer light as paper tempered like dried molten iron cabin in the woods an excerpt of einstein's conferences concerning holes in space as I leave the ozone layer of this hopeless place the engine starts smoking my hope for survival ceases when shadowy truths are revealed in bits and pieces lucky for me the ionosphere of that realm was cool like the mist of pacific beaches my craft entered a gravity warp that had me faint as it increases punctured through a black hole within nano seconds I was back in our solar system waking up in my own spit and feces. I get a radio signal from nasa saying we thought we lost you glad you made it back never say a word of this or we will make your memory's fade to black asking me about the hideous human experiments in ground zero as I start to laugh they might have loved the treatment I got on their behalf the closer I get to earth I relax until I notice the great wall is now totally flat volcano's going off everywhere start loosing energy from my battery pack to relived to react im glad to back. I can feel a sense of rage and fear as I enter earths atmosphere people doing what they want to do and being what they want to be how I missed this chaotic circus we call society smooth landing on the tarmac send a radio to the agency what a beautiful day to be alive remove my helmet and I couldn't believe my eyes im greeted by the naked queen she smiled and asked why do I look surprised ... Last edited by brokenhal0; 06-18-2022 at 09:20 PM.

06-12-2022, 05:03 PM	#2
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06-16-2022, 11:37 PM	#4
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