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Three Samurai feat YDK and Pastor Reach
Three Samurai planning for a battle Mike Wrecka: First we formulate a formula avoiding fortresses, , then we coronate some warriors to find the sorceress, lets coordinate our corneas to metamorphosis, and incorporate some scorpions and also tortoises, for foreigners it's torturous in these sort of tournaments, so organize some coroners to deal with corpses quick, daggers dipped in poison through the orbital orifice, armed with water style, cephalopods nautilus, what these other clans will be battling is battering rams, and canons shot off the back of catamarans, we wont stop until we capture Japan, and overthrow all these overlords with collapsible fans, show no mercy that's the actual plan, so when we give the command, its gonna be a massacre man, Let's show the shoguns army why their ambassador ran, Ripped up the peace treaty and then slapped him with the back of my hand YDK: But sir, wouldn't it be smarter to go for the hardest parts? Slash their throats in the darkness or poison their hearts with a dart? This passion is art, So let's massacre the bastards for trespassing thus far, Or shall we paint a perfect portrait of the corpses under the stars? Their army could never arm themselves enough to beat ours, Let's melt their window bars an cover their bodies in scars. Hidden in the shadows behind the gallows and under the hay in their carts, And once the moon has risen we'll be ready to start. Pastor Reach: The Aikido discipline: the way of harmony’s no mutual thought That’s shared between these feudal wars No scruples, nor a neutral cause Our ancient paths arrangement arcs are changing fast - A vagrant laughs - Those Western cross-breeds left us falsely changeling arts Degrading hearts But mine will always be the warrior’s way! All lesser clans are traitorous cowards! Their thoughts are craving ancient powers But they’ve turned soft like Asian flowers As darkness sighs, we slide between the shadows of the trees A legion of dark demons – we creep up the backbone of Ku-shi My katana swerves to strike, with curves that slice my rival’s girth Our primal curse: A honoured death we seek to die, but I Will always fight it first
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Amazing.
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cephalopods nautilus most bonkers line. BUt everyone killed this.
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Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated
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Is this new
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I like it
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12-08-2021, 01:29 AM | #7 |
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Well it’s never been posted anywhere. This was a collab we worked on a few years ago
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dope.. good to see you still around. :)
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It actually did read this, and am surprised by how bad it is from three decades-old 'vets', or that anyone thought it was remotely ok.
The last verse was serviceable actually, but not those other two. Deus-sama. |
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Ya I just read some of your stuff. I was curious. Since ive never heard of you before. lol wow. Thanks for the up I guess
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Samurais are pretty cool. Didn't get that vibe from a lot of the stuff written here tho, that armor is heavy af and they rely heavily on their sword. Cool lines here and there but I've seen better from all three. Also, why post up something you guys worked on a few years ago?
Wb. Hope to see something new on your next drop.
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Ah yes with garbo like this you’re not qualified to critique anyone’s writing. You on that island boy level of writing. I’m assuming you’re 12 and just getting started. Stick with it kid. Don’t read the grown ups verses it’s not your mumble rap style “ my soul wanders no longer, no bother the way i flow lava, this shit a wrap, my wit collapsed, possibly contest's mismatched, that quality content intact, give daps. retract ya fist fast, you ain't used to the contact, inhaling some fumes from the cognac, most rhymes i produce: bombast,”
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there's levellllssss
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you got me bro, i ain't good. that selectively quoted tongue-in-cheek cypher scrawl proves it.
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Don’t forget the migratory patterns!^
All jokes aside this was a cool read .
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Cephalopods nautilus... The fact you found time to ... Nevermind. Eh.. you still G in my book MW.. The rhymescheme i felt a tad bit dry at the end buuuuuut it didnt take away from the actual conception and content.
You kept it simple yet details with the metaohors YDK more of a storyline touch saw your verse as the binder connecting V1 through V3 and it was placed well. The last verse kept its composure as a topper The internal metaphor itself was decent. . . . Now i dont feed with just that yall know me YDK and Wrecka from before i keep it real sooo... This as a collective for cyphering.. i mean ok. Cool nice vibe cool dialect. Nothing damaging. Nothing even remotely binding all together as a direction of content really. The piece was far to abstract and i feel alot of forced rhymes and achemes implemented to sort of woo the crowd with words and hymns really. The aikido like was even disheartening because if you fact checked the referance line you would learn it wasnt even a form of respective martial arts used for the samurai because they were metal warriors so close quarter combat and non-weapon encounters in combat was unlikely because of the way of samurai. Just a little history into it on my behalf. But overall the piece as a collective i just dont see the topic nor direction just perspectives as if you wrre the samurais in the pics.... But that then still leaves it an empty story.
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