I need someone smart to read my book - Page 3

Answer · 07-04-2021, 08:37 PM

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

Ouch · 07-04-2021, 09:22 PM

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....

you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

Answer · 07-04-2021, 10:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Ouch

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....

you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

What’s reddit

UPN Zuch · 07-04-2021, 10:42 PM

Bro ouch is owning you right now

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 11:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Pakistani Hand Cannon

if callin you a rat snitch, & reminding you how you call the po lice on internet forum members often cause it obv bothers you on some level to be so pussy, is love...

then deffo me

also

salute on writing a book Answer, genuine.

More of an obsession but yea, the following me around in every thread possible to use a fake personal while taking the reaction of “that’s a fake personal” as I’m bothered and you won an equally imaginary troll prize is a bit obsessed

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 11:27 AM

Also gay

BOOM · 07-05-2021, 11:40 AM

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Originally Posted by ~RustyGunZ~

More of an obsession but yea, the following me around in every thread possible to use a fake personal while taking the reaction of “that’s a fake personal” as I’m bothered and you won an equally imaginary troll prize is a bit obsessed

lmao if this ain’t the pot calling the kettle fat

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 01:48 PM

If you put as much effort into selling hot tubs as you do making aliases on a text forum in 2021 your wife might fuck less black guys while your kids nap

BOOM · 07-05-2021, 02:00 PM

lmao ur wifes cunt juice taste of honey glazed ham

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-05-2021, 02:02 PM

Delicious

Your wife look like cured meat

kungfugrip · 07-06-2021, 03:46 PM

Lmao this is hilarious

kungfugrip · 07-06-2021, 04:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Answer

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

I have 3 screenplays written and i send them out willy nilly. My favourite one is about how racist WWF was in the 80s. It's called Tusslemania 10: The Caucasianing, and i used alot of those Million Peso Man jokes from UPN

07-04-2021, 09:22 PM	#42
Ouch Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 5,684 Battle Record: 1-5 Accomplishments - Lost to Kill Spree Champed - Wall Talking Rep Power: 4052252	go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write.... you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick __________________ I just figured out how to change this.

07-04-2021, 08:37 PM	#41
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,676 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 12534702	I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

07-05-2021, 02:00 PM	#49
BOOM Member Join Date: Apr 2020 Posts: 77 Rep Power: 0	lmao ur wifes cunt juice taste of honey glazed ham

07-06-2021, 03:46 PM	#51
kungfugrip Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2017 Posts: 2,440 Rep Power: 76703	Lmao this is hilarious