01-11-2021, 04:55 PM | #41 |
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Tell me about it.
My frustration is through the roof, I can't vote even due to this.
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01-11-2021, 05:01 PM | #42 |
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lmao can’t vote, or won’t?
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01-11-2021, 06:14 PM | #43 |
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I got PTSD now!
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Thread was closed while i was voting. If anybody cares about feed.
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Vote: Brokenhalo Both of you had interesting approaches that led to enjoyable reads but neither made too strong an effort to connect to the topic. I think Brokenhalo did better with at least using some explicit tie ins, though he never explained how his verse is related to balloons. Pharoah's verse is only loosely related, though I enjoyed the story telling. Stronger rhyme would have made your verse more competitive, I think halo did enough on the technical side to take this battle. |
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@Adverse I’ll be putting in the work tomorrow my man.
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01-11-2021, 11:15 PM | #46 |
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It's an unfortunate situation. I respect the work you put into your verse and it seems like it was an honest mistake. It comes from wanting your piece to be good, I can sympathize. But at the same time, can't really blame Adverse for following the rules. He's going out of his way to mod a league he didn't sign up for, gotta give him some leeway to run it.
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01-11-2021, 11:42 PM | #47 |
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Word.
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01-12-2021, 09:16 PM | #48 |
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Can me and Mr. J get some more votes (along with the other open battles). Would be great to move on to the next week of this thing.
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01-12-2021, 10:29 PM | #49 |
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01-12-2021, 10:47 PM | #50 |
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@fraze
Thanks for the feed man. My whole verse was about the loss of touch with reality. That's how it relates. But I can agree with you that my rhymes were too simple at times. @Universe Lol at you calling the DQ. Well, I guess Adverse would have eventually? But just last week you had one of the longest topicals in the history of text and you're really gonna jump brokenhalo for going too long? Eh. If someone had asked me ahead of time I would have said to allow it. But he didn't ask. EDIT: btw Congratulations on earning your way into my signature. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 01-12-2021 at 11:20 PM. |
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lol at Pharaohs Army pouring over my 200 line piece that I dropped over a week ago with the intensity of an autistic child counting toothpicks...
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