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12-15-2020, 11:54 AM | #2 |
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AJAX LOOKS LIKE AN OLD WHITE WELSH WOMAN
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12-15-2020, 12:48 PM | #3 |
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12-15-2020, 03:21 PM | #4 |
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YOU HAVE A HIGH BMI AND A SHORTER THAN AVERAGE ANTICIPATED LIFE SPAN.
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12-15-2020, 03:45 PM | #5 |
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YOU'RE BOTH INCREDIBLY LOVELY PEOPLE
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12-15-2020, 08:51 PM | #6 |
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12-15-2020, 11:08 PM | #7 |
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Wtf was wrong with david ortiz/dave adore tees & caller id/collar id?
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12-16-2020, 12:43 AM | #8 |
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no one missed that hot trash
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12-16-2020, 12:44 AM | #9 |
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12-16-2020, 01:26 AM | #10 |
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Lmaoooo
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12-16-2020, 02:29 AM | #11 |
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JUST WAIT TILL DAVE SHOWS THAT HANDSOME CHISELED FACE IT’S OVA
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12-16-2020, 04:35 PM | #12 |
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12-17-2020, 05:28 AM | #13 | |
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12-17-2020, 09:30 AM | #14 |
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Jesus Christ at Dave Adore Tees
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12-17-2020, 09:48 AM | #15 |
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Dave Adore Tees is fine phonetically, but issue number 1 is that it's a battle and the words you choose to use are important. You can't say "Adore" or "Adorable" in a battle and come off aggressive or insulting. The best thing you can do is try to spin it so that it's a comedic angle rather than an aggressive one, but that didn't happen.
Issue 2 is the set-up didn't really feel like an organic transition to the bar. "This guy dresses like a bum, I know he adores t-shirts" has conflicting implications and is just an overall weird sentence to say Issue number 3 is the context didn't fit the syntax. The full set-up was "I know Dave Adore Tees" which syntactically should have said "I know Dave Adores Tees". There's an appropriate context for saying Adore instead of Adores, it's a present-tense verb. You'd have to format your sentence to say something like "I went into hot topic to watch Dave Adore Tees" this is just the standard boilerplate autism, let me know if you need the weapons-grade autistic breakdown. Last edited by Answer; 12-17-2020 at 10:09 AM. Reason: just got the covid vaccine |
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12-17-2020, 01:10 PM | #17 |
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lmao @ standard boilerplate autism
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12-20-2020, 12:39 PM | #18 |
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Good shit @Destroyer. But also y'all can't change my mind that des got bodied.
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