WILDCARD WEEK: #8 iSpaz VS #9 Destroyer / DESTROYER ADVANCES

[UPN Zuch]

Welcome to the NBL PLAYOFFS

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Line limit

Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm PACIFIC December 18, 2020 (Friday)

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Good luck, gentlemen

[iSpaz]

16 gun bars no cap

[Destroyer]

how about 12?

[iSpaz]

Ok 14s cool

[iSpaz]

iight...

Scout had a Cartel bar but I'm the one with an uzi crew
I'll send them Medellín kids to ur front door.. but it won't be w/ scooby doo
You a bitch always scared nd you'll never be great
I'll have you foldin so many times people thinkin desecrate
You an internet rapper just @ing and tagging on a website
If you in my hood watch me come at you and tag you in real life
I'm no doctor but w/ my gats you'll be tested
I'll put the hammer to ur knees but I aint checkin reflexes
You poor bastard I came thru cause i knew the role
'Bust a cap off a brand new .40' then pour the OE out at your funeral
Ur old ass scares top shelf hos you should hide or go.
Look at Designer pants, I'm the one getting inside of those.
Large caliber hitman so it don't matter if you fear me
When that gat hits w/ a big bang ur expanding clearly

[Destroyer]

Originally Posted by iSpaz

Ok 14s cool

why don’t u have a seat, spaz. dog, ur tendencies mad wrong...
that’s not his check in... that’s a quote from his ‘to catch a predator’ chat log
fuck u doing in the playoffs? you’ll only get into trouble
only reason u even made it here is cuz of the NBL bubble
des makes blondes sweat & what ain’t faris u won’t ever be a success
u ain’t never had a shot to impress jamie pal, u were destined to be just friends
you’ve been avoided by other people ur whole life like no one’s ever seen
u think covid’s why u didn’t get invited to ur 10 year reunion? bro it was in 2017
ur best bars are still played out. i keep praying for something better, but not yet...
the fucking zodiac cypher from ‘69 that they just cracked still had fresher concepts
u won’t be around for the new year, cuz des bringing the steel to the party
so if spaz getting a stimulus check, it’s two quick breaths and a feel for a heartbeat
u got nothing to offer the league or text. do us all a favor and stop it now
at this point ur the second biggest hack this week that no one wants to talk about

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Spaz -

Scout had a Cartel bar but I'm the one with an uzi crew
I'll send them Medellín kids to ur front door.. but it won't be w/ scooby doo
You poor bastard I came thru cause i knew the role
'Bust a cap off a brand new .40' then pour the OE out at your funeral

Dont kill me, Spaz. Really only liked those two lines bud. desecrate, wasnt a fan. tag you in real life was a whiff. hammer to your knees is pretty dated. closer was close, but needed a reword.

Des -

why don’t u have a seat, spaz. dog, ur tendencies mad wrong...
that’s not his check in... that’s a quote from his ‘to catch a predator’ chat log
u won’t be around for the new year, cuz des bringing the steel to the party
so if spaz getting a stimulus check, it’s two quick breaths and a feel for a heartbeat
u got nothing to offer the league or text. do us all a favor and stop it now
at this point ur the second biggest hack this week that no one wants to talk about

Giving you only half points for the hack line, it helps to reference the hack/google somewhere so we fully get it. Bubble was a whiff, Just Friends was a no for me, 2017 as well. Zodiac cypher could've been something special, but it feels uninspired, like you're just mentioning it to mention it.

I got Des with one more quotable. Cool battle.

V - Des

[UPN Zuch]

OE bar was dope af, and LOTB. The rest of the verse was okay at best. Some basic jabs. Seems like you wanted to play it safe.

Des was more consistent. Opener was my fav line. Thought it was funny. The just friends bar did not work but it was a good try lol. Heartbeat was cool too. The rest you at least attempted some cool angles, which was enough.


Vote Des

[fraze]

Originally Posted by iSpaz

Scout had a Cartel bar but I'm the one with an uzi crew
I'll send them Medellín kids to ur front door.. but it won't be w/ scooby doo
creative. its a stretch but it also kinda works. less of a stretch than Dave Adore Tees
You a bitch always scared nd you'll never be great
I'll have you foldin so many times people thinkin desecrate
nah. wp for des a crate works, but 'people thinking desecrate' doesn't mean anything
You an internet rapper just @ing and tagging on a website
If you in my hood watch me come at you and tag you in real life
ok but light
I'm no doctor but w/ my gats you'll be tested
I'll put the hammer to ur knees but I aint checkin reflexes
too simple.
You poor bastard I came thru cause i knew the role
'Bust a cap off a brand new .40' then pour the OE out at your funeral
not feeling this
Ur old ass scares top shelf hos you should hide or go.
Look at Designer pants, I'm the one getting inside of those.
this is ok. wording is weird but the punch is there
Large caliber hitman so it don't matter if you fear me
When that gat hits w/ a big bang ur expanding clearly
concept is ok. wording is bad

Quotes: Medellin kids, Designer pants
Close: desecrate, @ing and tagging

Cool verse iSpaz. You came with a lot of wp and had some fresh concepts along with a few things that missed. Keep up the creativity, i think thats the main thing you need to work on. You have the mechanics down, just need to find the right punches and work on your wording.

Originally Posted by Destroyer

why don’t u have a seat, spaz. dog, ur tendencies mad wrong...
that’s not his check in... that’s a quote from his ‘to catch a predator’ chat log
this would have hit harder if you didn't ask for 12 tbh.
fuck u doing in the playoffs? you’ll only get into trouble
only reason u even made it here is cuz of the NBL bubble
don't like this. concept is there but don't think you did enough
des makes blondes sweat & what ain’t faris u won’t ever be a success
u ain’t never had a shot to impress jamie pal, u were destined to be just friends
how is this supposed to rhyme?
you’ve been avoided by other people ur whole life like no one’s ever seen
u think covid’s why u didn’t get invited to ur 10 year reunion? bro it was in 2017
what is going on right now
ur best bars are still played out. i keep praying for something better, but not yet...
the fucking zodiac cypher from ‘69 that they just cracked still had fresher concepts
the zodiac cypher?
u won’t be around for the new year, cuz des bringing the steel to the party
so if spaz getting a stimulus check, it’s two quick breaths and a feel for a heartbeat
thank you Des. this is a real punch.
u got nothing to offer the league or text. do us all a favor and stop it now
at this point ur the second biggest hack this week that no one wants to talk about
this is dope. why the fuck isn't anyone talking about the Russia hack. that shit is an act of war. this shit is crazy

Quotes: stimulus check, 2nd biggest hack
Close: opener

I'm not always a fan of your wording, but I respect your craft and you usually have decent bars. This verse had more misses than usual to me. I really thought you were going to fuck around and lose this one. But you pulled it out in the end with to solid punches to close your verse.

Vote: Destroyer iSpaz made an impressive showing and had some cool wp ideas. I have him with more mentions but Medellin and Designer were both graded on a curve, I'm giving him the quotes but the wp isn't perfect. The 2 bars from Des are both worded to hit well and are pretty fresh flips. Esp the closer.

[Hush]

Des opener was tight



Spas that pour out a 40 line was Crazy
Lotb
Fire


But u used a hammer to ur knees reflexes bar


Sorry doggy that’s played af



Vote Des

[UPN Zuch]

Des wins 4-0 and advances.