11-25-2020, 11:09 PM | #1 |
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Formation
I think back to the formulation of where my rhymes start
I'm composing vibes, the metronome beats to my heart I want to paint a picture, a room with all the fixtures, a world with all the pictures worth a thousand words in a universe where a dream isn't deferred however reality occurs, in other words, drifting with the wind, I flow, deep within the echoes, double talk, rethink memento...
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11-26-2020, 04:23 AM | #2 |
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this is nice. i liked the pacing shifts.
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I like how natural and conversational this piece flowed. Dope switches between lines. Pretty philosophical. And maybe intentionally introspective in concept? Idk. But I dug it.
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