WEEK 6: Defiant 1-0 VS Hotdogvendorman 1-0 HDVM WINS OPEN FOR FEED

UPN Zuch · 11-09-2020, 03:57 AM

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Line limit

Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm EST November 12, 2020 (Thursday)

Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE

Good luck, gentlemen

Defiant · 11-09-2020, 01:00 PM

Hey 12?

hotdogvendorman · 11-09-2020, 10:50 PM

In..

hotdogvendorman · 11-13-2020, 12:38 AM

Extension plz.

hotdogvendorman · 11-14-2020, 12:06 AM

Something quick my bad...

NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..
& I've never let a night w them waste..
Left their faces Flushed Nd sprayed on they asses too just like a bidet..
A beast w this.. Devoured plenty in cannibal mode..
Fuck I'm a whole different animal.. U just fuck a different animals hole..

Aero · 11-14-2020, 01:09 AM

Zuch, if we can get this closed.

sral · 11-14-2020, 03:33 AM

Deon still bringing some fresh shit

UPN Zuch · 11-14-2020, 03:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero

Zuch, if we can get this closed.

No I’m keeping it open for feed.

Fracture · 11-14-2020, 05:02 AM

Lmao hotdog vendor with some entertainment. Good shit man

Kuality · 11-14-2020, 07:13 AM

Good to see you after all this while deon. Hope that youve been doing well. Nice verse. Drop often.

Scout · 11-14-2020, 07:53 AM

NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..

This was all good
Especially splitting hairs. Not feeling the last couple but who cares
Keep grinding

fraze · 11-15-2020, 07:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hotdogvendorman

NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds..
Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served..
cool
I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme..
Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi..
wordy but funny
Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered..
But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers..
cool wording but this is light to me
& I've never let a night w them waste..
Left their faces Flushed Nd sprayed on they asses too just like a bidet..
not feeling this
A beast w this.. Devoured plenty in cannibal mode..
Fuck I'm a whole different animal.. U just fuck a different animals hole..
harsh closer. cool

Nice verse.

UserName · 11-15-2020, 08:06 AM

first two lines were pure swag lol, loved it. poppyseed made me laugh too, side note - i cant find those rolls anywhere here in VA.

some of the lines are a little long-winded for my fat lungs but i dig them nonetheless.

Good shit, Deon.

11-09-2020, 10:50 PM	#3
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	In.. __________________ The Bad Guys..

11-13-2020, 12:38 AM	#4
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	Extension plz. __________________ The Bad Guys..

11-14-2020, 12:06 AM	#5
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	Something quick my bad... NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds.. Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served.. I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme.. Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi.. Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered.. But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers.. & I've never let a night w them waste.. Left their faces Flushed Nd sprayed on they asses too just like a bidet.. A beast w this.. Devoured plenty in cannibal mode.. Fuck I'm a whole different animal.. U just fuck a different animals hole.. __________________ The Bad Guys..

11-14-2020, 01:09 AM	#6
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,827 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Zuch, if we can get this closed. __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

11-14-2020, 03:33 AM	#7
sral Shrewd as evearthed Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 8,270 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899392	Deon still bringing some fresh shit __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

11-09-2020, 01:00 PM	#2
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	Hey 12?

11-14-2020, 05:02 AM	#9
Fracture Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 1,120 Battle Record: 9-2 Rep Power: 10222950	Lmao hotdog vendor with some entertainment. Good shit man __________________ "Yo you can customize your dick in this game"- username "That's a STRONG asshole"- username "Theres no dick like good dick"- Username

11-14-2020, 07:13 AM	#10
Kuality Member Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 80 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	Good to see you after all this while deon. Hope that youve been doing well. Nice verse. Drop often.

11-14-2020, 07:53 AM	#11
Scout Jeice! Who's that? Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 293 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 1230370	NBL just hype shit from Blue, Orc and Zuch.. Fuck all the praise for these nerds.. Shit while I'm stirring the pot.. all this salty bitch Def can do is wait to be served.. I'm cooking up heat when I compete w a rhyme.. Ur abt to see Hotdog on a different kinda roll like that poppyseed shit they eat in the Chi.. Ur terrible Def plus whatever synonymous words you've discovered.. But it's no point splitting hairs when the ones in my bed are ur girls & ur mothers.. This was all good Especially splitting hairs. Not feeling the last couple but who cares Keep grinding

11-15-2020, 08:06 AM	#13
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	first two lines were pure swag lol, loved it. poppyseed made me laugh too, side note - i cant find those rolls anywhere here in VA. some of the lines are a little long-winded for my fat lungs but i dig them nonetheless. Good shit, Deon. __________________ First Class