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WEEK 6: Username 3-1 VS Culture 2-0 CULTURE WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST November 12, 2020 (Thursday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen
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11-09-2020, 04:07 AM
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Yooooo
10?
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11-10-2020, 11:08 AM
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K I N G
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Actually I got 16. Lemme know what you wanna do.
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11-10-2020, 12:16 PM
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16 is good, check
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11-10-2020, 12:17 PM
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Spoiled brat
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I already have User’s 16. @Culture
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11-10-2020, 01:41 PM
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 No @Zuch votes we all know if u drop ur pants he’ll gag and choke on the pipe Faggot'll hop on Top quicker than he can switch accounts & vote for u twice but ur girl got BOMB pussy.. bitch fucked me til I blacked the shit out it was a fiiirreee drill, u got home & I took the quick route out the back of ur house Begged me to dick her down, cuz when u hit the cherry it’s comical Ur sex tapes lookin like Bond films cuz ur fat ass makes missionary impossible i quit drinking.. haven’t had a drop in MONTHS or taken a swig Ur girl BEGS u to go months without a drop.. cuz u battle instead of raising ur kids rob ur punk ass for ALL the cash & pull the blade on ur wife u’ll think I smuggled contraband into prison how i’m takin that cake w/ a knife wannabe text GOAT.. I’ll run ur pockets, kill u, & shred evidence U ain’t on Rushmore but u can get ur face carved over some dead presidents My goons move at night, at sundown I’m lettin the clips spark movie phone etiquette, I slide up & put u to sleep the second it gets dark Louisville Slugger to pummel every inch where ur wound spawns I’ll take a bat to the infection site so quick it’ll turn ground zero in Wuhan |
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11-10-2020, 01:51 PM
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SURVEY SAYS... this week my dinner time is 10 minutes after you post Start listening man, YOU should be off kickin’ a can I could provide a better Culture than you by donating the spit in my hand This ain’t a worthy show, you’re a piss ant, ya dirty hoe Blame Zuch; apparently all it takes to move up is one legit win and 30 votes I’m robbing you blind, just shutup and embrace it Make one sound and my bat’s finding you like echolocation Fuckin’ simp, spoils his girl while I’m sexing the whore Keep treating her right, I’ve always preferred my pussy ethically sourced You really are a special flavor of faggot Make an off the cuff remark, I’m tearing your rotator to match it We can all come together and laugh at this ugly creature While I hang bits of Culture from the ceiling like an African Studies teacher All those foolish flows, FUCK you, you ain’t a movement, yo You’re nothing but a small fry, and everyone knows what I do with those
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11-10-2020, 02:19 PM
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Culture - 1st bar was hard, good personal made Zuch look silly // fire drill needed more // missionary impossible was cute // battle instead of raising kids was witty but didnt hit as hard as it could've if we knew he had kids // cake with knife was cool // Rushmore was FIRE // movie etiquette could've been better // bat infection wihan was creative but no sting.
Verse was good. Lot of I'll hurt you concepts from middle to end though. User - survey dinner was kinda corny // culture spit in hand is a dope concept but more needed to be done // 30 votes hehe // echolocation was dope // ethically sourced was bad // off the cuff was dope lol // culture african was cheap // small fry was corny lol Typical good verse but some corny stuff mixed in. Hot & cold. This was a dope battle. User conceptually was clean and funny. Culture had that president was a standout. Hard battle to vote on bc User had echolocation, Culture and the bat line as really good ones. I'll have to do a number breakdown bc I'm undecided. Edit: Not doing numeric breakdown. Takes too much time. User was hot but had more bad misses. I think Culture takes this.
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11-10-2020, 02:43 PM
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Cool battle... and really close.
Culture is obviously an alias for someone. Verse was pretty well worded, although some got a little weird/forced (wound spawn, etc).. But, all in all, it was mostly solid concepts. Too many gun/violence bars for my taste, but was a good verse top to bottom. User also had a solid verse. Thought the rotator cuff and African studies back to back was dope. Whole thing was well done. This was tough to call. Ultimately, I think Culture pulled it out by a hair, even though I’m not a fan of the gunbar style, I think the way the concepts were flipped was slightly better.. but both were nice. Good battle.
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11-10-2020, 04:57 PM
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This was a pretty good read. It deserves an explained bar breakdown so I'll reward it with that.
Bar 1: I dug how User used used a play on what Culture posted about dinner time but the punch just bigged himself up rather than hurt Culture's feelings. On the otherhand Culture's bar was abetter and was a personal that did hurt User by saying/alleging he has fradulent votes. It was strong just wish it was a stronger shot at User instead of being more a shot at Zuch than anything. Bar 2: Culture's jab was hot and kind of fresh with the fire drill wordplay but it was just a braggadocio line with a fictional personal which I don't care for. But it was fresh enough to beat User's who's bar was just too bland and easy to think of. Bar 3: Again with Culture I like the wordplay in the bar but I lean more towards personals that sting with succintness. And I think User did that here and took this bar. Bar 4: User took it with a really fun bar that has an interesting play on using a bat as a weapon and the ability of the animal. Culture's bar was hardhitting but User was better because although one bar is an allegation and the other just a threat User's was more creative. Bar 5: Same here as bar 4 but its the opposite as Culture was more creative this time and had the harder hitting bar. Bar 6: Gruesome line from Culture! lol A fresh play on knifing a muthafucka but also contained nice connectivity by seamlessly incorporating the dead presidents in it. User I've seen the off the cuff line before so this one didnt have the punching power for me as your other decent ones did. Bar 7:I think both lines were predicatable but Culture's was fresher in his wording and delivery. So Culture takes tbis one. Bar 8: Culture wins this bar by a centimeter. I was not a fan of either closer and felt like yall both got kind of tired and shit at the end lol but yea Culture's was better due to a punch instead of merely name calling from User. All in All, this battle was a good read for me. I hope it gets lots of votes because its deserving. Culture good job in nearly every punch but great wording! User you showed good creativity with the echolocation line but Culture showed it more often with multiple bars. Vote = Culture |
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11-10-2020, 05:56 PM
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Vote - Culture
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11-10-2020, 07:13 PM
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we all know if u drop ur pants he’ll gag and choke on the pipe
Faggot'll hop on Top quicker than he can switch accounts & vote for u twice Begged me to dick her down, cuz when u hit the cherry it’s comical Ur sex tapes lookin like Bond films cuz ur fat ass makes missionary impossible i quit drinking.. haven’t had a drop in MONTHS or taken a swig Ur girl BEGS u to go months without a drop.. cuz u battle instead of raising ur kids wannabe text GOAT.. I’ll run ur pockets, kill u, & shred evidence U ain’t on Rushmore but u can get ur face carved over some dead presidents vs. Oh, faggot’s got jokes? Ur bout to get bashed by your quotes SURVEY SAYS... this week my dinner time is 10 minutes after you post Start listening man, YOU should be off kickin’ a can I could provide a better Culture than you by donating the spit in my hand I’m robbing you blind, just shutup and embrace it Make one sound and my bat’s finding you like echolocation You really are a special flavor of faggot Make an off the cuff remark, I’m tearing your rotator to match it We can all come together and laugh at this ugly creature While I hang bits of Culture from the ceiling like an African Studies teacher All those foolish flows, FUCK you, you ain’t a movement, yo You’re nothing but a small fry, and everyone knows what I do with those good battle. for real. but....I liked almost all of User's stuff. Whoever Culture is, you are pretty dang good, that Rushmore line was flames, like super flames. Still not quite enough. v User |
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11-11-2020, 04:51 AM
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Culture
Opener is more of an insult to Zuch but I liked it because nobodies been there yet Fire drill was cool Mission impossible was a miss to me Drop is ok Could’ve done more with contraband, wasn’t overly feeling Rushmore is cool Movie phone etiquette was cool at first read but actually could’ve had better wording Wasn’t feeling the closer Even though I didn’t get a load of quotables from this I really dig your style. Solid verse. Culture’s clearly an alias.. I feel like I’m reading someone else’s style that I’ve read before.. hmm Username Opener solid although a little corny Culture was cool Blame Zuch personal wasn’t great to me. Didn’t really say anything clever Echolocation is ok Ethically sourced missed for me Off the cuff ok I like the idea of African studies bar but hang bits of him from the ceiling? Really? Idk.. Small fry was too simple I’ve got to give the nod to culture here. User again came solid with the wording but the closer and opener just came off a bit bland and corny to me. You probably had similar quotes but I liked cultures style more. Vote culture |
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11-11-2020, 04:34 PM
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Jeice! Who's that?
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Culture
we all know if u drop ur pants he’ll gag and choke on the pipe Faggot'll hop on Top quicker than he can switch accounts & vote for u twice i quit drinking.. haven’t had a drop in MONTHS or taken a swig Ur girl BEGS u to go months without a drop.. cuz u battle instead of raising ur kids wannabe text GOAT.. I’ll run ur pockets, kill u, & shred evidence U ain’t on Rushmore but u can get ur face carved over some dead presidents My goons move at night, at sundown I’m lettin the clips spark movie phone etiquette, I slide up & put u to sleep the second it gets dark Louisville Slugger to pummel every inch where ur wound spawns I’ll take a bat to the infection site so quick it’ll turn ground zero in Wuhan User This ain’t a worthy show, you’re a piss ant, ya dirty hoe Blame Zuch; apparently all it takes to move up is one legit win and 30 votes I’m robbing you blind, just shutup and embrace it Make one sound and my bat’s finding you like echolocation You really are a special flavor of faggot Make an off the cuff remark, I’m tearing your rotator to match it We can all come together and laugh at this ugly creature While I hang bits of Culture from the ceiling like an African Studies teacher All those foolish flows, FUCK you, you ain’t a movement, yo You’re nothing but a small fry, and everyone knows what I do with those Prettty close But eyo .. Nothing from User wowed me this week. He was still on point, but I think he may've been betting on Culture not being able to do better than he did vs. Allen Knight (not saying he did bad). That, and User JUST coming off a war w/ Hush may've had something to do with his take on this matchup... Culture though, showed the fuck up in a big way and threw out a few potential lotw's with a hot verse. I could've bolded a couple more of his, tbh. Crazy good concepts my man This IS close, but not as close as a 5v5 in standouts normally would be..imo. There was a clear difference in effort User was good. Culture was great Missionary impossible was really bad though And fire drill felt familiar like someone did a similar drill/military line recently Could be wrong Either way Voting Culture |
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11-11-2020, 05:36 PM
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Bags will be avenged
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Vote username for not being a pussy faggot who hides under alias and then proceeds to come with a verse full of personals like some sort of barcotic-built in the sands of tattooine desert text robot who doesn’t even speak the common bocci language of moisture evaporators.
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11-13-2020, 07:15 PM
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My avatar is a man, urGAY
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we all know if u drop ur pants he’ll gag and choke on the pipe
Faggot'll hop on Top quicker than he can switch accounts & vote for u twice fire lol but ur girl got BOMB pussy.. bitch fucked me til I blacked the shit out it was a fiiirreee drill, u got home & I took the quick route out the back of ur house pretty cool Begged me to dick her down, cuz when u hit the cherry it’s comical Ur sex tapes lookin like Bond films cuz ur fat ass makes missionary impossible this was bad bad bad i quit drinking.. haven’t had a drop in MONTHS or taken a swig Ur girl BEGS u to go months without a drop.. cuz u battle instead of raising ur kids I don’t get it rob ur punk ass for ALL the cash & pull the blade on ur wife u’ll think I smuggled contraband into prison how i’m takin that cake w/ a knife alright wannabe text GOAT.. I’ll run ur pockets, kill u, & shred evidence U ain’t on Rushmore but u can get ur face carved over some dead presidents dope My goons move at night, at sundown I’m lettin the clips spark movie phone etiquette, I slide up & put u to sleep the second it gets dark I get it but I didn’t like it Louisville Slugger to pummel every inch where ur wound spawns I’ll take a bat to the infection site so quick it’ll turn ground zero in Wuhan solid closer 4 good 1 ok 3 misses Vs Oh, faggot’s got jokes? Ur bout to get bashed by your quotes SURVEY SAYS... this week my dinner time is 10 minutes after you post nah Start listening man, YOU should be off kickin’ a can I could provide a better Culture than you by donating the spit in my hand you keep spit in your hand? I mean I get it...decent here This ain’t a worthy show, you’re a piss ant, ya dirty hoe Blame Zuch; apparently all it takes to move up is one legit win and 30 votes alright I’m robbing you blind, just shutup and embrace it Make one sound and my bat’s finding you like echolocation cool concept but execution was pretty basic...overall a decent line Fuckin’ simp, spoils his girl while I’m sexing the whore Keep treating her right, I’ve always preferred my pussy ethically sourced ok now this one I don’t get man You really are a special flavor of faggot Make an off the cuff remark, I’m tearing your rotator to match it ok We can all come together and laugh at this ugly creature While I hang bits of Culture from the ceiling like an African Studies teacher dope lol might even be LOTB All those foolish flows, FUCK you, you ain’t a movement, yo You’re nothing but a small fry, and everyone knows what I do with those lol I liked this, cool closer 2 good 2 ok 2 decent 2 misses Really good battle here. I like culture’s style, yeah sure he’s an alias but who gives a fuck. Des on some gay shit for that vote. Username came pretty consistent but his hits weren’t as hard as cultures. Definitely could go either way but I have culture taking it wirh harder hits. Couture |
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