WEEK 5: Bleak 0-0 VS Hotdogvendorman 0-0 HDVM WINS BY NS OPEN FOR FEED

UPN Zuch · 11-01-2020, 09:17 PM

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Line limit

Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm EST November 5, 2020 (Thursday)

Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE

Good luck, gentlemen

hotdogvendorman · 11-02-2020, 12:00 AM

Yo..

bleak · 11-05-2020, 01:35 AM

oh shit yeah 10

UPN Zuch · 11-05-2020, 11:12 PM

@bleak @hotdogvendorman what’s up

hotdogvendorman · 11-05-2020, 11:33 PM

I'm about to post

UPN Zuch · 11-05-2020, 11:54 PM

@bleak requested an extension

hotdogvendorman · 11-06-2020, 12:01 AM

Bleak?..
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He don't satisfy his woman... it's divorce to come..
See I think her spirit bomb.. Even pounded her pussy w the force of one..
Now I'm back on the scene & leaving stuff dismantled..
But Im outta the loop.. Cuz that vibrating condom was too much for her to handle..
Yo I've spent countless hours romancing the hoes..
& with bleak they can't count less hours til they want this man to go home..
I ain't messing around. He won't be found left in the ground..
Ima leave bleak in a lake, b.. once I'm finished dissecting this clown..
When my team tryna ride I'm w it... The vibes apparent..
When ur team tryna ride U got more pressing issues dialing 911 jst like a Karen..
I'm at home on the throne. U been faced against greatness..
I'll leave ur frame unhinged..then move a new couch N fridge thru the space thats created..
Challenge? please.. Bleak you so wack it's seen..
I run a higher risk w diabetes, obesity or tight rope walkin on a balance beam..
Punchs aint working for shit. Uve betrayed all writers..
The Economy evn saw a spike in furlough days the way you lay off- fire..

UserName · 11-07-2020, 08:23 PM

Spirit bomb line was doooope.

I think the pressing issues line could’ve been reworded a little to be dope as well. Fresh concept tho.

Good to see you back at it, bro.

UPN Zuch · 11-07-2020, 08:23 PM

You’re gonna do just fine here.

Good stuff my guy.

11-02-2020, 12:00 AM	#2
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	Yo.. __________________ The Bad Guys..

11-05-2020, 11:33 PM	#5
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	I'm about to post __________________ The Bad Guys..

11-06-2020, 12:01 AM	#7
hotdogvendorman Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 220 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 403870	Bleak?.. . . He don't satisfy his woman... it's divorce to come.. See I think her spirit bomb.. Even pounded her pussy w the force of one.. Now I'm back on the scene & leaving stuff dismantled.. But Im outta the loop.. Cuz that vibrating condom was too much for her to handle.. Yo I've spent countless hours romancing the hoes.. & with bleak they can't count less hours til they want this man to go home.. I ain't messing around. He won't be found left in the ground.. Ima leave bleak in a lake, b.. once I'm finished dissecting this clown.. When my team tryna ride I'm w it... The vibes apparent.. When ur team tryna ride U got more pressing issues dialing 911 jst like a Karen.. I'm at home on the throne. U been faced against greatness.. I'll leave ur frame unhinged..then move a new couch N fridge thru the space thats created.. Challenge? please.. Bleak you so wack it's seen.. I run a higher risk w diabetes, obesity or tight rope walkin on a balance beam.. Punchs aint working for shit. Uve betrayed all writers.. The Economy evn saw a spike in furlough days the way you lay off- fire.. __________________ The Bad Guys.. Last edited by UPN Zuch; 11-07-2020 at 11:16 AM.

11-07-2020, 08:23 PM	#8
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	Spirit bomb line was doooope. I think the pressing issues line could’ve been reworded a little to be dope as well. Fresh concept tho. Good to see you back at it, bro. __________________ First Class