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Alright.
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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@Cakedout
key 4 u <3 <3 <3 u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff. but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup this guy can die. dunno why he tried. if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat. if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that |
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I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news
So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display To show you when being the batter your still half of cake You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells.. Last edited by Cakedout; 06-19-2013 at 02:14 AM. |
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Yo @Cakedout good shit dude, don't forget to vote on two battles and put links in this thread
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Yo I will def get back to you both with some breakdowns (if you want it) but for now my vote is going to sharp for some fresh quotables like the feeling lucky google line the opener and the line about doubt and text died. << shit was awesome.
Props your verse caked it was pretty good I don't think ive peeped you before - keep up Vote sharpino |
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Loves Meth
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I gotta vote for Sharp...
Both verses were decent but Sharp started it and ended better and had more clever punches than the other dood. I'd say the other had a little bit more structure because Sharp had came with a key.... If his punches had more hit to them I'm sure he would've gave Sharp a run for his money. |
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2-0 Sharp. More votes.
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Sharp Nine you needto polish your verses more, to much filler in them to be effective.
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Cakedout had more a solid verse, few bars it felt like you took off but w/e. Quote:
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Vote: Cakedout
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creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score |
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u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject simple, but worded very well. ill have you gone. after this ull be way more than low-key youll fadeaway so easily the Spurs'll wish you were playin that OT ha, dece i pull 5-7 range chicks. its not bad, n im not about that fake stuff. but only girls wanna Mary Ca are hideous n cover themselves with makeup okay. this guy can die. dunno why he tried. if anyone readin this battles feelin 'Dout, its cuz his verse made em think text finally died hah, dece you're ugly. doodily dweedley bop thats a lil scat. if a girl sees u an says 'im feeling lucky', its cuz she typed hideous into google then hit that lotb // I got bars for the duke, His funeral becomes part of the news So tools I might look to 'hand some' after I get sharp in a suit connection seems kind of gay, but i get the bar & it's pretty solid. That scope arc isn't new, if this shooter rifle pouring Yall gone see nines on my feet w/o a jump man from Michael Jordan lol meh, i actually don't mind gunplay but this was avg. I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base heh, ok. Step up to the mat or plate, I'll strike you out w/ this fast ball on display To show you when being the batter your still half of cake mehhhhhh, okayy You never been vicious or sick mate because you kept your cards held mourning cruisers knows you wouldn't even put a sign in your ground hosting garage sells.. poorly worded, not feeling it tbh. // overall sharp took this somewhat easily. cake ur verse wasn't bad @ all really, ur concepts are ok you just need to word them better, like ur 1st bars wording was flawless, but then the concepts got more stretched as the verse went on, def. not a bad verse tho. cool battle guys. v/ sharp Last edited by Atomic; 06-27-2013 at 09:44 PM. |
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u aint the real Brah. cant write to his effect
ur an imitation Cake that a diabetic would reject Against I bring nouns with grace that carry pounds of weights You could be babe Ruth and still wouldn't be able to make it around this base Alright verses from both you, definitely liked both. Sharp just had better crafted punches Sharp |
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