10-16-2020, 06:49 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 3: Mac 1-1 VS Adverse 1-1 ADVERSE WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 20, 2020 (Tuesday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________ |
10-16-2020, 07:25 PM | #2 |
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yoo.. good luck my man.. 10 is plenty
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10-16-2020, 07:39 PM | #3 |
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Good luck to you too sir
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10-19-2020, 12:45 PM | #4 | |
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My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those? I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez |
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10-20-2020, 11:26 PM | #6 |
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extendo pls
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10-21-2020, 03:49 PM | #7 |
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do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention so clearly that marriage has a conflict his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped have her stripped then ill fuck her with power she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room |
10-21-2020, 05:46 PM | #8 |
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Body and hard reset were the standouts. The rest was lack lustre to me Mac Nothing on par with ads standouts I gotta say.. Mac, I’ve seen you come better but lately you’ve seemed off the pace or like you’re not putting much effort in. Vote Ad |
10-21-2020, 09:54 PM | #9 |
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The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset vs not feeling much v/adverse. Seems like Mac was trying to change up his style a bit, some cool concepts up in there, could be fire w/ some wording fixes imo.
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10-22-2020, 06:58 AM | #10 |
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For Ad:
Opener was nice, smooth Complimenting body cool, I just flipped Barcotic body last week tho Hard reset line was nice, smooth again For Mac: Wisdom was a cool idea Wired up/FB server cool idea too Next time you’ve written a verse send it to me and I will help with the wording I’ve got Ad |
10-22-2020, 07:47 AM | #11 |
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Adverse:
"The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week" "They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset" Mac: "anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room" Kind of a nonchalant battle here. Adverse had a couple nice lines but you could tell he was coasting. I can always tell by the length of his bars how hard he tries lol. Mac, you started to get momentum by the end but by then it was too late. Maybe should've went 16? Vote: Adverse
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10-23-2020, 01:46 PM | #12 |
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I’m gonna go against the grain here and vote for my boy Mac
No question that ad’s verse is crafted better and looks more polished...on the surface But I was really only feeling his THIS body bar My man Mac had the opener which was funny, and also the ad skipped, which were both good concepts. I can see this going to ad, obviously. But I preferred mac’s offering so I’m voting for him Ahh fuck I read it again. I missed the hard reset bar. That’s actually a dope bar. Goddammit Mac. Work on your wording. The concepts are there. V/adverse |
10-23-2020, 02:15 PM | #13 |
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Liked both efforts but Mac’s felt a bit rushed. Ad had some bangers actually too and did enough for the W. Good effort both.
Vote - ad
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both struggled mac seems burnt out or didnt try adverse had good ideas he always does. but he shit the bed on every punch wording v adverse
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10-23-2020, 05:48 PM | #15 |
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Body line was flames
Hard reset was cool Vs Porn ad maybe Vote adverse
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10-23-2020, 07:10 PM | #16 |
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The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week" They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset vs. Nothing quotable really Seen much better "Ad" bars then the porno one so its tough to credit it , spirits couldve been funny for a really old flip but the rushed setup ruined it Adverse, while far from his best, got it |
10-23-2020, 07:38 PM | #17 |
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Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those? Decent I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed Wack The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week Blahnik They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset Trash Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez Trash This verse sucked ad do you even have a wife? thats a real question last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention Blah so clearly that marriage has a conflict his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped Smh have her stripped then ill fuck her with power she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower Ok lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum Ok anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room Smh This sucked to... This battle is terrible But I will say AD won |
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