08-10-2020, 11:11 PM | #1 |
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Contender Match: Hush 5-1 vs Destroyer 4-2 - HUSH WINS
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08-11-2020, 07:50 AM | #2 |
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08-11-2020, 09:26 AM | #3 |
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08-14-2020, 01:55 PM | #4 |
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For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro
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08-14-2020, 02:06 PM | #5 |
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Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food? But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island |
08-14-2020, 05:13 PM | #6 |
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Hush Hendrix opener was nice. Scribble shirt was cool but setup hurt it. I think you rushed this verse a bit? Worse crop was cool.
Des was pretty solid throughout. I liked everything except the coon eyes bar. Good verse. I think Des took this quite comfortably with just a better worded verse and more good angles. |
08-14-2020, 05:24 PM | #7 |
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For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation Lol nice Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote Cool, good again I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down Ermm not feeling this Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it It’s ok Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing Lol ok again But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro Kinda simple but it’s not a miss Vs Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink Lol solid opener I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same It’s hilarious that his hair does look like a helmet but this loses something cos u not really wearing a helmet urself? I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerising Ok Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food? But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon Dope lol It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes Not feeling man that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island Not feeling much either Oh man this one’s tough. Hush was more consistent but des had higher highs to me, just funnier. I’m gonna go on the verse I enjoyed more and I’m leaning Des Vote - Des |
08-14-2020, 10:20 PM | #8 |
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Borderline scribble Crop work (ok) Closer was alright to Vs Cleaner pussy Pours (ok) Salt n pepper I gotta give this to hush... I thought his consistent outshined Des harder hitting bars Vote hush... But close af
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08-14-2020, 11:16 PM | #9 |
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Hush was super consistent here. Cocky and a lot of wit. First 6 were good and the growing bar.
Des had some hot stuff too. Salt and pepper and first 4 were dope. I got hush BARELY Good battle though guys I enjoyed it |
08-15-2020, 11:26 AM | #10 |
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For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro vs. I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing Almost quoted Destroyer's opener, but much like Evad's this week..it was too simple/dated. An obvious and expected flip to be used with a cat in the pic Then I almost quoted the helmet bar, before noticing Destroyer is wearing a hat... Destro's verse seemed rushed Hush got it |
08-16-2020, 10:49 AM | #11 |
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I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing Cool section here, I really liked the wear your girls pussy out/button down idea - i dont think you spent enough time really fleshing it out, you made it into 2 lines when i think with tighter wording you could've done that whole idea in just the punch. Still, clever, and the uhoh/eddie line was comedy. Des - Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island Des, you kinda had the issue I saw with Wand in some of this verse. Some of the 'punches' come off very statement-ish and it stifles the impact of any creativity you were going for. The salt and pepper line, for instance. However, beyond that - I really liked the sink line, really liked the haircut line, pours could've been harder, loved the idea, didn't really vibe with the execution - same as Hush's wear the pussy out line above. Easter Island was light, but comedy. Overall, I feel like Des got this one, off the strength of one more quotable. I really like the sink line, I guess I'd consider that LOTB for me. Hush felt a bit rushed/lazy on his wording this week. I still dug a lot of his verse, which speaks to his skill. Dope battle, but Des edged it to me. V - Des
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08-17-2020, 08:51 AM | #12 |
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For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation ok Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote cool I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down funny but light Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it ok Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing not really feeling it But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro cool Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink funny but light I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same are you referencing a pic that isn't in this thread? Not a huge fan tbh I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing funny but light Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food? But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon lol cool It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes ok that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island not really feeling this one. Looked it up and everything. Got nothing. I'd say the punches were about as strong from each so this is probably just going to be preference. I thought Hush was a tad more consistent. V/Hush |
08-17-2020, 08:58 PM | #13 |
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For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation cool Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote decent I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down not getting this Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it okk Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing yup But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro cool vs. Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink funny lol I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same lol I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising? Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing okk Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food? But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon not hard hitting It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes okk that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island cool lol I preferred destroyer verse here. both displayed very good but at the end destroyer was slightly more consistent |
08-17-2020, 10:28 PM | #14 |
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purple haze was ok lil light
liked scribble button down coulda been cleaner tied up hittt crop work fiire jew fro was light vs pussy was straightforward helmet ok faucet was a miss, maybe i missed something pepper funny but light coon was ehhh easter island was random af Hush had the top 2 lines and was punchin more, not the best des i’ve seen here v Hush
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