Sharp Nine vs. Utmost {Sharp Nine wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

@Sharp Nine @Utmost

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Tuesday,
  June 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Friday June 14th at 11:59 PM PST.
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  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
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[Sharp]

coo'

10?

[Utmost]

check

[Sharp]

sent 10

[Utmost]

may need a bit of an ext

[Sharp]

all goody

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Utmost

Drop by 3pm EST tomorrow

[Utmost]

sent.

[Utmost]

Since Seth didnt post it up, might as well drop urs
@Sharp Nine


Better hype ur mags, coz u'll be fuming mad when ya failures marked
since YOU gassed yaself up.. only to be let down the same way...elevator farts
Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"
Ura vet jockin, crew votin lame.. mid tier, puss for brains n' a plottin louse
I mean, thats such a crooked 5, Nine... Im expectin the rest of slaughterhouse
Last of a Dying Breed..Huh!? Ur booboo at best...top in text? IT ISNT!!!
s'like you butt buddies are outta toilet paper...d'way that Roll Call is so shit driven
& itsa shame this timid mistake of life, aint takin a wife - Sharps gay, amirite?
Id say wait justa Cot pickin minute.. cept thats where YOUR sleepin when a chicks stayin the nite
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[Sharp]

G'luck

ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
swerve merked your ass. god damn you blow, nerd
no chance a' gettin Pat down... u should browse some Al-queda employment brochures
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog
n ur homes a wreck. a shitty roof aint keepin you dry, scout
aint just fulla leaks... ur pads on the shortlist for Snowden's possible hideouts
im beating you here. anythin different is BS, whore
no matter what ur gettin Second, Son... might as well order a PS4

[Boredom]

Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"

vs

ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog

sharp edged with slightly better execution and wording imo made for 1 more quotable.

[Atomic]

Better hype ur mags, coz u'll be fuming mad when ya failures marked
since YOU gassed yaself up.. only to be let down the same way...elevator farts
rofl, not bad
Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"
lmao, funny
Ura vet jockin, crew votin lame.. mid tier, puss for brains n' a plottin louse
I mean, thats such a crooked 5, Nine... Im expectin the rest of slaughterhouse
heh, punch has no sting but i liked it
Last of a Dying Breed..Huh!? Ur booboo at best...top in text? IT ISNT!!!
s'like you butt buddies are outta toilet paper...d'way that Roll Call is so shit driven
mehhhhh, not feeling it breh
& itsa shame this timid mistake of life, aint takin a wife - Sharps gay, amirite?
Id say wait justa Cot pickin minute.. cept thats where YOUR sleepin when a chicks stayin the nite
saying is cottin pickin minute? either way i didn't really like the concept/or line tbh

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ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
okay.
swerve merked your ass. god damn you blow, nerd
no chance a' gettin Pat down... u should browse some Al-queda employment brochures
nah
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog
haha, dece
n ur homes a wreck. a shitty roof aint keepin you dry, scout
aint just fulla leaks... ur pads on the shortlist for Snowden's possible hideouts
no.
im beating you here. anythin different is BS, whore
no matter what ur gettin Second, Son... might as well order a PS4
not bad

v/ Utmost, barely. he had 2 quotes for me & a dece bar. Sharp had 1 bar for me & 2 decent ones, so he edged this out. Overall I just enjoyed utmosts verse a little more overall/he was more consistent w/ his punches/concepts.

Originally Posted by Utmost

Since Seth didnt post it up, might as well drop urs
@Sharp Nine


Better hype ur mags, coz u'll be fuming mad when ya failures marked
since YOU gassed yaself up.. only to be let down the same way...elevator farts
--lol'd but corny--
Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"
--this is cool--
Ura vet jockin, crew votin lame.. mid tier, puss for brains n' a plottin louse
I mean, thats such a crooked 5, Nine... Im expectin the rest of slaughterhouse
--alright--
Last of a Dying Breed..Huh!? Ur booboo at best...top in text? IT ISNT!!!
s'like you butt buddies are outta toilet paper...d'way that Roll Call is so shit driven
--ehhh--
& itsa shame this timid mistake of life, aint takin a wife - Sharps gay, amirite?
Id say wait justa Cot pickin minute.. cept thats where YOUR sleepin when a chicks stayin the nite
--could have been dope w/ better wording.--
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

G'luck

ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
--cool--
swerve merked your ass. god damn you blow, nerd
no chance a' gettin Pat down... u should browse some Al-queda employment brochures
--alright--
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog
--haha--
n ur homes a wreck. a shitty roof aint keepin you dry, scout
aint just fulla leaks... ur pads on the shortlist for Snowden's possible hideouts
--ok--
im beating you here. anythin different is BS, whore
no matter what ur gettin Second, Son... might as well order a PS4
--ok

2-1 quotes in Sharp's favor. I liked non quotables about the same for each. This was a cool little 10 liner, utmost had some potential with some of those concepts but just didnt deliver on them as I'd hope. Same for sharp, tbc. Anyway, 2-1 in Sharp's favor so

V/ Sharp Nine

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Utmost

Since Seth didnt post it up, might as well drop urs
@Sharp Nine


Better hype ur mags, coz u'll be fuming mad when ya failures marked
since YOU gassed yaself up.. only to be let down the same way...elevator farts
kinda funny, but corny
Beatin Most, Are you on crack whore??? better pm ya crew n ask fa shore
I see Sik learned u well..coz both of you fags live by "you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours"
good. LoL I had this exact same concept for my SC verse this week til I saw you beat me to it
Ura vet jockin, crew votin lame.. mid tier, puss for brains n' a plottin louse
I mean, thats such a crooked 5, Nine... Im expectin the rest of slaughterhouse
not bad. Like the concept. Set up was ehh - 'puss for brains' and 'plottin louse' didn't sound good
Last of a Dying Breed..Huh!? Ur booboo at best...top in text? IT ISNT!!!
s'like you butt buddies are outta toilet paper...d'way that Roll Call is so shit driven
punch/wp concept is cool but I think the wording wasn't the best
& itsa shame this timid mistake of life, aint takin a wife - Sharps gay, amirite?
Id say wait justa Cot pickin minute.. cept thats where YOUR sleepin when a chicks stayin the nite
Not bad. Again the wording is not the best
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Lot of decent concepts. Work on wording them to get the punch coming off harsher. Good job.


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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

G'luck

ur FN performance was shit, til u get good concepts i dont wanna see ya
if ur finna cyphon that level again, consider doing that to some decent ideas
good. original wp & personal. Didn't rhyme well for me but it's probably my accent
swerve merked your ass. god damn you blow, nerd
no chance a' gettin Pat down... u should browse some Al-queda employment brochures
like the personal/wp but how you flipped it was corny
ur mutant-lookin chick loves me. woo, she oughtta be cloaked w/ smog
she sees me and that bitch is glowin... an not just cause she looks like a chernobyl dog
lol good. Dug the set up. Simple wp but came with a funny flip and harsh punch. Good bar
n ur homes a wreck. a shitty roof aint keepin you dry, scout
aint just fulla leaks... ur pads on the shortlist for Snowden's possible hideouts
Not bad current event concept
im beating you here. anythin different is BS, whore
no matter what ur gettin Second, Son... might as well order a PS4
dont get this

Getting good, keep it up :)


purely concepts-wise I'd edge it to Sharp but he easily had the better wording of the two. Not a total blow out but it's a clear winner to me


vote - Sharp