Rnd1- Zuch vs Wanderer {Zuch Wins}

[Hush]

10 lines


Due tonight.


@Zuch @Wanderer

[UPN Zuch]

They gave me the number 1 seed..

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
I’m old school, that tiny head is reason to laugh
You’re putting on for a new era, and it’s a fitted, size three and a half
you’ll bring up SC, go ahead and call it shame
You lose newbie tourneys, I’m the final boss for the Hall of Fame
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions

[Wanderer]

Had a crack at NC fame but got hurt tryna dip ur toes
& Nasal up in ur thoughts like considering surgery on that nose
To me ur foreign anyway so I ain’t getting so hyped
now that tearjerkers hung around ur neck making u a French stereotype
Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
&& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
Step & imma go Wild West. how u tryna attack??
Put the stick to ur jaw & spark, that’s a cowboy lighting a match

[UserName]

since battles are so short ill vote line by line i guess...

Zuch -

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
^clever
I’m old school, that tiny head is reason to laugh
You’re putting on for a new era, and it’s a fitted, size three and a half
^clowning, lol - i love it
you’ll bring up SC, go ahead and call it shame
You lose newbie tourneys, I’m the final boss for the Hall of Fame
^swagger bar, still cool...
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
^cool, not bad
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions
^lolll


Wanderer -

Had a crack at NC fame but got hurt tryna dip ur toes
& Nasal up in ur thoughts like considering surgery on that nose
^cool WP, not really a WP guy but it was clever to flip Neigh into Nasal and bring his nose into it
To me ur foreign anyway so I ain’t getting so hyped
now that tearjerkers hung around ur neck making u a French stereotype
^meh, not feeling it really
Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
^cool, clever
&& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
^meh again
Step & imma go Wild West. how u tryna attack??
Put the stick to ur jaw & spark, that’s a cowboy lighting a match
^cool

Zuch got this pretty handily to me, Wand had the Nasal line which was probably my favorite of his verse, and the Z's/bore to sleep line, but everything else was just so-so. Zuch had more swagger, and was just overall wittier.

V - Zuch

[Resin M-I-C]

big d matt is aight
fitted is comedy, liked that
hof ehh, shit was light
marty mcfly was fiiiire, hard to believe i havent heard that before, nice
turn by turn was a solid closer

vs

neighs’ll? lil off to me bro
preferred another direction with tearjerkers
z’s is a certified banggerrrr.. damn nice
footin bill was light
cowboy was heaatt

z’s and cowboy lines were crazy from wand, more of those plz, maybe one more mighta swayed this... but he also had the bottom two lines in this battle.. 3 to 2 in quotes for zuch just enough to take it.. lovin that mcfly bar

v zuch

[Adverse]

Big dick Matt was cool, nice opener
New era was funny
Hof was decent, more statementish than anything
Marty mcfly was dope
Turn by turn I wasn't totally a fan of.

Vs

I did neighs'll/nasal flip in summer classic so didn't feel entirely fresh but was okay
Tear-jerker ehhh
Z's was cool
Footin the bill was okay, I liked it
Closer was sick

Honestly Wander did pretty dope here but he just got over powered, here and had more misses imo

V/Zuchie

[Sharp]

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
okay
I’m old school, that tiny head is reason to laugh
You’re putting on for a new era, and it’s a fitted, size three and a half
cool
you’ll bring up SC, go ahead and call it shame
You lose newbie tourneys, I’m the final boss for the Hall of Fame
did someone else call themselves the final boss recently? whatever. this is okay but a little bland for me
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
cool
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions
eh


Had a crack at NC fame but got hurt tryna dip ur toes
& Nasal up in ur thoughts like considering surgery on that nose
weird wording but fire concept. good bar
To me ur foreign anyway so I ain’t getting so hyped
now that tearjerkers hung around ur neck making u a French stereotype
I had no idea the stereotype of French guys with onions around their neck was a thing but it absolutely is. The 'hung around your neck' part gives me a little pause because that isn't really something I've ever heard used both ways, but I also didn't understand the French guys with onions
Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
not bad but wording is alright
&& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
I like this but the actual punch part comes out of nowhere. I think it could've been fire if it were prepared more. the setup is
'zuch's poor zuch's poor'
and the punch is
'zuch's poor... I'll kick your face off'

somewhere in there you could've set up the actual punch a little better imo. Even something like 'I wouldn't just foot the bill....' would make this a barnburner imo
Step & imma go Wild West. how u tryna attack??
Put the stick to ur jaw & spark, that’s a cowboy lighting a match
cool


I'm gonna hit up wanderer about the french stereotype shit cause I'm an uncultured american swine

EDIT:
I'm about even in quotes but I have zuch with the lotb being back to the future. It just game down to wording. Wanderer had some sick personal angles that didn't feel as polished, but that's a key for you. Really good ideas from Wanderer but zuch got it with wording. Dope battle guys.

V/zuch

[Barcotic]

Nasal is mad old on Neigh
No way I can quote that

And new era is old af too

Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
1 letter nameflips are a nono usually, but this^1 was creative enough to get quoted in a key. Possibly lotb too, surprisingly
& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
Barely quoted^

Vs.

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
if it weren't for the setup, this^isn't quoted. Good stuff
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions

Mvgt Zuch

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Zuchiefiasco

They gave me the number 1 seed..

My real number is out of this world, past planets in fact
You can find it in your girl’s galaxy, she’s got it under Big Dick Matt
I almost didnt get this, simple and fire. this hits.
I’m old school, that tiny head is reason to laugh
You’re putting on for a new era, and it’s a fitted, size three and a half
this seems meh to me, maybe cuz im from the "ghetto" and every loser wanabe rapper in the hallway growing up had a "im the new era/fitted hat" scheme or punchline. so for ME personally this dont work. I get the relevance to his pic, but this just brung bad memories for me
you’ll bring up SC, go ahead and call it shame
You lose newbie tourneys, I’m the final boss for the Hall of Fame
this works, works on a few levels. I usually dont like self brag but this hits.
Twin glocks loaded, party of 5
These 80’s will make that vest bubble like you’re Marty McFly
lol i love marty man, I dig this
Me and the boys run trains until your girl has learned her lesson
We call her GPS, she’s always giving us turn by turn directions
cool

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Had a crack at NC fame but got hurt tryna dip ur toes
& Nasal up in ur thoughts like considering surgery on that nose
lmao nice. this is good wp
To me ur foreign anyway so I ain’t getting so hyped
now that tearjerkers hung around ur neck making u a French stereotype
I deadass dont get this. I tried. the tear jerker is what? reference to a close battle? is the tear drop necklace a french invention? im confused man. this is too vague. setups are supposed to be used to help explain the punch. this didnt help me
Srs.. Ur wins are truly beyond me & I’m keen to admit
Z’s often known to come out on top.. only cos u bore us to Sleep with ur shit
its aight. a one letter nameplay is lazy to me. but its cool for what it is
&& claiming ur pockets are deep’s a disgrace
Ur NEVR Footin’ the Bill.. but I’ll kick that giant beak off ur face
lol ok
Step & imma go Wild West. how u tryna attack??
Put the stick to ur jaw & spark, that’s a cowboy lighting a match
this is cool

this is a good battle. its close.


Wand had the worst line and Zuch had the best line

comes down to that in my mind.

I really liked that galaxy bar for its simplicity.

Wand opener was fire as well. But I didnt really like the french line. that line cost him the battle to ME


v Zuch