06-16-2020, 08:31 PM | #1 |
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Week 10: evaD 1-2 vs. Enbombz 1-1 - Dave wins
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more @evaD @Enbombz
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06-17-2020, 10:53 AM | #2 |
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06-19-2020, 05:19 PM | #3 |
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06-19-2020, 06:29 PM | #4 |
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Yeh just post up tomorrow
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06-20-2020, 06:37 PM | #5 |
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I get in high speed chases, you stay at home cos your afraid of the world,
Last time you had the cops on your tail..The precinct ran a train on ya girl I throw weights round the gym, you turn up n they mock ya If you bring a muscle up to the table it’s cos you work at red lobster make ya girl watch me get my belly on two rounds in ya living room...Leave that bitch sweatin like a Peloton She gotta explain to ya kid how you had to split n ya gone heaven He got wings..caught a couple of hot ones...they hit him like Sean Evans How you think you dope? have you been dropping some drug's That termite stick if every week you didn't get squashed like a bug Last two battles left you shook, you got a lesson in text You hear "Hi Res" and it’s Clear To See you get upset and distressed Not one was even close, cos you suck at the text shit If we Say your opponent won by a nose...It was zuchs for perspective Last edited by Enbombz; 06-20-2020 at 06:45 PM. |
06-20-2020, 07:56 PM | #6 |
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Flipped rhymes from this gay joker? Folk want no part of it yo
When they see he Wack’n goes both ways just like a Barcotic vote The largest oaf acting violent, but to me it seems uncertain.. Last time he promised a good hiding I could see his feet beneath the curtains N holdin’ the AR over this homo dude’s been overdue, So I’ll keep the semi open longer than Show n Prove I got No Reservations taking this weird faggot down Cuz he knows the whole Bourdain like him but he stays Hangin round.. Enbalms’ll be a fitting name.. when they pull the bandages back And see I left him with more booboos than Griselda ad-lib tracks This loose queer’s known to reveal secrets after a few beers So I’ll leave him Out for the count like when he told his parents on New Years These battles are too easy.. yea SMaSH was low hanging fruit But you Ouch... on Resin’s door handle... in an old banana suit Last edited by evaD; 06-21-2020 at 02:41 AM. |
06-21-2020, 04:09 AM | #7 | ||
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Cops on your tail Red lobster Zuchs nose evaD Hiding Out for the count These stood out the most to me. One more quotable from Enbombz but I was feeling Dave’s dope lines more and overall, he was more consistent and I could’ve added booboos/bourdain so I’m edging this in his favour Vote dave |
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06-21-2020, 02:24 PM | #8 |
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Enbombz your verse was pretty hit or miss for me but i felt your first two bars and Peloton kind of hit for me, as well. Zuch's nose was a good closer
Dave had the show n prove bar, coming out, grieselda was alright, thought Dave's misses were less noticeable but honestly think Bombz haymaker pushes him over the edge here. V/Bombz good battle to both though ended up being a toss up |
06-21-2020, 07:03 PM | #9 |
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yeah I thought this was pretty close...
bombz opener was solid and his follow-up was clever too, peloton and hot wings I wasn't feeling, termite was cool imo... res bar didn't work for me, closer was decent. evaD i liked how you took current events from the site and incorporated them instead of just generic punches, usually a good idea imo... thought the bourdain line was the highlight of your verse. both had some hits and misses imo, and i enjoyed reading both. I think bombz opener was lotb (though the bourdain line from evaD isn't far behind it imo) but overall I enjoyed the creativity of evaD's punches overall a little more. Others may disagree, but for me... v/ evaD |
06-22-2020, 01:00 AM | #10 |
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I get in high speed chases, you stay at home cos your afraid of the world,
Last time you had the cops on your tail..The precinct ran a train on ya girl Doesn’t make sense I throw weights round the gym, you turn up n they mock ya If you bring a muscle up to the table it’s cos you work at red lobster lol decent make ya girl watch me get my belly on two rounds in ya living room...Leave that bitch sweatin like a Peloton huh? She gotta explain to ya kid how you had to split n ya gone heaven He got wings..caught a couple of hot ones...they hit him like Sean Evans nah How you think you dope? have you been dropping some drug's That termite stick if every week you didn't get squashed like a bug hated the setup, decent here Last two battles left you shook, you got a lesson in text You hear "Hi Res" and it’s Clear To See you get upset and distressed good personal Not one was even close, cos you suck at the text shit If we Say your opponent won by a nose...It was zuchs for perspective Concept had potential but this wasn’t it Vs Flipped rhymes from this gay joker? Folk want no part of it yo When they see he Wack’n goes both ways just like a Barcotic vote nah The largest oaf acting violent, but to me it seems uncertain.. Last time he promised a good hiding I could see his feet beneath the curtains lmaooo I’m dead N holdin’ the AR over this homo dude’s been overdue, So I’ll keep the semi open longer than Show n Prove pretty good even though it had potential for more I got No Reservations taking this weird faggot down Cuz he knows the whole Bourdain like him but he stays Hangin round.. alright Enbalms’ll be a fitting name.. when they pull the bandages back And see I left him with more booboos than Griselda ad-lib tracks ok lol This loose queer’s known to reveal secrets after a few beers So I’ll leave him Out for the count like when he told his parents on New Years didnt like this These battles are too easy.. yea SMaSH was low hanging fruit But you Ouch... on Resin’s door handle... in an old banana suit fuck no Pretty cool battle here, I’ve seen some good stuff from enbkmbz but this wasn’t up to par with that. Hi res was his best line and I wasn’t feeling much else besides that. Evad had a much better verse here and was more determined to get the win. Vote evaD |
06-22-2020, 03:18 PM | #11 |
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I get in high speed chases, you stay at home cos your afraid of the world,
Last time you had the cops on your tail..The precinct ran a train on ya girl Funny here I throw weights round the gym, you turn up n they mock ya If you bring a muscle up to the table it’s cos you work at red lobster Hahaha funny again make ya girl watch me get my belly on two rounds in ya living room...Leave that bitch sweatin like a Peloton Are you calling BB a bitch? Confirmed Vs The largest oaf acting violent, but to me it seems uncertain.. Last time he promised a good hiding I could see his feet beneath the curtains Hahahaah this is fireee N holdin’ the AR over this homo dude’s been overdue, So I’ll keep the semi open longer than Show n Prove Okay relevant one I got No Reservations taking this weird faggot down Cuz he knows the whole Bourdain like him but he stays Hangin round.. Ok creative Enbalms’ll be a fitting name.. when they pull the bandages back And see I left him with more booboos than Griselda ad-lib tracks A bit silly. Set up was fire imo helped a lot Good battle Contrast of styles. I think Daves Smoother deliver probably edged him this one. Four quotes to three. Vote Dave but could go either way. |
06-22-2020, 10:12 PM | #12 |
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tail was lavvaa
mussel line maann, no for me haas peloton was cool sean evans was solid, had to google termite was corny lol hi res been done but i liked the direction i dont know how big zuch nose is vs barcotic was a miss, good concept tho curtains is hilarous semi been done but this was damnn good bourdain was ok same as griselda out for the count was heat closer a lil light l best battle this week i’ve read so far.. enbomz tail was prob my fav line here, but dave had a couple more hard hitters and that’s what swayed me here .. v dave
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06-23-2020, 09:11 PM | #13 |
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5-1 Dave wins
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