06-16-2020, 08:32 PM | #1 |
Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,091
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
- BA Tag
- NPL Roast
- Netcees Pic League
Rep Power: 17502332 |
Week 10: BodySnatcher 0-0 vs. Universe 0-0 - UNI WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more @Universe @BodySnatcher
__________________
"I shit myself
I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip |
06-16-2020, 11:33 PM | #2 |
Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
Rep Power: 3840895 |
How many gunbars we doin Brodie?
__________________
Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... |
06-17-2020, 03:33 AM | #3 |
Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
Posts: 999
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x)
- GWL Picture challenge(2x)
- Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 10178702 |
Not a single one, Adrian.
20 minimum but I'll go more if you want. EDIT - I'm good for 24 if you can manage that.
__________________
..Passed the Present and Future.. Last edited by Universe; 06-17-2020 at 08:09 AM. |
06-17-2020, 01:20 PM | #4 |
Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
Rep Power: 3840895 |
Whatever you wanna do Brodie.
__________________
Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... |
06-17-2020, 03:44 PM | #5 |
Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
Posts: 999
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x)
- GWL Picture challenge(2x)
- Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 10178702 |
I don't know you clown, no surprise with no archived posts to scout
I guess your style is like a cook in the army, nothing to write home about This dick weed ain't got the balls to pull out... that teck won't really blast Hands shaking, you overwrought with excitement... necrophiliac If this Guy Ritchie blew his cash, we all know you misdirected, 'snatch... You Punch Out fast, but a body snatcher's useless since I'm clearly ahead in raps... Your shit is TRASH, but you a "champ", ain't no doubt that's your next spiel I bet those "Hail Mary Haymakers" come farrrrrr out of left field... Feel a fist in every orifice, you a Street Fighter without awesome moves Things go awry, you ain't cunning enough to beguile even with a sonic boom Meaning you're a character we all use... watch what this rear naked choke proves I expect nothing less than a muted response after I make you sub, dude I'm so anti Body I'm immune, got time for some childish kid banter Since you repped, I'll bet your style morph 'round a pond then a Tiger Salamander (whaddup Barc) I'm a signed out Answer(s)... cheat sheets; You BS yourself if you think you top this It leaves me confused, honest... like people thinking "dead set" was a new concept Snatch can't think out the box, comic books; Think throwing hands got me shook? Your lines draw more deadpan looks than Robin Williams fans watching Hook He's mistook like Resin's Joker quip, but ain't nobody quotin' him He drops bars and everybody loses - a Barc/Lars battle when the votes come in Ask why I dislike his style, there's tons of reasons but I'll respond with a punch Cuz it will take more than Kobe & Gianna's cremation to warm up to Body's, for one... This body's snatched so I'm done, I'll even pay your debts nerd, mazel tov But only if you in a morgue n' free man... Neighbor's inner monologue... ;) Gone.
__________________
..Passed the Present and Future.. |
06-18-2020, 12:26 AM | #6 |
Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
Rep Power: 3840895 |
I'ma beat you off flow alone
His format is better for topicals so picture this...it goes pistol to wig or a chisel to rib/ Either way I'ma leave his face on the pavement...now the hood won't need a photo to know who's vigil this is/ This is just another episode...think Attack of the Clones...I'm equip w/ dual clips...there's no way he can guard & stop me/ Cuz I'ma raise these twins like they're my own...now two 15's are going off in his home; that's a Carbon copy/ If he doesn't come outside...these bullets will leave him stuck in the house like a bad kid/ I heard he's from Canada? So the last thing he'll hear is the 6 echo in the background w/o a Drake ad-lib/ I told him from the jump I'ma let the gun talk...this Trey-8 is genius...I'ma let it state a thesis It goes...beam out!...now he's got a red eye; that's an overnight flight...straight to Jesus/ This is what I meant when I said blade 2-face; I'm backstabbing...so I could peel his crown back w/the knife/ But I'd rather let a few shots go Across the Universe; this is the soundtrack to his life/ If anybody in his field trip...the special bus like I gotta extra arm; my style was born more deform/ But we're in a quarantine...so I already had the nose covered up…in other words...he'll get hit w/a homemade silencer; chloroform/ Let the stick bang off this clown's face: he's Sideshow Bob steppin where a rake might be/ I got so many pistols...I left my 9 at home & it still found a way in this bar w/o using a fake ID/ I'll leave so much steel in money; the IRS will think he's embezzling cash/ I told Blue I don't need an extension...I'ma just put ladder up against to his roof; that's a backyard wrestling match/ He can get a dome incision or download the app; Chrome extension/ & that's a footnote cuz if the eagle has landed then the bird came w/a toe tag; that's a homing pigeon/ These are troubling times but I gotta political agenda& it's for the best/ I'm more grotesque...if he lookin for a sign...I'ma draw the peace & put it in the air; thissa war protest/ I'll air out the joint until my wrist break…it'll look like an Arthur meme the way my fist shake/ I'm the type of nigga to do drive by...mishandle the texts…circle back...& let the auto-correct the mistake/ I heard the Universe moves in mysterious ways...that was until he made a grave mistake; I call that getting buried alive son/ So stick to poetry...& instead of trying to think outside the box...u should be tryna figure out how to breathe outside one/ You asked for this.
__________________
Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... Last edited by BodySnatcher; 06-18-2020 at 08:44 AM. |
06-18-2020, 12:30 PM | #7 |
Needs no introduction
Join Date: Mar 2016
Location: Toronto
Posts: 4,494
Battle Record: 29-31
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Survivor Tournament
- Pros vs. Joes
- Key Grand Prix
- Fight Night XX
- NBL Tag Team
- NBL Picture League
- Battle Arena
- Battle Arena Pics
- BA Tag Team (2x)
- 1-2 Punch League (2x)
- BAL Battle Royale
- NPL Roast
Rep Power: 3061965 |
I did auto-correct better
And I'm willing to bet Drake adlib & fake ID were both saved for me in a possible rematch (reworded obv). Would've ben dope, but enough about me This battle is dope, props to both I got... I don't know you clown, no surprise with no archived posts to scout I guess your style is like a cook in the army, nothing to write home about Your shit is TRASH, but you a "champ", ain't no doubt that's your next spiel I bet those "Hail Mary Haymakers" come farrrrrr out of left field... Annnnnnnnnd now I'm forced to change my haymaker bar before User drops, so fuck you for that Meaning you're a character we all use... watch what this rear naked choke proves I expect nothing less than a muted response after I make you sub, dude Snatch can't think out the box, comic books; Think throwing hands got me shook? Your lines draw more deadpan looks than Robin Williams fans watching Hook Ask why I dislike his style, there's tons of reasons but I'll respond with a punch Cuz it will take more than Kobe & Gianna's cremation to warm up to Body's, for one... Fucking fire rh^ This body's snatched so I'm done, I'll even pay your debts nerd, mazel tov But only if you in a morgue n' free man... Neighbor's inner monologue... ;) Vs. His format is better for topicals so picture this...it goes pistol to wig or a chisel to rib/ Either way I'ma leave his face on the pavement...now the hood won't need a photo to know who's vigil this is/ This is just another episode...think Attack of the Clones...I'm equip w/ dual clips...there's no way he can guard & stop me/ Cuz I'ma raise these twins like they're my own...now two 15's are going off in his home; that's a Carbon copy/ If he doesn't come outside...these bullets will leave him stuck in the house like a bad kid/ I heard he's from Canada? So the last thing he'll hear is the 6 echo in the background w/o a Drake ad-lib/ If anybody in his field trip...the special bus like I gotta extra arm; my style was born more deform/ But we're in a quarantine...so I already had the nose covered up…in other words...he'll get hit w/a homemade silencer; chloroform/ He can get a dome incision or download the app; Chrome extension/ & that's a footnote cuz if the eagle has landed then the bird came w/a toe tag; that's a homing pigeon/ Last 2 bars were bonkers This is a style clash if I ever seen one and I can mostdefinitely see it going either way. Botw contender or winner fs Body's concepts were better ftmp (w. the exception of that Kobe line) but Uni's wording and execution was better. His verse red smoother while Body's bars were a little too drawn out, no pun intended 6-5 in standouts (being generous w. 1-2 from each) Mvgt Universe in a good, close batt.
__________________
Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open Last edited by Barcotic; 06-18-2020 at 05:30 PM. |
06-20-2020, 09:19 AM | #8 |
Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
Rep Power: 3840895 |
Fuck you Bar lolololol. Appreciate the vote brodie
Nigga said enough about me. LMAO
__________________
Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... Last edited by BodySnatcher; 06-20-2020 at 10:27 AM. |
06-20-2020, 10:39 AM | #9 |
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 352
Battle Record: 3-6
Rep Power: 1313632 |
Universe
I don't know you clown, no surprise with no archived posts to scout I guess your style is like a cook in the army, nothing to write home about Simple, but made me chuckle. Good opener This dick weed ain't got the balls to pull out... that teck won't really blast Hands shaking, you overwrought with excitement... necrophiliac Don't like this style of bar If this Guy Ritchie blew his cash, we all know you misdirected, 'snatch... You Punch Out fast, but a body snatcher's useless since I'm clearly ahead in raps... My brain hurts Your shit is TRASH, but you a "champ", ain't no doubt that's your next spiel I bet those "Hail Mary Haymakers" come farrrrrr out of left field... Basic but aight Feel a fist in every orifice, you a Street Fighter without awesome moves Things go awry, you ain't cunning enough to beguile even with a sonic boom Ok Meaning you're a character we all use... watch what this rear naked choke proves I expect nothing less than a muted response after I make you sub, dude If this was reworded I'd like it more I'm so anti Body I'm immune, got time for some childish kid banter Since you repped, I'll bet your style morph 'round a pond then a Tiger Salamander (whaddup Barc) The punch confuses me I'm a signed out Answer(s)... cheat sheets; You BS yourself if you think you top this It leaves me confused, honest... like people thinking "dead set" was a new concept This is a miss for me Snatch can't think out the box, comic books; Think throwing hands got me shook? Your lines draw more deadpan looks than Robin Williams fans watching Hook Nice He's mistook like Resin's Joker quip, but ain't nobody quotin' him He drops bars and everybody loses - a Barc/Lars battle when the votes come in Never seen that battle but I can make an educated guess. But since that's the focus of the punch this a miss for me Ask why I dislike his style, there's tons of reasons but I'll respond with a punch Cuz it will take more than Kobe & Gianna's cremation to warm up to Body's, for one... Ok ok. Clever. A better set up and this would've been This body's snatched so I'm done, I'll even pay your debts nerd, mazel tov But only if you in a morgue n' free man... Neighbor's inner monologue... ;) I liked I like the style. Lots of wit, but some of the wording left me scratching my head. Deadpan & cremation >>> 7/10 VS BodySnatcher nahhhh man you did not just style your verse like this. His format is better for topicals so picture this...it goes pistol to wig or a chisel to rib/ Either way I'ma leave his face on the pavement...now the hood won't need a photo to know who's vigil this is/ Stretched but ok This is just another episode...think Attack of the Clones...I'm equip w/ dual clips...there's no way he can guard & stop me/ Cuz I'ma raise these twins like they're my own...now two 15's are going off in his home; that's a Carbon copy/ Fuckkk that setup stretched af. Not a fan of the punch If he doesn't come outside...these bullets will leave him stuck in the house like a bad kid/ I heard he's from Canada? So the last thing he'll hear is the 6 echo in the background w/o a Drake ad-lib/ Not a hit I told him from the jump I'ma let the gun talk...this Trey-8 is genius...I'ma let it state a thesis It goes...beam out!...now he's got a red eye; that's an overnight flight...straight to Jesus/ Abv avg filler This is what I meant when I said blade 2-face; I'm backstabbing...so I could peel his crown back w/the knife/ But I'd rather let a few shots go Across the Universe; this is the soundtrack to his life/ So so If anybody in his field trip...the special bus like I gotta extra arm; my style was born more deform/ But we're in a quarantine...so I already had the nose covered up…in other words...he'll get hit w/a homemade silencer; chloroform/ Stretch armstrong. Setup clever though Let the stick bang off this clown's face: he's Sideshow Bob steppin where a rake might be/ I got so many pistols...I left my 9 at home & it still found a way in this bar w/o using a fake ID/ No way, where's the diss I'll leave so much steel in money; the IRS will think he's embezzling cash/ I told Blue I don't need an extension...I'ma just put ladder up against to his roof; that's a backyard wrestling match/ Another where your set up > your punch He can get a dome incision or download the app; Chrome extension/ & that's a footnote cuz if the eagle has landed then the bird came w/a toe tag; that's a homing pigeon/ Too much These are troubling times but I gotta political agenda& it's for the best/ I'm more grotesque...if he lookin for a sign...I'ma draw the peace & put it in the air; thissa war protest/ Gun bar ooooooverllloooooaaaaaadddddddd I'll air out the joint until my wrist break…it'll look like an Arthur meme the way my fist shake/ I'm the type of nigga to do drive by...mishandle the texts…circle back...& let the auto-correct the mistake/ Clever I heard the Universe moves in mysterious ways...that was until he made a grave mistake; I call that getting buried alive son/ So stick to poetry...& instead of trying to think outside the box...u should be tryna figure out how to breathe outside one/ Ok I looked at your verse and didn't even want to read it with all the bold, "/"s, and how fucking stretched it is. HOLY FUCK it's stretched, you got like 30 syllables in your lines. Unacceptable, idc how clever they are. Good thing is, the verse wasn't as terrible as the structure. You can be witty af, but you channel a lot that creativity into gun bars. "I'll leave so much steel in money; the IRS..." How disappointing. If you normalized your structure, and had more VARIETY in your attack, this would've been much more enjoyable to read to me. 6/10 Deadpan LOTB > Cremation > Army Cook / Auto correct / Vigil Vote: Universe |
06-23-2020, 09:12 PM | #10 |
Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,091
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
- BA Tag
- NPL Roast
- Netcees Pic League
Rep Power: 17502332 |
Uppping for more votes
__________________
"I shit myself
I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip |
06-23-2020, 10:01 PM | #11 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 734
Battle Record: 33-9
Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II
- Tag Team Tournament V
- 1-2 Punch Season III
- Netcees SOL
- Battle Arena
- SOL Season I
- NBL Season XIV
- Netcees Battle League
Rep Power: 8150228 |
punch out
subdue vs face on pavement carbon 15s chloroform homing pigeon dont worry about the autocorrect bar, i did it before barc.. universe came cool but had a couple statementish bars.. and a salamnder line i dunno what that was.. body came with the usual, gunbar heavy verse.. but those pavement, carbon 15 and homing pigeon lines were straight up bangerrrrs.. tipped me his way v Body
__________________
C. O. B. |
06-24-2020, 03:40 AM | #12 |
Senior Member
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 697
Battle Record: 19-10
Champed - BA Show And Prove
- Summer Classic XI
Rep Power: 4156644 |
Universe had a bunch I didn’t really get or were a bit of a stretch (snatch)
Guile Peter Pan Muted could’ve been better Bodysnatchers were crazy long and would work better Live a capella but it was pretty jarring to read. That said he had better concepts although a bit gun heavy. If you’re gonna spend 30 syllables setting up a punch it needs to hit Vote - universe |
06-27-2020, 11:08 PM | #13 | |
(ง'̀-'́)ง
Join Date: Nov 2015
Posts: 15,853
Battle Record: 52-28
Accomplishments -50+ wins
Champed -Summer Classic VIII
-Netcees Battle League
-BA Picture
-BA TagTeam
-Fight Night Cypher I
-Fight Night XXXV
-Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
Rep Power: 85899403 |
Deadpan was okay I guess bars made more sense just super basic
Idk what kind of new crack they smoke at Twitter raps but body dropped some retarded trash straight out of a 2002 ezboards cypher and it speaks to his integrity that he left NC to write shit like that for a dumbed down audience Universe won in probably the least appealing battle of the season. Out of respect for the community I would request on behalf of the congregation neither of you battle over 12 lines anymore cus I only wasted my time reading this doodoo to help Blue move this along
__________________
Quote:
|
|
06-28-2020, 10:04 AM | #14 |
Hail Mary Haymakers
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: You know where I be at
Posts: 1,785
Battle Record: 17-7
Champed - BAL Roast
- Battle Arena League
- BAL Season Champ
Rep Power: 3840895 |
You guys are hilarious. Don't worry y'all won't have to read my shit no more. We don't mesh well.
Blue you can close this. I just did it for shits and giggles. Peace out NC.
__________________
Bang Bang. Don Demarco. It's shit like that.... |
06-28-2020, 10:45 AM | #15 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2016
Posts: 683
Rep Power: 2908896 |
vote body snatcher
Universe had a good opening bar. I liked that but outside of that, a lot of your bars came off... weird? Like I don’t want to sound harsh so I’ll just leave it at that. I think body snatcher was way more polished and consistent I don’t really think the match was close really. Vote body snatcher Although one or two of your bars had me lost like a muh fucker; like that no id gettin in bar punch? Last edited by the Munster; 06-28-2020 at 10:49 AM. |
06-28-2020, 11:03 AM | #16 | |
Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
Posts: 999
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x)
- GWL Picture challenge(2x)
- Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 10178702 |
Quote:
And thanks for the feedback guys, I'm obviously rusty as fuck lol. If I would've known this would be up for this long I would've spent more time on it lol.
__________________
..Passed the Present and Future.. |
|
06-28-2020, 11:12 AM | #17 |
GOAT
Join Date: Jul 2015
Posts: 4,826
Battle Record: 14-17
Champed - Site Diss Competition
- Tag Tournament III
- Lyric Olympics
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"
Rep Power: 0 |
The write home line was lols.
__________________
Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.
|
06-28-2020, 11:39 AM | #18 |
Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,091
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
- BA Tag
- NPL Roast
- Netcees Pic League
Rep Power: 17502332 |
Uni wins
__________________
"I shit myself
I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip |
|
|