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Wanderer vs. Adverse - {Adverse wins}
Round One . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Wanderer @Adverse
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06-01-2020, 11:36 PM | #3 |
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u wildin’? I’m king of the jungle.. this twat fucked
U got no Lion’s mane. Im just making the hairs on ur neck stand up Great power = great responsibility so my fists gotta make u weak Only crown laying heavy with u is dental work after I break ya teeth Ur clout a drought! This ur final curtain after I pull the shotty out ur mouth Lower the arm & watch ur head drop to ur waistline... we knew u’d be bowing out & LOL @ ur girl loyal. No time for small talk when she’s missed this Funny that bitch Converse.. but skips chat with me & gets down to business I’m Sneaking.. shiv hidden in my palm so the strike’ll be spontaneous Hands disguising a rusty old piece, rough round the edges like Barcotic’s alias ur own circle gimme ur whereabouts! They know I never been soft Fingernail torture - how u screaming in pain when someone reach out & I take the tip off Last edited by ~RustyGunZ~; 06-06-2020 at 07:03 AM. |
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Up and coming threat!?, your skills ain't strong I'll slay ya
You been on rookie shit but this the pro-test, bet it get this bitch killed - Breonna Taylor When the guns come out his mouth stops, you ain't hard and we know bruh Put Wand in the air with just a wave of the stick - Wingardium leviosa He took down an established name in the NBL, you see how this weakling did the vet? But it’s nothing new you upset Bar weekly, when you come in and they see you didn’t drink ya self to death Please! How could anyone believe this geeks freakin with your spouse? Only time wand's hittin the g-spot, is when she using a vibrator n he sleepin on the couch On the real bro, chicks ain't digging you, they can't even stomach this clown And any bitch having wanderlust a clear indication they needa get tf out of town Summer classic 9 will be repeated to the fullest, remind you of everything once that barrel burst You won’t CW when your season get canceled quicker than when it ended with that Arrowverse |
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Damn. This was almost impossible to vote on. If I could give it a tie, I would. I thought both had awkward wording that I found it hard to get into. But, both had some very cool concepts that I thought were creative and solid.
Ultimately, I think Adverse had slightly better concepts, although his lines were more awkward length-wise and he used too many name flips. Very close... and a good battle. But, if I had to choose a winner, Adverse is my pick. Last edited by Ajax; 06-06-2020 at 04:39 PM. |
06-06-2020, 04:29 PM | #7 |
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u wildin’? I’m king of the jungle.. this twat fucked
U got no Lion’s mane. Im just making the hairs on ur neck stand up Get it but this almost needs a pause lol Great power = great responsibility so my fists gotta make u weak Only crown laying heavy with u is dental work after I break ya teeth This is decent ‘crown laying heavy’ seems a strange phrase to use though Ur clout a drought! This ur final curtain after I pull the shotty out ur mouth Lower the arm & watch ur head drop to ur waistline... we knew u’d be bowing out This is niiice & LOL @ ur girl loyal. No time for small talk when she’s missed this Funny that bitch Converse.. but skips chat with me & gets down to business Decent but it doesn’t fully make sense I’m Sneaking.. shiv hidden in my palm so the strike’ll be spontaneous Hands disguising a rusty old piece, rough round the edges like Barcotic’s alias Lol this is pretty good but barely about yours opponent ur own circle gimme ur whereabouts! They know I never been soft Fingernail torture - how u screaming in pain when someone reach out & I take the tip off Ok closer bit of a left field concept but it works I guess Up and coming threat!?, your skills ain't strong I'll slay ya You been on rookie shit but this the pro-test, bet it get this bitch killed - Breonna Taylorthis is nicely done but if you lost a couple words out the second bar could’ve been even better When the guns come out his mouth stops, you ain't hard and we know bruh Put Wand in the air with just a wave of the stick - Wingardium leviosa Lol this is nice He took down an established name in the NBL, you see how this weakling did the vet? But it’s nothing new you upset Bar weekly, when you come in and they see you didn’t drink ya self to death Lol ok. Feel like Barcotic caught more disses in this battle than anyone else haha Please! How could anyone believe this geeks freakin with your spouse? Only time wand's hittin the g-spot, is when she using a vibrator n he sleepin on the couch Bit samey using wand flip again but the context is different and it works On the real bro, chicks ain't digging you, they can't even stomach this clown And any bitch having wanderlust a clear indication they needa get tf out of town Nice name play again. Could’ve been less wordy I think but nice Summer classic 9 will be repeated to the fullest, remind you of everything once that barrel burst You won’t CW when your season get canceled quicker than when it ended with that Arrowverse Don’t get the reference here tbh I’m guessing refers to last years SC obviously. Highlights for me were Bowing out vs breonna and Harry Potter bar I think Adverse edged this with the stronger highlights. Good from Both though. |
06-06-2020, 06:32 PM | #8 |
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Wand - solid verse nothing really stood out. The dental line was an almost.
Adverse - wand in air was coolish same with Wandeelust. Very close battle. I've battled Wand before and he's cone way better but I got Adverse here in a close one.
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i dunno.. this is way too close, could go either way.. Ad had the harry potter bar and a couple of almost quotables ie taylor.. wand’s opener was weird lol but original.. and i personally thought final curtain/bowing out was lotb.. that prob swayed me, damn close
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Close as fuck.
Wanderer: Ur clout a drought! This ur final curtain after I pull the shotty out ur mouth Lower the arm & watch ur head drop to ur waistline... we knew u’d be bowing out I’m Sneaking.. shiv hidden in my palm so the strike’ll be spontaneous Hands disguising a rusty old piece, rough round the edges like Barcotic’s alias Adverse: When the guns come out his mouth stops, you ain't hard and we know bruh Put Wand in the air with just a wave of the stick - Wingardium leviosa On the real bro, chicks ain't digging you, they can't even stomach this clown And any bitch having wanderlust a clear indication they needa get tf out of town Close af, like I said. I’m gonna give Adverse the nod here because I think he attacked Wand a little more directly. Tied on quotables, but even the stuff I wasn’t really feeling from Adverse we’re still cool/decent, where as I can’t really say the same for Wanderer. Props in the battle boys, good stuff. V - Adverse
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I though wands first half was okay. Closer wasn’t bad. Concepts were alright but weren’t very original. Executed tied in okay generally Adverse’s references were lost on me at times. There was a good 3 that I wasn’t familiar with. Nothing bad built nothing stand out for me. |
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Wand - bowing out was cool and hands bar was cool too. Nothing spectacular stood out imo
Ad - upset bar weekly was ur best bar, everything fell flat Wand had a bit more of an entertaining verse, he gets the nod here |
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Lions mane: corny/wack Crown: not bad, sounds weird tho Bowing out: I didnt like, to basic no flip Converse: didnt go anywhere, I was expecting a sneaker wp & then you start the next bar with sneak??? Hands: didnt like seems to be a Barc diss Fingernail: I didnt get this as a diss Adverse Taylor: had to google, okish didnt like the pro wp Wingblah: Jesus, Wand/Potter is played Bar: didnt like this, also Bar/drinking is played Vibrator: better np. Wanderlust: good np, I thought of this one too. Arrowverse is ok, kinda played to with Aero/arrow V-Ad only 2 bars I liked |
06-08-2020, 07:24 AM | #15 |
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Only crown laying heavy with u is dental work after I break ya teeth
Ur clout a drought! This ur final curtain after I pull the shotty out ur mouth Lower the arm & watch ur head drop to ur waistline... we knew u’d be bowing out & LOL @ ur girl loyal. No time for small talk when she’s missed this Funny that bitch Converse.. but skips chat with me & gets down to business Vs He took down an established name in the NBL, you see how this weakling did the vet? But it’s nothing new you upset Bar weekly, when you come in and they see you didn’t drink ya self to death Please! How could anyone believe this geeks freakin with your spouse? Only time wand's hittin the g-spot, is when she using a vibrator n he sleepin on the couch Wasn’t feeling much of adverse here. Seen wander list and wand/Harry Potter plays done allot. Gotta edge this to wand with one more quotable |
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5-4 Adverse lets get a few more people
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Opener, teeth, bowing out and barc alias Closer was decent. Ad Lveiosa, couch, get out of town Opener was ok kind of worded weird. Overall I thought it was pretty close so it came down to consistency d I thought wand had just a bit more of that. Good fuckimg battle props to both I got wand |
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I'm sorry for not writing out a full breakdown, but just felt like this needed votes .... count it or discount it because I didn't leave a few quotes.. I read it all everyone know syou can trust me.
these are one of those battles that I hate to actually pick a winner because its so close.. depending on my mood or however it goes I could've given it to Wanderer.. I just thought Ad's stuff was slightly more potent to me. Both did a good job though.. neither were super super mind blowingly dope or anything.... but both very solid and exactly on the same level.. but yeah... I'm giving it to Adverse BARELY... good job fellas usually voting on things is a lot more clear cut
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u wildin’? I’m king of the jungle.. this twat fucked
U got no Lion’s mane. Im just making the hairs on ur neck stand up I like the idea, execution couldve been better Great power = great responsibility so my fists gotta make u weak Only crown laying heavy with u is dental work after I break ya teeth Kind of an old concept, and I think if you're going to use it you need a more fresh spin on it Ur clout a drought! This ur final curtain after I pull the shotty out ur mouth Lower the arm & watch ur head drop to ur waistline... we knew u’d be bowing out I like this & LOL @ ur girl loyal. No time for small talk when she’s missed this Funny that bitch Converse.. but skips chat with me & gets down to business eh i see what you're trying to do but I dont think you did it I’m Sneaking.. shiv hidden in my palm so the strike’ll be spontaneous Hands disguising a rusty old piece, rough round the edges like Barcotic’s alias apart from hands, the connection to barc here is pretty abstract and weak ur own circle gimme ur whereabouts! They know I never been soft Fingernail torture - how u screaming in pain when someone reach out & I take the tip off eh this is ok Up and coming threat!?, your skills ain't strong I'll slay ya You been on rookie shit but this the pro-test, bet it get this bitch killed - Breonna Taylor ok opener When the guns come out his mouth stops, you ain't hard and we know bruh Put Wand in the air with just a wave of the stick - Wingardium leviosa harry potter/wand flips arent exactly fresh, blue bayou doing one comes to mind, but this is decently executed He took down an established name in the NBL, you see how this weakling did the vet? But it’s nothing new you upset Bar weekly, when you come in and they see you didn’t drink ya self to death Again, wording and execution is good but I think your biggest drawback is a lack of new ideas in your concepts Please! How could anyone believe this geeks freakin with your spouse? Only time wand's hittin the g-spot, is when she using a vibrator n he sleepin on the couch Ok, I definitely read a wand/vibrator nameflip like a week or 2 ago against him On the real bro, chicks ain't digging you, they can't even stomach this clown And any bitch having wanderlust a clear indication they needa get tf out of town ok Summer classic 9 will be repeated to the fullest, remind you of everything once that barrel burst You won’t CW when your season get canceled quicker than when it ended with that Arrowverse Aeroverse has been done before, Inf used a pretty identical bar against me like 2ish weeks ago this is a tough battle to vote on. wand's bowing out bar was by far the lotb, and pretty much everything else from both sides was kind of underwhelming. Reading adverse really frustrates me because imo he has a fairly good grasp on execution and wording, which i generally feel like people struggle with the most, yet when it comes to creativity it really is not up to par. I'm guessing it's because you don't vote much and aren't keeping up with what other people are writing, and everyone's beating you to the punch on pretty much every wand, aero, bar, name flip you write. I don't know who you're facing round 2, but you need to come up with fresher angles if you're going to stay in this thing. Wand, you have some dope lines here and there but you have to get more consistent with them. The whole "rusty old piece, rough around the edges" thing is just really abstract and weird, most of it doesn't really directly pertain to barcotic, so you're kind of grasping at straws with the association. Fingernail was also a bit weirdly abstract but passable. The crown bar was just played, and the execution could've been done better, and the Lion's mane thing was a tad bit corny in the way that it was executed. Overall, I got adverse with a more consistent verse v/ adverse Last edited by Answer; 06-08-2020 at 08:29 AM. |
06-08-2020, 11:58 AM | #20 |
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Adverse had better concepts and executed them better. Wasn’t really a fan of either verse but wanderer had some pretty used up concepts unfortunately. This was pretty close and props to both for your efforts.
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