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Orc vs. Plot {Orc wins}
Round One . . . FIGHT! DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast 12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery @Orc @Plot
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06-01-2020, 04:23 AM | #2 |
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06-01-2020, 04:58 AM | #3 |
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06-01-2020, 01:36 PM | #4 |
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A barman fired for drinking? Good grief
I don’t condone drinking all day but shit happens Here’s a Sobering thought: you’ve been here for 7 years & won 6 battles Your life is a joke. Fired from allll the best spots An Australian walks into a bar. The barman says “Plot, I’m calling the cops” Don’t act like you spent time on the street dude Okay, you grew up with Fosters. Your Dad drank that as he beat you Plus Plots concerned bout this wild drought Keep mentioning that Australian Bush Fire. I’ll take ya girl Outback to find out These riots show people get violent if need be If Plots screaming “I can’t breathe” it’s because he’s so excited to meet me U won’t see a vote. Never mind get a mention Think Deus Ex Machina. This failure of a Plot would need Divine Intervention |
06-05-2020, 11:21 AM | #5 |
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Ext sorry just got some people im dealing with
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06-06-2020, 10:52 AM | #6 |
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Always thought you and Blue were an item, honest
Kung tried to make it a triangle & neighbor was like lets do a rhombus. Your fans need fucking help man, I swear they must be blind Coz anyone thinkin Auxiliary fuckin outta their mind! thinking your some greek or roman legend? More like Narcissus that faggot that fell in love with his own reflection. But we all know this Irish piece of shit sucks.. If he was ever winning in the votes it was a micks-up hate to burst your bubble Ork, but your bars are fuckin nonsense Yur a zombie-trader, keep flipping those dead concepts. known biter! your a recycler, nothing you spits fire man, And I thought St.Patrick chased all the snakes out of Ireland. Last edited by Plot; 06-06-2020 at 11:02 AM. |
06-06-2020, 11:51 AM | #7 |
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Orc won this pretty handily. Australian Bush Fire made me chuckle. The George Floyd flip is the best I’ve read in the last couple weeks. Solid, straight forward verse.
Plot’s verse was ok... Rhombus was a decent idea, although I didn’t really get why Neighbor, Kung and Blue were mentioned. Maybe there’s a backstory I don’t know about. I’m still trying to figure out what the Auxiliary punch was. Anyway, Orc had a more polished, witty verse. He wins. Cheers. |
06-06-2020, 12:14 PM | #8 |
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Pretty fun battle
Orc didnt miss much.. Sobering thought and bush fire were bangers. Only line I didnt feel was the barmen copa line. Closer was good. Nice ideas with even nicer wordiing Plot came with it... Rhombus was a dope start. Dead concepts had some heat and thr closer was money. The rest of the verse missed to me tho. Orc wins. Hits were bigger and misses were fewer |
06-06-2020, 12:29 PM | #9 |
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I don’t condone drinking all day but shit happens
Here’s a Sobering thought: you’ve been here for 7 years & won 6 battles Decent personal Your life is a joke. Fired from allll the best spots An Australian walks into a bar. The barman says “Plot, I’m calling the cops” Nice Don’t act like you spent time on the street dude Okay, you grew up with Fosters. Your Dad drank that as he beat you Lmao this is fire Plus Plots concerned bout this wild drought Keep mentioning that Australian Bush Fire. I’ll take ya girl Outback to find out Dope These riots show people get violent if need be If Plots screaming “I can’t breathe” it’s because he’s so excited to meet me I think this is the only flip on this concept I’ve seen that isn’t awful, well done U won’t see a vote. Never mind get a mention Think Deus Ex Machina. This failure of a Plot would need Divine Intervention This was ok not up to rest of the verse to me Always thought you and Blue were an item, honest Kung tried to make it a triangle & neighbor was like lets do a rhombus. feel like this could’ve hit harder with a different finish? Your fans need fucking help man, I swear they must be blind Coz anyone thinkin Auxiliary fuckin outta their mind! Auxiliary / orcs-ill-are-really?? It actually almost kinda works phonetically but people are gonna hate this haha thinking your some greek or roman legend? More like Narcissus that faggot that fell in love with his own reflection. This is ok But we all know this Irish piece of shit sucks.. If he was ever winning in the votes it was a micks-up Getting better hate to burst your bubble Ork, but your bars are fuckin nonsense Yur a zombie-trader, keep flipping those dead concepts. Is a zombie trader a thing? known biter! your a recycler, nothing you spits fire man, And I thought St.Patrick chased all the snakes out of Ireland. This was ok Vote - Orc Quite comfortable really. Orc had some heaters (fosters bar especially but the whole middle section was good. Plot Had some personals and some different angles but they just weren’t executed well enough to be more than jabs. |
06-06-2020, 02:24 PM | #10 |
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Good battle boys. Orc had a more wittier, well worded verse. Plot came better thsn I expected but it just wasn’t enough here. Floyd line was real nice. Along with fosters and outback. Plot had the micks up bar
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06-06-2020, 08:30 PM | #12 |
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Plot had some ideas like rhombus & micks up
Orc had the better delivered bars here Fosters, Outback were hits. Closer was decent. Executed & worded better than Plots too.. which felt a little rushed imo V- ORC
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06-06-2020, 08:43 PM | #13 |
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plot seemed rushed, i think i’ve seen him drop 10x better.. micks up, rhombus, narcissus i felt like it coulda been bangers.. but just werent quite there.. coulda got real interesting bc this wasnt vintage orc by a longshot.. but he was def cleaner.. some concepts u already saw where it was headed but bush and fosters was still cool.. yeah so
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06-06-2020, 10:09 PM | #14 |
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This is clearly a mix up
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06-07-2020, 11:43 AM | #15 |
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Orc
I don’t condone drinking all day but shit happens Here’s a Sobering thought: you’ve been here for 7 years & won 6 battles Filler Your life is a joke. Fired from allll the best spots An Australian walks into a bar. The barman says “Plot, I’m calling the cops” Huh? Don’t act like you spent time on the street dude Okay, you grew up with Fosters. Your Dad drank that as he beat you Ok Plus Plots concerned bout this wild drought Keep mentioning that Australian Bush Fire. I’ll take ya girl Outback to find out Set up lazy af but this is good These riots show people get violent if need be If Plots screaming “I can’t breathe” it’s because he’s so excited to meet me Basic U won’t see a vote. Never mind get a mention Think Deus Ex Machina. This failure of a Plot would need Divine Intervention Not feelin Wording/flow is good, but a lot of lines were way too basic for my liking. 5/10 VS Plot Always thought you and Blue were an item, honest Kung tried to make it a triangle & neighbor was like lets do a rhombus. No Your fans need fucking help man, I swear they must be blind Coz anyone thinkin Auxiliary fuckin outta their mind! The WP isn't immediately obvious, so it's a stretch thinking your some greek or roman legend? More like Narcissus that faggot that fell in love with his own reflection. Filler But we all know this Irish piece of shit sucks.. If he was ever winning in the votes it was a micks-up Basic hate to burst your bubble Ork, but your bars are fuckin nonsense Yur a zombie-trader, keep flipping those dead concepts. Also basic known biter! your a recycler, nothing you spits fire man, And I thought St.Patrick chased all the snakes out of Ireland. Statementish You clearly wrote this verse in 10 minutes. 2/10 Orc had the one bar that stood out, OUTBACK. Vote: ORC |
06-07-2020, 02:51 PM | #16 |
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Orc had one miss, the closer. Rest were all dope with the George Floyd punch being probably the best flip I've seen thus far and the fosters line being lotb. The opener was stupidly simple but was a personal and was funny cus it's true.
Plot starts ok, the auxiliary works, just, but didn't really have anything to make it good, could of done alot more with it. Last three bars totally fell off for me tbh. Didnt find anything in them I liked, maybe it was the wording but meh just wernt up to scratch for me Vote orc |
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