05-26-2020, 04:55 PM | #1 |
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Round 1: Coop Vs. Wanderer - wanderer WINS 5-3
8-Man Show N' Prove Mini Tourney Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due Saturday by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines @Coop @Wanderer |
05-26-2020, 05:03 PM | #2 |
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05-26-2020, 06:49 PM | #3 |
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05-28-2020, 01:34 AM | #4 |
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts if there’s EVER a glint in ur eye... it’s just reflecting off the blade before I spill ya guts Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar |
05-28-2020, 12:52 PM | #5 |
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Poor thing...
Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time At least you tried Last edited by Coop; 05-28-2020 at 01:02 PM. |
05-28-2020, 08:35 PM | #6 | |
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub vs. Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack v - Coop. In this battle, I had it pretty evenly. 2-2. I think Wand had the best bar with tier/tear breakdowns. Coke vs. crack bar got a chuckle out of me, and the coffin one was also very nice though. The bar Wand had about Coupon mags was almost quotable but needed better wording imo. Same with the "proof" bar from Coop. This was close, but on the strength of both bars, Coop won it for me, as that bird box line is long and filled with ridiculousness, so I almost didn't quote it. Wording on that could've given the edge
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05-31-2020, 05:53 PM | #7 |
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box haha nice start What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league decent wordplay but it doesn't fully make sense both ways U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub nice, the wp isn't that orginal but nice flip on it. could've lost a few words I think How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces kinda basic unless im missing something Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts if there’s EVER a glint in ur eye... it’s just reflecting off the blade before I spill ya guts this was ok Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar decent but heard collars referred to as shards? Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt ok, could've thrown in like a break/brake wp to make more sense? Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW decent Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin pretty basic Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack decent Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy better Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time this would've been great if the ending changed slightly 'diluting the talent pool' or something would've been better I think, the phrase you used doesn't really make sense? Wanderer I think had better ideas and the better highlights so I think he edges it, just. Close battle though good from both Vote Tyke Wand |
05-31-2020, 08:02 PM | #8 |
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30 & probs still a virgin too.. ur clout the worst, boss
This nerd’s lost. How u gon’ name urself Coop.. & not know the first thing bout a bird’s box kinda funny, solid opener What a whiner! What can u offer except not writing properly... please Obviously Coupon mags... since he cry bout how much guns are costing the league Nah, I like the idea but this didn't fully make sense to say that he's "on mags" U crying for attention. NC’s wanna see my hands hitting his mug Next week we hope it’s more Tear Breakdowns... followed by slashed wrists in the tub I think this mightve landed a littleee harder if you wrote this out as "Tier". Overall a solid bar, though I've seen tier/tear and breakdown/breakdown concepts done before (just not together). I like the wording. I definitely feel like you've gotten more aggressive with it. Solid bar How long u been around & STILL bring Ancient concepts?! S’why ur the weakest Keep tabling those Fragile Antiques... no wonder u wrong foot & it all falls to pieces Eh nah not feeling this one Ur trash so why u here?? Can’t be a hidden agenda, I’m sure this kid is nuts if there’s EVER a glint in ur eye... it’s just reflecting off the blade before I spill ya guts this is cool Style ain’t been hot in ANY decade or era so u can bet he’s a gonna I’mma break glass & put 2 shards to the base of ur neck like a 70’s collar Not exactly sure what kind of fashion style you're referencing, but its pretty self explanatory and the ideas cool. Always running ya gums, but you fumbled ya guns in that weak assault FUCK your lil drive to win, only noise you making's a screeching halt cool opener Just another washed, faggoty white clown who gets sad when he writes down You couldn't be in the 'Zone, on fire, if you lived in Minneapolis right NOW wouldve hit a little harder if this wasnt shortened to zone but ok current event bar Look how mad he gets, pipe down. <- I'm sure ya girl deals with that often Ain't had good wood in so long, she startin to see the appeal of a coffin i like this idea, maybe the set-up couldve been a little better tied into the idea of his girl wanting to kill herself but the rest is cool Never broke her back. He snorting w/ laughter cuz he nose it's fact His flow so wack, last time he had a LOTB, must've been coke vs crack lol not the most original bar but the angle on it's kinda fresh and it's funny Battle's been done. I dumbed it down, don't pretend that you don't get me Show N Prove? All the 'proof' you got wouldn't get a 10 yr old girl tipsy nah not feeling this, could've been executed better Your verse? Read every line? We'd rather kill you & be legally blind He can't steal our breath away, so he'll just diluting the league of its time grammatically this doesnt make sense on both interpretations, and I did do a diluting wp in the past vs. seth so it weakens the hit for me. meh closer highlights: birds box, glint in ur eye vs. coffin, screetching halt this was a close battle in my eyes, I had to reread a couple times to really determine a winner. I felt like the biggest miss in this battle was wand's antique bar, I just wasn't feeling it. Everything else from both coop and wand was at least decent, I think you both did a good job of being consistent overall, but someone has to win and someone has to lose v/ coop Last edited by Answer; 05-31-2020 at 08:37 PM. |
05-31-2020, 11:26 PM | #9 |
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Coop won.
Much more natural verse. Wanderer had some cool concepts (bird’s box, etc), but a lot of it felt kinda forced... and the lines were too long. Coop’s wasn’t mind blowing, but it was direct and smooth. A much more enjoyable read. He wins. Cheers. |
06-03-2020, 11:28 PM | #10 |
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Wrist in tub Spill ya guts VS Zone in fire Proof V/ wand... I thought he won this..his bars seemed to pack a little more sting..and he had one more quotable..close match but I think he just pulled it off
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Coop had the best line by far and I usually vote for lotb BUT wand had too many dope lines He out punched coop here Fire battle Best battle I read since I been back Props to both Vote wand
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06-07-2020, 01:37 PM | #13 |
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06-07-2020, 02:11 PM | #14 |
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Coop had the coffin line that was funny. The rest was either old or missed. Zone line was okay. Wanderer has the bird box line and coupon line. Glint in your eye is okay too but very straightforward/obvious. Wanderer missed less. Steal our breath away was a bad miss. Vote Wanderer.
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06-07-2020, 06:59 PM | #18 |
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I’ll edit my vote here in an hour, let me get home from work first.
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