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Week 8: Plot (2-2) vs Incredible (2-4) - PLOT WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @Plot @Incredible
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05-26-2020, 02:03 AM | #2 |
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Check. Ten. Wanna spit early Inc?
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05-26-2020, 04:27 PM | #3 |
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10 is good and yeah probably can drop tonight or tomorrow.
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05-27-2020, 12:01 PM | #5 |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas, & telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass. Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit, When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed. Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check, Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech. Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. Last edited by Plot; 05-27-2020 at 01:13 PM. |
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U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir. Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar |
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05-27-2020, 04:54 PM | #7 |
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Plot - Ink on the money could’ve been fire still like concept tho, profound was funny not as hard hitting but comical, countersink is meh not really feeling at all, golf tech line is drawn out & I might be missing something, ear stuck to the ground was ok statementish tho at best.
- breakdown seems like your trying to shake rust & I feel that. Just try to look over your concepts more then once before using them see what other angles are available. Vs Inc- a rusty car piss ? I don’t see how this is insulting besides saying he got bad hygiene an dirty, personals aspect is cool but you fell flat on the execution in my eyes, exit stage right doesn’t land anywhere I get what you went for it just doesn’t work, I get the predictions snorefest but it doesn’t hit its boring an lackluster, closer don’t make sense to me. Breakdown - I’m assuming your more of a topical head ? Because the bars never really hit your opponent which kind of caught me off guard. Vote - Plot pretty easily
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05-28-2020, 12:24 PM | #8 |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. vs Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby v/plot overall better verse & harder hitting punches. |
05-28-2020, 01:49 PM | #9 |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly, Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. Good opener. Great actually Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas, & telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass. Not feelin Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit, When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed. Cool np but a lazy ending Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check, Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech. I see what you're going for but ehhh Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. Too statementish for me for a closer Opener was easily the best bar, wasn't feeling many of the other disses. 5/10 VS Incredible STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right" U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like Wording in the setup AND punch is throwing me off. Commas! Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does Maybe Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby Filler U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir. Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer Filler Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar Lol wut Wasn't a lot of cleverness or wittiness in this verse, and I prioritize that the most. 3/10 Vote: Plot |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. vs. nothing V - Plot. I was very confused reading the end of Incredible's verse, because he disses Flow, instead of his opponent lol he doesn't really do many good disses, although, he has a condensed style so his bars aren't too long. He just didn't throw punches that were sufficient and they lacked in wording. A rusty Karpis line didn't hit well, but it was a decent attempt. Plot won it with his opener, which was LOTB. Great nameplay that should've set up for a strong verse, but it fell off completely from there. Same thing happened where wording or lazy, filler stuff came through instead of going harder at the opponent. It was a decent attempt from both, but improvements can be made to allow them to become better txtcees
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STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right"
U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like The punch is pretty funny but the set up seems rushed and too long. Jarring for an opener Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does See what you’re going for but it’s awkward to word it Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby Don’t like this unless I’m missing something U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir. Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer Could lose a few words here but overall the angle isn’t great Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar Kind of feels like two concepts forced together unless I’m missing something again Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly, Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. Nice. Great opener well executed and personal Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas, & telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass. Not feeling this Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit, When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed. Nice wp again Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check, Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech. Bit of a force but worded nicely Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. Decent Vote - Plot Overall everything was better written and the two name flips alone were enough to take it, especially the opener. |
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Plot u got a lot of things to tighten up as well Vote plot
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05-29-2020, 12:14 PM | #13 |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. i like this, dope Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas, & telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass. I kinda like the idea but I dont think the idea comes off as smoothly/naturally as intended Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit, When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed. cool concept, I think the wording could've been a bit harsher Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check, Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech. I love this concept, think the wording could've been done better though. Usually in live battling saying his bars make us do a twist-face would be construed as a compliment, but overall this is solid Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. ok closer STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right" U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like The capitalization here is a little unnecessary, the idea is cool Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does Kinda the same comment I had about one of plots bars, the idea is cool but doesnt read off as smooth/natural as it could Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby Nah im not feeling this U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir. Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer ok idea, wording couldve been harsher and better executed Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar I feel like you're trying to do too much here not a whole lot to say that hasnt been said, I thought ink on the money was lotb v/ plot |
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Dude aint a proper G, its obvious he cant do crimes properly,
Only time we see Inc on the money is when he fucks up a robbery. funny bar but a bit simple Your girl says that Im intense, keeps calling me the gas, & telling you Plots profound? Really I was just that DEEP in her ass. this was worded a bit weird, didn't fall as a punch for me Fools bound to lose, wanna spar? I'll smash this fruit, When I throw up these countersInk you'll know your ass is screwed. decent wp Uppercut gets you that rolled neck, kid gets that cold check, Your bars make us all do that twist-face, without Blue with the golf-tech. sorry I didn't really get this Hammer-throw you to the floor, treat him as if its a puppet show, Then have his ear stuck to the ground like Indians listening for buffalo. hehehe cool vs. STFU u lost either way thought he had a notable win "it felt right" U had ONE...A. rusty Karpis and I'm sure that's what ur whip smells like hilarious but ehhh Been mediocre for years w/ that same withered buzz Funny it turns out ur a vote follower while ur name never does a bit simplistic, was expecting a harsher impact Ain't fkn around so this week I'm catching a new body NC gaining some too while we all wish u'd exit stage right through the lobby missing the insult here, why we wish that? U barely show up and if u do it's less or equal to low teir. Predictions? snore fest? Yes that's Plots nightly routine...hand grippin a cold beer okkkkk not too hard hitting Flow's juvenile punches are low life drunk tank guard star WPs are criminal, under a rest spell ur used to tapping into a reverse arm bar sorry, not feeling this one. Perhaps could have been worded in a clearer way? not a bad battle but I think both could have put more thoughts into their bars in order to have a more effective impact. tight here but I'm going with Plot for a more smoother read. could have gone to Incredible anyways but i wasnt feeling his verse too much v/plot |
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Mvgt to plot
Inc had the karpis line but wasn't executed right Plot had the robbery line ...lotb |
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