WEEK 8: Universe vs Requiem UNI WINS VIA NS OPEN FOR FEED

[Inno]

GUERRILLA WRITING LEAGUE



@Universe @Requiem


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Due date: May 16, 2020 11:59 EST TIME

GOODLUCK!

[Universe]

Fun times ahead. Viewer discretion advised for this one... :p

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[Requiem]

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[Universe]

Chapter 5 - The Dark Places We Hide

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142946

Chapter 6: Decomposed

*The following continues directly after the events of Chapter 5.

"Not everything buried is actually dead. For many, the past is alive." - Louise Penny

......

My brother came out of the therapists office with tears in his eyes
He said "Mission accomplished, now it's time to reveal your disguise"
Then surmised, "You must dig up the past to rinse off the dirt"
Dr. Dixon quietly switched out her journals, signifying it was my turn
Ever since Uncle Ben and The Cranberries asked what's in my head...
I've been obsessed with I Am Legend, Zombieland and Night of the Living Dead
Doc replied with a bit of dread, "I think your missing link has a hold"
I cracked a smile and said, "Well then, lets start digging that hole..."

Shall we?

3 Days Later - 3:13 PM

*A woman's scream*

I awoke to distant thunder rumbling, this may intimidate others...
But a familiar urge had grown inside me, interrupting my mid day slumber
I shuddered in the seat of my pick up truck, it sucks to be a slave to your body
Parked at a secluded spot near the edge of my 22 acre property
Muscles ache but no stopping me, I reached in the trunk then spun around
With a clean shovel that I heaved into the previously dug up ground
Blood was bubbling now, I was pulled down like a surface undertow
Feeling more and more alien every time I'm unearthing what's below
Hauled up Dr. Dixon's corpse slowly, I actually could feel her rigid bones
Exhuming an ex-human just exposed what the killer didn't know
I go "It was me who slit your throat." She was bloated with gas and quite limp
In fact when I entered her ass with my dick she didn't bat an eyelid
Racked with excitement, I felt her cold cunt catch on fire
In doggy style, I knew the eruption was coming so I busted inside her
Have to say she stunk to high heaven, and it made me insane
Banging a corpse in a makeshift grave, that's how I was basically raised
But until these cravings are satiated I'll stay in this state of decay
And here I'll remain, awaiting the day when they take me away...

... chuff chuff chuff chuff...

In came the helicopter blades... fuck... I knew this hell was not safe
A cell phone dropped in place as I held on to Doc's legs
Then it started to rain; A screenshot dispelled all the thoughts saved
It displayed, "That's 30"... and suddenly I was compelled to stop...

Strange.

[Adverse]

@Requiem

[Universe]

So I decided to battle myself cuz I'm bored lol. Approached this like I would a Pic Challenge and just keyed it. Let me know which style you guys like better...


How did I die? I wondered that as I stared out at the sky
I'm starting to doubt if this guy above me actually found me alive
It's crowded inside, I'm stuck to the bottom and bound to the sides
If I could soil myself down here I'd probably drown where I lie
I frown but don't cry, I think about wedding gowns on my wife
I was a dog when she met me and I will probably hound her for life
Thinking out loud should suffice, but not making a sound is my right
Put me in a wooden casket I wouldn't hack it, I'd be pounding all night
Word around town has its bite, must've got into some kind of trouble
I could get dirt on you on the double if push came to shovel...
Living inside a bubble, delicate as ever, the area's mine
Carried my pride but couldn't pry my way out of being buried alive
I sharpen knives on blurred lines, then just sever arrangements
Any talking would just be wasted from oxygen deprivation
Depths that I take this is peaking now, I guess I'll relent
As I take my final breath something reaches down and finds my chest
It feels violently compressed, but one can find truth asundered
Multiple layers of topsoil can't satisfy this undeniable hunger
You can find blunders entombed where panic rooms appear
Ascension of fear; I rose up and reached my hand into the air
Managed to feel my way out, but I didn't escape far
The night sky look bright as I stumbled through the graveyard
All I'm thinking is "Gimme brains"... odd; It seems I want meat
After life gave up, didn't take long for death to adopt me
My dark passenger took a backseat, I couldn't fathom a crazier hobby
Locked inside a quivering shaking body, fully engaged when our eyes meet
I ripped her apart, I gotta eat, but the mistake was quite costly
Until death do us part, my bride to be... I just made her a zombie
Watched her cross the seam, the funny movements of one consumed
The man who buried me drew his gun... and I just stared at the honey moon...

Boom.

[Bodey]

i like how you squirm at cute puppies getting dismembered (ugh, as do i, i'll never forgive myself for that line) but here you are fucking a corpse in mass detail lol. like i said in the past, you're a sick fuck Uni. also, the ending to that first one kind of confused me, was he under hypnosis or something? i definitely favored this verse over the second one just because of it's hard-to-beat portrayal of a truly sick mind. also, anytime i hear the terms "dark passenger" it just reminds me of Dexter lol, i had to watch myself with that in my own piece because i felt like i was biting off a show i used to binge-watch. the second one i feel the zombie subject is an overdone one, and despite being technically on point, i still think the first verse won me over a lot more as a piece of writing and storyline. you're good at what you do sir

v/Uni

[Universe]

Thanks Bodey. I miss Dexter :(