03-23-2020, 07:31 PM | #1 |
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Seth vs Sharp - SETH WINS
PPV Spring 2020 General rules apply DUE: Monday, 3/30 PM verses to @Innovator Pic battles: Post a pic as soon as you're able. Line Limits: 10-12. Can go longer if agreed upon. If no limit is agreed upon, second person must match first person's verse length. @Da Brayn Lord |
03-24-2020, 10:46 AM | #2 | |
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03-24-2020, 11:38 AM | #3 |
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03-24-2020, 12:38 PM | #5 |
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04-01-2020, 12:45 AM | #6 |
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Aka Seth Scheinberg, artist of the Hush comic
A bitch troll we love to hate. You should lose the zeal No surprise you’re so fat. Only active part of you’s the Heel Don’t buy his gun flips. This bitch lets the matic spit? If this pussy draw on a texcee its detailing his next portrait of Vic Seth, see me in Philly. Got an Animal Cross n a bomb hook Set foot in my city and I’ll fucking own you. I’m Tom Nook One smack n he’s out cold. I’m raining blows to end this tard He won’t know where that punch came from like @INF ‘Ouch pm’d a bar’ Try to run, but I'll in the prius like ‘bro please’ The whip’ll tear up your back like ‘Your name is Toby’ I’ll fuck up his whole family. Pistol whip give his kids a broken jaw n when I catch him, the grip’ll turn his lid all the way around like Ash w/ the pokeball |
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ayo You know I'm eatin'! This scrawny fucks done for.. He better run before we see a slav beaten You'll see this pencil neck disappear when eyes on 'em quicker than the Joker at a mob meetin' I'd Carole Baskins this vegan faggot, but I'm gonna have to Tiger King this frail groupie Cus we'd know for sure if u were feed to the tigers, they'd start playing jazz flute & eating kale smoothies There's no ignorin' me.. Tools give ya chest pains, if it's guns I'm scorchin' theses Pull up to his crib with the mask on & a trunk full of cans like I was preppin' for the quarantine & I know you're home now, bust the door down while u & the wife are grillin' the TV Whole squad strapped - surround ya with sticks then cover the bodies like we're building a teepee You'll need DR circles & hate votes to win this.. Listen pipsqueak, I'm a legend so don't try it We seen Disneys take on the fable, there's always rodents around a beanpole when gunnin' for a giant We'll be needing hearses, or station wagons. U a buck 10 soaking wet & ur contribution is a curse Sumthin this wirey tries to spark shit, the whole house'll burn down.. & we'd rather die in it than read ur verse
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04-02-2020, 08:01 AM | #8 |
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Sharp: A bitch troll we love to hate. You should lose the zeal No surprise you’re so fat. Only active part of you’s the Heel Don't know if this went over my head, some things will inevitably as i don't have a great knowledge of site history but this didn't connect for me, also thought it was a weak way to open Don’t buy his gun flips. This bitch lets the matic spit? If this pussy draw on a texcee its detailing his next portrait of Vic Like it, wasn't a strong multi setup but you got your point across Seth, see me in Philly. Got an Animal Cross n a bomb hook Set foot in my city and I’ll fucking own you. I’m Tom Nook Like this, also liked how you changed your avi to kinda foreshadow this as well One smack n he’s out cold. I’m raining blows to end this tard He won’t know where that punch came from like @INF ‘Ouch pm’d a bar’ Think this was your BOTB right here, cool flip on a site event Try to run, but I'll in the prius like ‘bro please’ The whip’ll tear up your back like ‘Your name is Toby’ Decent but an older reference that I'm sure has been done before I’ll fuck up his whole family. Pistol whip give his kids a broken jaw n when I catch him, the grip’ll turn his lid all the way around like Ash w/ the pokeball Same as the bar before, but this one was layered better so i enjoyed it more Seth: You know I'm eatin'! This scrawny fucks done for.. He better run before we see a slav beaten You'll see this pencil neck disappear when eyes on 'em quicker than the Joker at a mob meetin' Ehhh okay didn't really say a whole lot here but alright for what it is I'd Carole Baskins this vegan faggot, but I'm gonna have to Tiger King this frail groupie Cus we'd know for sure if u were feed to the tigers, they'd start playing jazz flute & eating kale smoothies I didn't feel this, there's potential here with this whole Tiger King phenomenon but don't like the way you went about There's no ignorin' me.. Tools give ya chest pains, if it's guns I'm scorchin' theses Pull up to his crib with the mask on & a trunk full of cans like I was preppin' for the quarantine Probably my favorite bar of yours here. Good play on a current event & I know you're home now, bust the door down while u & the wife are grillin' the TV Whole squad strapped - surround ya with sticks then cover the bodies like we're building a teepee Liked this too, never heard of "grillin the tv" tho You'll need DR circles & hate votes to win this.. Listen pipsqueak, I'm a legend so don't try it We seen Disneys take on the fable, there's always rodents around a beanpole when gunnin' for a giant Ehhh wasn't really feeling it here saw the potential but didn't connect We'll be needing hearses, or station wagons. U a buck 10 soaking wet & ur contribution is a curse Sumthin this wirey tries to spark shit, the whole house'll burn down.. & we'd rather die in it than read ur verse Yeah decent closer could have hit harder but that's just imo Overall this was a pretty up and down battle, i thought Sharp had a much cleaner executed verse, i don't know if the super long bar is Seth's normal style but it felt exhausting at times and while Sharp had some misses and dull moments i thought some of Seths bars just fell completely flat while he had a couple i really liked. I don't know I'm sure both can do better but Sharp licks up the W here good job to both V/Sharp |
04-03-2020, 09:39 AM | #9 |
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Try to run, but I'll in the prius like ‘bro please’
The whip’ll tear up your back like ‘Your name is Toby’ I'd Carole Baskins this vegan faggot, but I'm gonna have to Tiger King this frail groupie Cus we'd know for sure if u were feed to the tigers, they'd start playing jazz flute & eating kale smoothies There's no ignorin' me.. Tools give ya chest pains, if it's guns I'm scorchin' theses Pull up to his crib with the mask on & a trunk full of cans like I was preppin' for the quarantine Vote: Brayn Lord. Had better punches and some cool concepts.
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04-03-2020, 10:41 AM | #10 |
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A bitch troll we love to hate. You should lose the zeal No surprise you’re so fat. Only active part of you’s the Heel Okay so the heel as in bad guy is this a double meaning like heel of foot? Only his heels are active? Which means he's standing up.. Don't get how this relates to him being fat. Don’t buy his gun flips. This bitch lets the matic spit? If this pussy draw on a texcee its detailing his next portrait of Vic Nice Seth, see me in Philly. Got an Animal Cross n a bomb hook Set foot in my city and I’ll fucking own you. I’m Tom Nook Nerdy reference I'm sure. Let me look it up. Okay looked it up.. Tom Nook is a fictional character in Animal Cross and he sells land and houses... Didn't like how you used Animal Cross here though.. It's just okay. One smack n he’s out cold. I’m raining blows to end this tard He won’t know where that punch came from like @INF ‘Ouch pm’d a bar’ Cool... Try to run, but I'll in the prius like ‘bro please’ The whip’ll tear up your back like ‘Your name is Toby’ Koonta Kenta reference... Trash bar I’ll fuck up his whole family. Pistol whip give his kids a broken jaw n when I catch him, the grip’ll turn his lid all the way around like Ash w/ the pokeball Damn you gon pistol whip his kids? What type of teacher are you? Another cartoon reference.. Dude this is corny and it's lazy You have a laid back delivery and it needs to be more aggressive if the concepts aren't going to be heavy. Seth: You know I'm eatin'! This scrawny fucks done for.. He better run before we see a slav beaten You'll see this pencil neck disappear when eyes on 'em quicker than the Joker at a mob meetin' boring..looked up scene on youtube, cool scene I'd Carole Baskins this vegan faggot, but I'm gonna have to Tiger King this frail groupie Cus we'd know for sure if u were feed to the tigers, they'd start playing jazz flute & eating kale smoothies it's an attempt at a current event reference but it's just terrible There's no ignorin' me.. Tools give ya chest pains, if it's guns I'm scorchin' theses Pull up to his crib with the mask on & a trunk full of cans like I was preppin' for the quarantine Nice delivery, good punch & I know you're home now, bust the door down while u & the wife are grillin' the TV Whole squad strapped - surround ya with sticks then cover the bodies like we're building a teepee grillin the TV? You just used cans to refer to guns now you're using sticks this is just lazy... it's an ok punch You'll need DR circles & hate votes to win this.. Listen pipsqueak, I'm a legend so don't try it We seen Disneys take on the fable, there's always rodents around a beanpole when gunnin' for a giant lol'ed at I'm a legend... WTF at the punch.. What's up with all these terrible references guys?... This wasn't good. We'll be needing hearses, or station wagons. U a buck 10 soaking wet & ur contribution is a curse Sumthin this wirey tries to spark shit, the whole house'll burn down.. & we'd rather die in it than read ur verse like the concept execution was bad Liked the Cans line. Could be enough to win this Opinion: This wasn't a good battle. Seeing two nerds talk about guns while referencing Disney characters is not my idea of a good time. Seth called Sharp a pipsqueak. WOW... Sharp referred to himself as Tom Nook.. I've got Da Brayn here. Had BOTB and the rest you guys were even.
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04-07-2020, 01:58 PM | #11 |
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Opener, Vic portrait, Tom nook and closer Seth Kale smoothies, grilling the tv, pencil neck and closer. Pretty fucking even tbh. Only different for is that sharp had much better wording for my taste which made it a smoother read. That’s about it both had equal hitters and misses. So going with preference and I got sharp by an ass hair. Sharp |
04-17-2020, 03:20 PM | #12 |
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I've got Brayn Lord here
Despite some corny lines But sharp was corny a few times as well and didn't hit as hard, IMO Length might have helped Brayn Lord here, as his bars were longer than Sharp's Nothing wrong with short & sweet but I just didn't feel the "oomf" from Sharp this time. |
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