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take this war to ya fam.. face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance thought for sure this was gonna be a scorpion punch. papa shango da god. ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' eh light she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money lmaoooooooooo this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs ok u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic retard cant even spell Beethoven tho LOL. punch is cool. idiot. u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line ur set ups make me feel dyslexic wtf....punch was dece u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it LMFAO absolutely not barcotic jr. annihilated at bashing clits. i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church marriage and banished im assuming? a simple spell check here an there would kill u? the punch is cool deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law why is court stenographer in quotations lol....not much of a twist on the punch...light here my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks muslim...muzzle em? LMFAO in the set up?? unnecessary lol. punch is eh Originally Posted by Answer My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib lmao yo I was annoyed when I saw jumanji being referenced but this turned out to be fire Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time fairy is an outdated term to me....the punch is pretty dope tho minus that small grievance....also blatant rip off of Keebler cracker in a trunk lol I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime thought for sure id be spending my first google during allens verse and yet....... but yea word after googling I don't watch GOT...punch is fine I guess...knight flips regardless are tired af I don't think GOT puts a fresh enough spin on it Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento good movie...punch is ok My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame I don't love the execution here but the concept an associations are pretty crazy Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke wouldn't he stop pretending at that point? concept fire execution off again for me Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers lol eh ok How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die inigo lol well one of u assholes definitely had to have some absurdly obscure wordplay. ill just assume this is an illness that gives u 6 fingers and is terminal LMAO gone. Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx didn't see it...I get the idea tho...not much here Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy watd u write this during an eclectic movie marathon> lol foot clan and papa shango vs candy cigs and jumanji here for me. allen threw this together quick im guessing based on those awful set ups lol....I think answer had the stronger verse with less misses. some of the concepts and ideas were crazy. allen pretty creative but played it safe and seemed to be working with some time constraints. v answer |
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Papa Shango was dope. Gut feeling was clever. Footclan was lulz to me. AB was nice. Beethoven was really good. Ryan Kerrigan was fresh to me, not seen that done before, LOL’d at Reading slips, Excommunicated is witty, I thought of something along those lines for Cashius back in the tag tourney actually lol. Court Stenographer was cool. Muzzle him/harem was nice too. Feeling it. Very solid showing. Answer: Allen Parrish was real nice, similar vein to his Ryan Kerrigan one I felt, both real good. Ocarina is solid. I’m not a GOT follower either but I get the reference and it’s good. Memento is great. Cone of shape is worded really well, good conceptually, I dig it. Candy Cigs is real good. Burns line is dope, reminds me of one by Serge but I fuck with it. Be inigo was straight. Jamie Foxx is good. LOL @ Ratatouille closer. Dope battle. I got Answer edging it slightly overall, his wording was on point here by tying multiple things into each line/concept effortlessly - everything was at least good, from both of you, so this is a great way to end the SC. Two dope verses, not a lot to decide it, but the consistency Answer had proved the decider for me. Mad props to you both. That's Lars vote from discord he said he couldn't post |
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take this war to ya fam.. face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance im not really a big fan of wrestling punches, but this is a cool meta that was executed well... nice ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' ehh not digging this one.. wording seems pretty bland, seen better gut feeling concepts.. its a loose tie in imo for a not overly enjoyable concept to me she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money lol decently funny bar and reference punch.. but its hard to overlook the fact this is essentially a jackin'/kacking off bar tho... solid this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs lol cool current event sports punch.. i like the concept, ref condom in the setup wouldve helped round out the concept, but thats nitpicky u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic decent/solid.. its a good deaf jab and tourney reference u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line i like the angle you went for here, and the tie ins are cool, but its only a jab to me because ive seen kerrigan wordplay done before as well as offensive/defensive line football references done a lot.. cool bar overall, but not one thats overly dope due to the core of the punch being two familiar flips u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it lol, pretty funny concept... i just cant get behind i fucked your mom concepts anymore.. why not his girl? more impactful... this was dece i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church nah.. ive done excommunicate before so the wp wasnt captivating to me personally...and this flip just feels way more long winded then it had to be deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law haha dope.. this was a cool fresh cncept my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks mussle'em is like 06 wordplay and is a bit awkward.. i get it as a tie in but nah.. actual punch is dece vs. My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib dope np... i remeber barc had a jumanji bar recently but this was much diff i think... cool attack line Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time solid video game meta.. very reminiscint of AK's keebler punch, but a solid flip I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime lol i love GoT so i digg this.. cool current knight nameplay thats worded very well Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento fuego.. very dope concept My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame damn... very nice, good creativity Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke cool meta but as deluvered its no very impactful.. cool for a swag line but light Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers haha wording made this dope.. very well delivered.. nice bar How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die conceptually this seems dope and i get/like the wp... this is over my head tho, dunno who Inigo is or how it correlates to 6 digits etc. Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx lol another fresh and cool meta.. the punch is a little light but this, like most others, was very well written and is a good concept Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy lol, decent enough.. dont love it as a closer, but cool Good battle guys. Pretty dope battle and a nice conclusion to the SC Overall Allen had a pretty solid verse here.. prob only had two bars i would call 'misses'.. a couple solid personals, some decent generic jabs, but also some so so bars or ideas sprinkled throughout... Answer beasted this imo, some nice fresh well rounded concepts, and honestly he had much much much better wording that just made his verse more enjoyable to me....i do feel this verse was too generic heavy for a SC finals, wouldve liked to have seen a personal or two referenced, but hey i guess the nameplays count... it's relatively close as AK was consistently solid throughout, but I think Answer had the better concepts, the much better wording and setups of his punches, and ultimately a bit more consistency and freshness to his angles.... props to both My vote is for Answer as SC Champ.
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i saw this differently. i thought Allen had better punches, wording, and execution. u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it line of the battle. haymaker. Answer was ok. thought his concepts were too niche and specific that the linking did not execute as intended. bit of stretch reminded me of a chinoxl style verse. didn't have the sting. Vote = Allen Knight. goodluck to both. |
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face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance mom knows vengeance.. right... this is an instance where it's all concept and the punch is second place.. not good ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' banged her and answer rhyme?... punch is okay she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money ehhh okay. this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs I like the idea here but the setup had nothing that alluded to reusing the condom. u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic FIRE... u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line 3 sports references already.. didn't like it bc doesn't work both ways u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it I had a better pussy lips bar so it doesn't hit for me i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church we crashing skirts now? and the punchline was predictable at excommunicated deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law I dig this... my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks Liked the muslim wordplay.. Harem punchline was so-so Answer: My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib FIRE... Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time Ok I get that it's Zelda but I'm not going to look into specifics.. this was ok I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime At this point I'm already tired of the reference bars that's just lazy and boring so I wont bother Googling Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento another reference bar GOOD GRIEF.. I get the idea of this and this is okay My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame almost but no Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke doesn't make sense. wouldn't he not want smoke at that point? Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers predictable bc you capitalized Burns and at this point I know you're going to reference a character.. Who's a more popular Burns than Mr. Burns? And All over your body? Hmm Smithers is gay for Burns let's guess who Answer's going to end punch with How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die I googled Inigo... got nothing.. Did you mean InGo? This is stupid I'm not looking it up... Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx Is this a Ray Charles movie reference? Another movie reference? Good grief Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy ANOTHER MOVIE REFERENCE... this is actually decen though You have to be a movie and sports buff to full like these verses. No versatility whatsoever in this battle. I thought Answer was going to smoke AK's verse after that first punch that was dope but then he bombarded us with movie and character references... I've got Allen Knight here. He annoyed me less.
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Originally Posted by Allen Knight
take this war to ya fam.. face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance this was a dope concept, the overall set up could have been revised though. ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' lol, decent punch here. she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money funny twist, not bad. this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs ok, not really feeling this one. u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic DOPE. u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line all right.. u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it not feeling this one. i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church nah, brother deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law the '' '' killed me. lol nah, more statement ish my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks ok ok decent closer. vs My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib good opener. Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time Good punch and set up. I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime LOL, I fuck with this one. Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento ok but not my fave. My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame set up was trash, concept was cool. punch didn't hit as much though Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke nah. Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers nah. not feeling this one at all How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die didn't like the wording here or the set up Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx eh, okay ok Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy , dope.. damn this was closer than I expected. Thought both had some original concepts. Both struggled with wording but giving this to the battle who struggled less with this wording vote - answer. |
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ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance Meh...don't watch wrestling or mma whatever he's from... ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' Ok... she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money Nice... this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs Decent... u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic Nice... u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time* the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line Decent... u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it Lol... i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt* my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church Meh... deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law Ok... my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank* S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks Ok... Vs... My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib Nice... Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time Not feeling this... I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime* Uh... Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento Never seen the movie... My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame Nah... Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke Too simple... Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers Again too simple... How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die Don't get it... Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx Nah... Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy Ok... Was not the best from either one...ak concepts weren't as fresh as they normally are and answer with all the weird try hard references...didn't like that...overall I enjoyed AKs verse better...so I'm voting for him. |
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AK Raw, the savagery you brought to the verse is fucking horrific. I love it. Had a few fierce ass bars that hit really hard. Maybe 1 or 2 that didnt really do it in the beginning. Answer. Aint read much from you but thought your shit was quite the match for AK. Obviously had your handas full with this one. Personally though.. And even more since his verse was laid to read first, meaning you had to come even harder after him to really impress, i didnt find the impact in your bars that i saw in AKs. Just a little short, still really impressive though. But i aint finna sugar coat my vote... I got.. VOTE: .. AK with the win Good read guys. Again.. I aint got.time for a huge break down im bout to start my shift but i read this and you guys really inspired me to drop my 2 cents. Take it or leave it. 1
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08-22-2019, 05:38 PM | #18 |
He / Him / His
Join Date: Oct 2013
Posts: 1,676
Battle Record: 20-1
Champed - Summer Classic IX
- Netcees Battle League
- Fight night 15
Rep Power: 12534702 |
@Cashius @Barcotic @Hush @seth @Destroyer @BodySnatcher @Killing Spree @INF @Strikta @ORC @Sharp any chance some of yall could throw some votes on this
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08-23-2019, 05:02 PM | #19 |
Sini
Join Date: Dec 2018
Posts: 2,200
Battle Record: 4-25
Rep Power: 8129212 |
Allen Knight -
face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance Good. ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' Good. she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money Good. this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs Good. u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic Good. u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line Good. u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it Good. i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church Good. deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law Good. my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks Good. Answer - My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib Good. Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time Good I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime Good. Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento Good. My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame Good Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke Good Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers Good How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die Good Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx Good Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy Good. Good battle. Overall - Good battle guys, but Answer had the better verse. Lol. V/ Answer |
08-23-2019, 05:34 PM | #20 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 887
Battle Record: 8-7
Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast
Champed -Netcees Writers League
Rep Power: 10281356 |
Allen Knight -
face painted up, stick gotta extended long nose till ya mom knows vengeance ur skull in my hand, smoke in the air & bones on bodies like a Papa Shango entrance Good. ur slut picked me ova u, i snuck her in hallways & banged her crushed ur soul wen she went w/ her 'Gut Feeling' cuz it wasn't 'Always the Answer' Good. she gives handjobs for cash, w/ a gang of sluts that are hit & bummy her teams the Footclan, they run the streets at night jackin shit for money Good. this faggot been smashin dudes for centuries, u a bum & queer u go helmet to helmet so much AB would retire off the fact u used the same one for yrs Good. u in the finals composin the weakest trash, im doin ya tragic ironic u & Beetoven had the same handicap but the shit u writes about to ruin a Classic Good. u cant avenge blues L & he knows it, guap wasted in his wreckless time the verse u'll drop'll neva make Ryan Kerrigan about throwin money for a defensive line Good. u live life in closed caption, i learned sign langngue to bash clits i perfected Readin Lips cuz ur moms pussy always whisperin for me to come smash it Good. i get it in w/ the ol girl u luv, sinning every night i crash her skirt my dick & ur Excommunicated on a lvl so high before marrage i got bashished out the catholic church Good. deaf piece of shit...Listen, snitches out here get aired quick in the jaw u aint no "Court Stenographer" but u write down every word & share it w/ the law Good. my bars'll muslim from spittin & i'll light u up w/ a shank S'like a Harem, the site has a special place for bitches like u in the ranks Good. Answer - My team some savages, they’ll bust down ur fuckin door and get violent as shit It’s Jumanji, u gone see Allen Parrish while a buncha animals run wild in his crib Good. Bring your whole team, I’ll murder AK and WHOEVER wants to reach for a nine Anyone w/ a weapon gone be followin this fairy into a trunk.. Ocarina of Time Good I’ll rape Allen’s slut in front of him & he won’t do shit about it.. don’t let it phase me That bitch’ll be turning to Knight & crying before I smash like Brienne & Jaime Good. Used to fuck her on the daily - I remember feeling up her ass.. tits.. her legs, bro?! WHEW!! Every part of her BODY bring back some memories, must be Guy Pierce in Memento Good. My hitters will pump 30 rounds in your whole family tree if I throw them change It’s hard to stop my dogs from lickin when I put a band on ya head, it’s a cone of shame Good Watch this faggot turn into a straight BITCH when I shove a 38 down his fucking throat Candy Cigarettes - when that stick’s in ya mouth youngin’s just pretendin he wants that smoke Good Switch to Arson, blast the flamethrower til every inch of ur faggot face is blistered You’ll have Burns all over your body.. u a walking wet dream for Waylon Smithers Good How many figures you makin g? Cuz I’m bout to run your pockets & inherit mine This gone be Inigo check for u.. if I see u got 6 digits on hand, u can prepare to die Good Murder you in cold blood, you think you gone hear a peep from ya lady? Stop All that hush money, she getting paid to act like she ain’t seein nothing like Jamie Foxx Good Your ho into some freak shit.. whips, chains, on a sex swing actin unruly & testy She do whatever I say when I pull her hair like she making Ratatouille w/ Remy Good. Good battle. Overall - Good battle guys, but Allen had the better verse. Lol. V/ Allen |
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