02-18-2019, 07:07 PM | #1 |
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Shia Labruh vs Blas - BLAS WINS
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02-18-2019, 09:05 PM | #2 |
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Yay! :)
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02-19-2019, 12:07 AM | #3 |
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10's good unless you really want to go more, lmk when you wanna drop by
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02-19-2019, 04:18 PM | #4 |
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I'm ok with 12.
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02-19-2019, 04:29 PM | #5 |
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12's cool, gl. wanna drop by tonight?
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02-19-2019, 04:55 PM | #6 |
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That would be awesome.
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02-19-2019, 05:19 PM | #7 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved 2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either |
02-19-2019, 08:14 PM | #8 |
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We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help.
Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.." Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas Last edited by Shia Labruh; 02-21-2019 at 03:27 PM. Reason: Typo |
02-23-2019, 03:18 AM | #9 |
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02-23-2019, 08:44 AM | #10 |
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although war/cards is old this execution was good
chick that got away coulda been used a lil better, still solid wasnt feelin tesla at all wasnt feelin the wall punch, seen too many and it gotta be creative shy wordplay was a lil simplistic merkes/ethered is just lazy lol.. this concept coulda been fire, wasnt feelin the execution vs opener was weird, nahhh fracture urns lol.. the punch was alot to deal with but i fucked with it seen these lines before but execution was nice from the setup on wasnt feelin proximity mine do your mans.. this line was gay af haha wasnt feelin the closer this was close.. alot of takeways, but blas was a lil smoother to read, shia had lows that were really bad v Blas
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02-23-2019, 11:58 AM | #11 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right Nice opener Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to Okish nothing hard hitting tho Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved Nahhh didn't like this one 2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall lol funny hit imo Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you Could have been more detailed Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either Ok ender, wording a little basic tho -------- We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help. Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.." Wasn't feeling this bro Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs This is ok If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in Wording could have been better, concept is dope tho u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. Nice I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance This is ok at best Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas Could have made closer hit way harder, miss for me tho Props to both I got Blas taking this V-Blas
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02-23-2019, 03:24 PM | #12 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right i mean..you literally have no possible idea what card you’re going to draw when playing war. Wasn’t feelin this Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to nah Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved ??? 2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall lol ok Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you this is decent, had potential for more Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either nah Vs We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help. Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.." this is not ok Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs what? If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in this was good u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. good again I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance nah Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas nah A lot of misses in this battle. Both gotta step it up but I have Shia with the better hits. Vote Shia Labuff |
02-23-2019, 03:53 PM | #13 |
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02-24-2019, 08:36 PM | #14 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. yo idk here, you guys were kinda all over the place. blas had more wordplay but didnt always connect so hard with it. shia was crazy hit or miss, liked his bars i quoted more tho shia |
02-24-2019, 11:30 PM | #15 |
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02-25-2019, 12:15 AM | #16 |
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Didn't feel much from this battle tbh..
a lot of light hits & misses.. Shia had better wording to me & Proximity, Sonic lines were his standouts.. Closer could have hit to w/ revision. Opener was a wasted me.. & last four missed Blas - Boarder line was an almost ShyA was almost too closer I did before & better You were more consistent here.. Not as many big misses or highs V blas, but cointoss imo Last edited by Saint; 02-25-2019 at 10:06 AM. |
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02-25-2019, 09:58 AM | #18 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right (Subtle wp in the set up was cool. I think the war card game concept is a little basic but executed very well. Solid opener) Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to (Lol this is pretty funny. I thought the flip was pretty clever) Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved (I like the concept but I think the execution woulda had to be damn near flawless to make this work because how you had to weave the Tesla concept into the him not wanting to fight in person concept. Ambitious punch but didn’t quite execute it imo) 2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall (Lol this just okay imo. Got a lil chuckle but there’s been a lot of trump wall punches and some that have had boarder/border flips. Good execution but concept kinda basic. Okay overall) Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you (Cool. The wp isnt crazy but it’s cool. The horrible trait part only works one way. You set this up very well though - that’s what makes it land) Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either (This is pretty nice. Debate and the all evidence part and dope tie ins. I like the straw man flip. Ended the punch well. All around this is a nice, witty punch) We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help. Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.." (This one is a bad miss. The set up didn’t really relate to the punch. The punch kinda doesn’t work and even still it just comes off very corny) Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs (It’s unclear what you trying to say here. Not sure what the set up was trying today either) If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in (Ha! I like the concept. If you coulda changed the “with the quick service” to something that ties in a lil better, this woulda been a haymaker. As is, this was still a good line though) u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. (Alright I like this one. Much needed pause in the set up lol. Pretty good flip. You flipped a pretty lengthy phrase. Overall good line) I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance (Eh this is okay at best. The concept is a little too basic here. Woulda need more tie ins and a better set up to make this land heavy) Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas (Good concept. I think the strongboxing (the ing part) made it a bit a stretch. I still like the contain a blast part. This was okay) I got Blas taking this by a decent margin. He was just way more polished than Shia. Shia had some dope concepts but he had a REALLY bad miss with that opener and his execution was okay in most lines but sloppy on quite a few lines. Big fan of the subtle punches from Blas. Very solid writer with a lot of witty punches. Only thing you were lacking were the big haymakers. Still, very solid consistent verse. Mvgt Blas |
02-25-2019, 10:57 AM | #19 |
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Glock shoots designer bullets watch me turn his face to off white
So when I draw? It's war - ur losing unless u play ur fucking cards right liked the idea, but the "ur losing unless" part made this soft & not as threatening as it couldve been.. cool tho Females despise this geek, all your past relationships haunt you Every chick u lost is the one that got away, ironic since the new ones want to lol i cant recall seeig a "one that got away" play tbh so i liked this Beef?? Ill pull up in my TESLA & run him over, only way this shit gets resolved So it’s no surprise this pussies only bound to start it when there's distance involved attempt needed rewording 2 posts? Who the fuck are you.. Alias nerdy faggots swear I’m killing them all You’re the WORST BOARDER EVER no wonder we’re fucking building the wall lol dece Meek bitch wouldn’t say shit in person, all you do is type dude Plus ShyA horrible trait to have but it literally fucking defines you ehh, easy np not really feeling Treat this battle like a debate, all evidence proves u’ll get merked/ethered Your verse is just clutching at a straw, man & those tactics wont work either good set-up and tie-ins.. fresh idea, this was cool Vs We're not the pig, Zelph. But let's run wit that, ock. Shit it'll help. Punching you repeatedly got the lime like, "Stop hitting yourself.. Stop hitting yourself.." no.. if this was a swag attempt it failed Bitch I'll fracture urns. Uppercut'll have you tasting poverty, so act concern When it hits, your teeth'll click together & throw up set to rival your plaques & germs man this throw up sets flip couldve been fire with the click together idea but the way the punch was worded at the end killed it imo If I catcha riding in your whip, siding wit your bitch then it's on & popping Skate up on you wit that quick service at your window. Call it the Sonic Drive-in nice, this was cool u don't want war wit me. Explosive when I blow you fucks. Pause.. Proximity mine- Step anywhere close wit in my range & I. Go. T.F. Off. wording was weird.. the prox mine idea was a cool attempt but this couldve been real dope I'll smack you toothless fam. Cracked & fractured then after do your mans Wanna be one wit Zelph sooo bad that ya'll have an actively practice fusion dance dont get it, sorry Get pulverized by these hands. Or save your ass cause the range is nast These knucks da bomb. & I gotta 'strongbox'ing skill set that'll help contain a Blas cool idea, again tho this couldve been delivered a lot better All in all this is pretty close imo, Shia had some cool ideas, Sonic was dope but wording hurt him alot to me and the concepts seemed under-developed...with some reworking of his concepts this mightve been a diff story, but Blas edged this to me with consistency and the better delivered verse.. props to both Vote - Blas
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