01-28-2019, 04:22 AM | #1 |
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Flow vs Wear Shhh - ZELPH WINS
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01-28-2019, 09:31 AM | #3 | |
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01-31-2019, 07:50 PM | #4 |
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Flow aka Jay Welsh
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01-31-2019, 08:03 PM | #5 | |
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We can battle back to back for eternity, you'll never see me kneel Ill give this 'Model' 8 rounds jus to beat him n take back the Steel Feel me stacking the chips up, son you ain't got the green It's easy to put money where your mouth is when yours looks like a slot machine! Last week's theme kids but imma maul cop like Paul Blart bitch! Easy to beat a prick when half his lines he Pixar straight outta Disney flicks.. His axe wound of a face makes every bitch he ever meets sick Shit.. Only way lips giving a diamond ring is if the vajazzaler slips Bayou a back to back winner unlike this line biter.. you as crooked as a bend ironic you'll never see that sort of Blue Streak even after robbing 'gems' from your friends All love homie |
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01-31-2019, 08:38 PM | #6 |
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FUCK BRITS
Badge on w/ a tec in ur house.. He’ll get robbed n then split in the mouth 1st u’ll get a mugshot.. then im makin JPAY for them funds like a prison account I’m here to lay u to rest. Temple of Doom, aim for this mark’ w the tecs Look what I’m totin’ fam, Mola Ram - one arm will rip ur heart out ur chest! thought ur hoe was hot bro? She’s not yo, teller’ swallow this Glock smoke I’ll leave a round in her mouth while the hogs cookin over the fire like a pot roast! I’ll blast u & ur mentor. Once Lars is gone who will u send for? Aint horsin’ around.. but I’m literally a beast wit the arms like a centaur It ain’t ur day wen I let it spray. Fuck it let the hammer expose you Then I’m at ya grave.. lettin it ring in a box like a marriage proposal! |
01-31-2019, 10:34 PM | #7 |
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Flow -
We can battle back to back for eternity, you'll never see me kneel Ill give this 'Model' 8 rounds jus to beat him n take back the Steel Dope concept you have here..it's a dope line in way..it's a bit too statement-ish here don't you think..could be improvised..but this was okay..good way to open..lol..niice... Feel me stacking the chips up, son you ain't got the green It's easy to put money where your mouth is when yours looks like a slot machine! I enjoy this bar, was pretty dope..I thought it was good..niice one here..man... Last week's theme kids but imma maul cop like Paul Blart bitch! Easy to beat a prick when half his lines he Pixar straight outta Disney flicks.. I enjoyed this bar..nice one..cool to picture..I mean pixar..lol..but this was okay..dope... His axe wound of a face makes every bitch he ever meets sick Shit.. Only way lips giving a diamond ring is if the vajazzaler slips Lol..this could be pretty cool..as it is..it's kind of good..okay bar... Bayou a back to back winner unlike this line biter.. you as crooked as a bend ironic you'll never see that sort of Blue Streak even after robbing 'gems' from your friends I thought this was a cool way to close..not too shabby man... Overall - I enjoy your style flow, it's simple and to the point - it's effecient and makes your opponents wary..nice job...keep it up..lol... Wear Shh - Badge on w/ a tec in ur house.. He’ll get robbed n then split in the mouth 1st u’ll get a mugshot.. then im makin JPAY for them funds like a prison account This could be better..a little too mild here..but it was okay..lol... I’m here to lay u to rest. Temple of Doom, aim for this mark’ w the tecs Look what I’m totin’ fam, Mola Ram - one arm will rip ur heart out ur chest! This was cool..pretty cool bar here..nice one..man...lol... thought ur hoe was hot bro? She’s not yo, teller’ swallow this Glock smoke I’ll leave a round in her mouth while the hogs cookin over the fire like a pot roast! I thought this was okay..could be more improvised..but this was okay..lol... I’ll blast u & ur mentor. Once Lars is gone who will u send for? Aint horsin’ around.. but I’m literally a beast wit the arms like a centaur This was nice..cool bar... It ain’t ur day wen I let it spray. Fuck it let the hammer expose you Then I’m at ya grave.. lettin it ring in a box like a marriage proposal! Lmao..pretty cool bar..nice one... Overall - You're pretty nice with it..you are cool with the basics..more so..you're gonna' need to expand ur concepts..but this was okay..lol... Winner - Overall - Both did cool..and nice..but I have to go with the battler I thought came more efficient..more clean..and that is flow V/ Flow |
02-01-2019, 06:13 PM | #8 | ||
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v. Flow... a lotta of bad misses from both sides but i give him the edge to him because i think his 2 quotes i liked were better. idk wasnt feeling this battle much gents. |
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02-02-2019, 11:31 AM | #9 |
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We can battle back to back for eternity, you'll never see me kneel
Ill give this 'Model' 8 rounds jus to beat him n take back the Steel Coo opener! Not heavy, but I liked this here Feel me stacking the chips up, son you ain't got the green It's easy to put money where your mouth is when yours looks like a slot machine! Ehhh, think the wording on this here kinda lacked. Could have hit way harder if worded right. Ok line tho not terrible! Last week's theme kids but imma maul cop like Paul Blart bitch! Easy to beat a prick when half his lines he Pixar straight outta Disney flicks.. Straight here! His axe wound of a face makes every bitch he ever meets sick Shit.. Only way lips giving a diamond ring is if the vajazzaler slips Lol this was fiya! Bayou a back to back winner unlike this line biter.. you as crooked as a bend ironic you'll never see that sort of Blue Streak even after robbing 'gems' from your friends Ok closer! ---------- Badge on w/ a tec in ur house.. He’ll get robbed n then split in the mouth 1st u’ll get a mugshot.. then im makin JPAY for them funds like a prison account JPay/Prison account/Mugshot tie in made this hit for me! Good opener I’m here to lay u to rest. Temple of Doom, aim for this mark’ w the tecs Look what I’m totin’ fam, Mola Ram - one arm will rip ur heart out ur chest! Fiyaaaa! Haymaker here imo thought ur hoe was hot bro? She’s not yo, teller’ swallow this Glock smoke I’ll leave a round in her mouth while the hogs cookin over the fire like a pot roast! Another good hit here! Worded just right with the execution! I’ll blast u & ur mentor. Once Lars is gone who will u send for? Aint horsin’ around.. but I’m literally a beast wit the arms like a centaur This is coo, light simple hit. It ain’t ur day wen I let it spray. Fuck it let the hammer expose you Then I’m at ya grave.. lettin it ring in a box like a marriage proposal! Think this could have been worded just a little better even executed better. Light closer tho… Overall this was a cool matchup, I got Zelph. Pretty much was even, but that Mola Ram bar by Z edged him slightly here. Props to both V-Zelph
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02-02-2019, 01:33 PM | #10 |
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We can battle back to back for eternity, you'll never see me kneel
Ill give this 'Model' 8 rounds jus to beat him n take back the Steel ok Feel me stacking the chips up, son you ain't got the green It's easy to put money where your mouth is when yours looks like a slot machine! funny but light Last week's theme kids but imma maul cop like Paul Blart bitch! Easy to beat a prick when half his lines he Pixar straight outta Disney flicks.. funny but light His axe wound of a face makes every bitch he ever meets sick Shit.. Only way lips giving a diamond ring is if the vajazzaler slips not feeling this Bayou a back to back winner unlike this line biter.. you as crooked as a bend ironic you'll never see that sort of Blue Streak even after robbing 'gems' from your friends ok Badge on w/ a tec in ur house.. He’ll get robbed n then split in the mouth 1st u’ll get a mugshot.. then im makin JPAY for them funds like a prison account cool I’m here to lay u to rest. Temple of Doom, aim for this mark’ w the tecs Look what I’m totin’ fam, Mola Ram - one arm will rip ur heart out ur chest! nice thought ur hoe was hot bro? She’s not yo, teller’ swallow this Glock smoke I’ll leave a round in her mouth while the hogs cookin over the fire like a pot roast! ok I’ll blast u & ur mentor. Once Lars is gone who will u send for? Aint horsin’ around.. but I’m literally a beast wit the arms like a centaur funny but light It ain’t ur day wen I let it spray. Fuck it let the hammer expose you Then I’m at ya grave.. lettin it ring in a box like a marriage proposal! ok both were consistent but i got sheck wes being a little harsher sheck wes |
02-02-2019, 04:41 PM | #11 |
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We can battle back to back for eternity, you'll never see me kneel
Ill give this 'Model' 8 rounds jus to beat him n take back the Steel cool intro Feel me stacking the chips up, son you ain't got the green It's easy to put money where your mouth is when yours looks like a slot machine! LOL Last week's theme kids but imma maul cop like Paul Blart bitch! Easy to beat a prick when half his lines he Pixar straight outta Disney flicks.. I like this. His axe wound of a face makes every bitch he ever meets sick Shit.. Only way lips giving a diamond ring is if the vajazzaler slips ehhh, Idk about this brodie Bayou a back to back winner unlike this line biter.. you as crooked as a bend ironic you'll never see that sort of Blue Streak even after robbing 'gems' from your friends st8 Badge on w/ a tec in ur house.. He’ll get robbed n then split in the mouth 1st u’ll get a mugshot.. then im makin JPAY for them funds like a prison account i fuck with this I’m here to lay u to rest. Temple of Doom, aim for this mark’ w the tecs Look what I’m totin’ fam, Mola Ram - one arm will rip ur heart out ur chest! dope, Indiana Jone on Netflix thought ur hoe was hot bro? She’s not yo, teller’ swallow this Glock smoke I’ll leave a round in her mouth while the hogs cookin over the fire like a pot roast! another good bar I’ll blast u & ur mentor. Once Lars is gone who will u send for? Aint horsin’ around.. but I’m literally a beast wit the arms like a centaur more swaggy but nice It ain’t ur day wen I let it spray. Fuck it let the hammer expose you Then I’m at ya grave.. lettin it ring in a box like a marriage proposal! ehh, decent closer vote Sheck in a close one. Props to both these Gs |
02-03-2019, 01:53 AM | #12 | ||
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Not really loving either verse here. It's Flow's slot machine and axe wound of a face vs. Sheck's an Indiana Jones line and blast your mentor I'm gonna narrowly edge this one to vote Sheck Wes Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-03-2019 at 01:59 AM. |
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02-03-2019, 02:56 AM | #13 |
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Literally came down to one more consistent line to me..
slot machine was jokes pixar cool concept not so much execution closer was ehh sheck -- lots of gunbars here Mola Ram was lotb possibly.. very close, opener & pot roast were almost centaur wasnt that good lol vote sheck by a bar |
02-03-2019, 07:15 AM | #14 |
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02-03-2019, 07:51 AM | #15 |
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LOOOOOOL Flow, stop it
didn’t get your opener, liked slot machine, Pixar wordplay was nice but needed rewording and saw someone used on in the chat thread also which maybe took away from its impact slightly here. The vajazzle idea was good conceptually but worded sloppy. didn’t get the closer tbh Zelph: JPAY was a dope idea but didn’t land with any sting because of the similie you went for, needed some Allen Knight type wording to make it really land, you know? I didn’t get a Mola ram. round in mouth been done, hog roast similie made it too simple sounding again here - with better wording it could have lander harder I think. LOL I fuck with centaur even though these text battle cats won’t, prob get scrutinised for not attacking the opponent but ehhhhh outside of these forums I can fuck with that line. Lol. Pretty sure I’ve heard/watched/read something along the lines of that ring in a box shit before but not saying you bit or anything, just that it’s not as fresh as you maybe think still had Zelph ahead marginally with Flow’s wording of a couple concepts being what decided it. |
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