OFFICIAL SINACOG OPEN MIC THREAD

[Sinacog]

Demons -

Demons hide in the crevices of darkness; surrendering their heart to their soul as heartless
Spark darkness from rhetoric tongue; tongue blast devils to death in the dungeons of hell
I ate Solomon's wisdom; broke his schism to smithereens than smoked a byzantine smoke blunt
Coke blunts, coke bottles; and coke novels; coke novelty's; coke singers; and coke dancers
I'm a novelty; sharp tongue bothered Socrates; a anomaly from Sodomy; and Sodom and Gommorah
I am a plethora of rhymes; multiply division; and add subtraction; than break a blade into fractions
Come forth a wicked tongue; I hinder love with a blanket of sparrows and arrows
I killed The Pharoah of RA with a bow and arrow from across the desert Map of Egypt..

Come forth good devil..and show me your pitchfork and sharp thought tongue..

Devil -

I am The Devil; harnessing evil in thoughts; sharp thoughts kill a baby to thoughtless smithereens
I killed a guillotine with a pitchfork and flames cauldron; cold grin kills monarchy's of demons
I've killed many demons and heathens in hell; relinquished their guard than cherished my mark
I am a heart of stone; a heart of gold; I am the unknown of darkness; the thoughtless thoughts
Render smite from both claws; than smite and strike a demon to smithereens
I held a guillotine in my thought tongue before killing a demon in a hell guillotine...

..Come Forth Demon..test your clever' wit' against the devil..SATAN HIMSELF..

[Sinacog]

I am the devil on another level; shrinking steeples under needles
Puncture people with evil gullotine smoke; I am a byzantine joke
Provoke Jester's and prince's to kill themselves under hell's eye
I am a raffle of numbers in hell; from a genetic demon; born monster
I am a demon from hell; hell's spawn from the gumption of needles
Born steeple cathedral; inhale evil and blue/blew evil from a hell's spawn
I am hell's spawn; conquer needles; the epitome of evil in a cathedral
Punchture needles in steeples with needles in steeples; bring forth light
I am darkness and light; darkness and light; harbor the night
Somber is light; conquer the night; conquer the light; conquer the night...

[Mediocrity]

How can you puncture people with guillotine smoke? Secondly, how does a guillotine produce smoke

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

Originally Posted by Sinacog

POUR LIQUOR FOR A FALLEN NIGGER! THAN LAUGH LAUGH LAUGH! LAUGH

[Sinacog]

In my heart rests divide - in my hear(t) rests a rhyme - Saint Peter at the 'ALTARS' I'm the best in line - texting rhymes!!!
Seer with ancient voodoo, I'll vex your rhymes - I was sentenced to 400 eons of molecular torture when I etched a rhyme - your bars are ''''ANCIENT RUIN'''' - that withstood the ''TESTS OF TIME''!!

Halo as a Arch Angel - the sheik of a flame; the belief of a faith; my teeth will divide as a beast with the rhymes!!
I breeze with the rhymes; I'm rhyming in a writing report; this ''ESSAY'' is easy with rhymes; this is 'easy as cake' 'easy as pie'!!

Arch Angel with a Halo; You're nice with rhymes? Who cares! I'm as dope as I '"SAY SO'' - halo march!
I have a great flow art! The Angel's harp! I made my woman do the '"RAINBOW ARCH''!!

My rhyme is a swords stitch! I am The Lord's Witch! I rhyme like a hornet; I have '"STING'' - I could kill you when I rhyme in a chorus!
Burn a rhyme with the sources! It's time for the forest! I'll kill you and put you in a ''PUSSY BOX''

--

LIKE A ABORTION

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

Originally Posted by Sinacog

POUR LIQUOR FOR A FALLEN NIGGER! THAN LAUGH LAUGH LAUGH! LAUGH

[Sinacog]

The black and red devil -

A black devil harbors in the darkness of night. His black tail whisping away in the wind; gusts stroking his body in lax and superstition. The night inhabits bits and pieces of lost darkness, betrayal, and defeat. A mushroom, in dark green grass glows for the black devil, and his immediate prey; a family of lost travelers; beckoned by their special son in the white glistening' Moonlight. The black devil has immediate credentials to kill the family, in the name of The Lord God, and savior Jesus Christ; for the crosses of crucifixions must forever be sacred; and God's word must upheed diligence and absolution. The gusts of dark wind blow through the strokes of hair of the lost family, as they are sinners in no absolution of God's word. This lost dark family follows God's word in it's over-view; in which they hold it's word true for their care; but they do no uphold it as love and absolute. They taint the name of God, and laugh at the crucifixions; therefore they will be punished by the devil; who was sent from the dark gallows of Hell. The family, however; have a special son; who they uphold to be a Saint or prosperous being. He is beautiful and delightful; prospering with splendor, joy and warmth. This son could be a visionary; as his eyes are never lost in tales, but follow the path of peace, and prosperity. However, he is deep to uphold his family as true and care, loving them unconditionally. Alas, it is not enough for the black devil to spare his family for their lack in the christian faith. But the black devil see's something inside of the special son. That is faith that his family doesn't hold. He see's care, and splendor in the boy; and see's him in the dark valves of God's judgement and kingdom. The black devil, makes immediate lunges to attack and kill this family, as they are lacking in faith in conviction for Christianity. And they will surely suffer in the flames and gallows of Hell. The black devil moves at the speed of sound, killing the father with a blade knife, the mother next, than the following. The family is killed in less than 2 minutes; as the black devil is so proficient in killing; he is a master of swordsmanship. The black devil sends them to a layer of hell, where they will face punishment from his master Lucifer the Devil; for many years. The black devil turns towards his left side to see the special son, with care and splendor left only alive. The black devil see's the boy as darkness's inhabitance, having witnessed the killing of his family. The boy knew that this was a black devil, but did not say a word; wanting to make the black devil leave. The black devil noticed, his strategy and was intrigued. He saw great goodness in the boy, and wanted to live him in a way. The black devil decided to name the boy 'Andrew' and marked him as a manifestation of a red devil. The black devil teleported back to Hell, and the red devil cried diligently in the Moonlight.

[Sinacog]

Can I please have some good feed-back on this, if you enjoyed it?
@dead man, or someone else?

[Eŋg]

Originally Posted by Sinacog

Can I please have some good feed-back on this

you insolent little fuck.

[PancakeBrah]

This is awful.

[Sinacog]

Read it again..and feedback next time..it's good..lol..

[Eŋg]

you lack fundamentals in writing prose; the punctuation is arbitrary, grammar inconsistent, use of words (adjectives and verbs, generally) are either repetitive, tautological or outright egregious. occasionally tenses are confused.

nothing about the stilted narrative redeems this. nothing.

you write like a child. a dim one. with a thesaurus but no context. the only thing more painful than reading this is your illusory talent.

there's your feedback.

[Orc]

Originally Posted by Eŋg

you lack fundamentals in writing prose; the punctuation is arbitrary, grammar inconsistent, use of words (adjectives and verbs, generally) are either repetitive, tautological or outright egregious. occasionally tenses are confused.

nothing about the stilted narrative redeems this. nothing.

you write like a child. a dim one. with a thesaurus but no context. the only thing more painful than reading this is your illusory talent.

there's your feedback.

On Christmas Day? Ruthless

[Eŋg]

Originally Posted by ORC

On Christmas Day? Ruthless

in my defence, i don't celebrate christmas. the time off is nice, though.

(and sinacog is some kind of moron.)

[Sinacog]

lol..you're a snake or something..but it's all good..maybe we'll meet in the arena or something..but thanks..it's all good..

[Qualm]

If u spent time improving ur writing instead of crying cuz u suck u might get better

[Exis]

Definitely not my thing...I like the imagery you tried to lace this verse with but nah, this is pretty much all filler nonsense...I read it 3 times & honestly there's nothin' I'd quote.

& please chill on postin' so many joints...when you have more than 3 on the first page you need to let shit go aleady...

[Sinacog]

Conjuring black serpents from a ribbon band, smitzerene land
comatose rants, polarize grandeur on a balancing beam, sanskrit serene
ribbon of peace, polish snakes on serpent glass, worthless wrath
serpent laugh, firm with wrath; conjure black serpents from a glass box
glass boxes and serpents of grace, erase from the face of the earth
savior of birth, visionary Muhammad saw in a vision, I am a dream
balancing beams, capture the gleam, ponder dreamscapes on blankets and pillows
weep with a willow, conjure black magic with white magicians, sinister magician
wizard of demonic tongue, serpent Sanskrit, conjure white magic; sought black myths
conjure pathos and ethos, in whirlwinds; monoliths sat atop of monuments and pedestals
paradise see's heaven's gates, hell's keeper; kills Saint Peter the Gate keeper
The grim reaper weeps with father time, omnificent Elohim's and Angels provide conjuring shelter
black myth of serpentine Eazen, worthless dreams, seldom scenes of ghosts and pentagrams
relish hands, relish lands, ponder dreams with nightmares, sun's flare blinds the moon
serpentine of pristine and serene, embellish beings, I'm a visionary, dreamscapes conjure black magic
open Pandora's box, my serpents tail has risen, conjure white magic with wands and wings
for I am a serpent with wings, evil and sinister, the sought of scorn
I am a Spanish visionary, with the plots of schemes, as a fox and lore..

......

[Mediocrity]

Hell yeah spit them Harry Potter bars G

[Exis]

This wasn't good Dragon...Get away from the God/Satan hell gave me this thinkin' you flames repetitive pattern...

Please for the board sake, no more OM's for a minute...let others here shine son.