11-12-2018, 07:34 AM | #1 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
Round 1: Spider-Man vs. Venom - SPIDER-MAN WINS
Tournament Rules
1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!! 2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh. 3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16 4. ONLY ONE EXTENTION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread. 5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday. - NO BITING - NO RECYCLING - NO CHEATING - NO SWAYING Spider-Man Venom |
11-12-2018, 11:31 AM | #2 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
SPIDER-MAN HAS CHECKED IN & SENT HIS VERSE
VENOM MUST NOW MATCH 10 LINES |
11-12-2018, 05:45 PM | #3 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
VENOM HAS CHECKED IN
|
11-17-2018, 05:05 AM | #4 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
Spider-Man’s Verse:
This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage |
11-17-2018, 05:08 AM | #5 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
Venom’s Verse:
When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy |
11-17-2018, 05:15 PM | #6 | |
Shrewd as evearthed
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Wolverhampton, England
Posts: 8,270
Battle Record: 28-3
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- The Winter Topical
- Topical Martyrs
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- Lyric Olympics
- Art of Writing League
- Guerrilla Writing League (2x)
- Black August II
Rep Power: 85899392 |
Quote:
__________________
- Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season) |
|
11-17-2018, 05:19 PM | #7 | |
Shrewd as evearthed
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Wolverhampton, England
Posts: 8,270
Battle Record: 28-3
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- The Winter Topical
- Topical Martyrs
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- Lyric Olympics
- Art of Writing League
- Guerrilla Writing League (2x)
- Black August II
Rep Power: 85899392 |
Quote:
I got the first guy winning. better attack lines, more creative, better wording and concepts
__________________
- Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season) |
|
11-17-2018, 11:10 PM | #8 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking
Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely nah - maybe could have been good if vin diesel had anything to do with his character Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs alright Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me this was nice, good usage of the character Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk NO I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage alright cool 2 nice 1 ok 2 misses Vs When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid alright I liked it It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack nah lol When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire nice, good usage Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile ok not bad, had potential for more. I guess because thugs don’t play jeopardy Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy mick? I’m not following 2 nice 1 ok 2 misses Really close battle here, could definitely go either way depending on voters. I feel as though spiderman did more with the gimmick concept and capitalized on dissing his opponents character. Venom did good as well, but felt more like a standard battle verse on some lines. Vote Spider-Man |
11-18-2018, 03:54 AM | #9 |
Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
Rep Power: 24894578 |
Close battle but I'm going against the grain and vote venom. I felt Spidey opened with two straight misses, maybe that's the reason for the edge to venom for me. In truth I felt they both had two misses but I felt venoms hits just got more reaction from me, like the pulling legs off I thought was pretty cool.
Anyway tight contest vote ven |
11-18-2018, 07:53 PM | #10 | ||
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 887
Battle Record: 8-7
Accomplishments -NBL Pic Roast
Champed -Netcees Writers League
Rep Power: 10281356 |
Quote:
Quote:
|
||
11-18-2018, 08:05 PM | #11 |
on posting probation
Join Date: Jun 2018
Posts: 256
Battle Record: 0-1
Rep Power: 1879373 |
Wasn’t crazy about either. Fav line from venom was the jeopardy line and it didn’t have much to do with Spider-Man. Really disliked Spider-Man’s Jordan bar but the rest was a lot more consistent overall.
V/ spidey |
11-18-2018, 09:19 PM | #12 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 1,376
Battle Record: 26-32
Rep Power: 1309741 |
Only liked the Tom Hardy and Carnage lines from Spideys verse. Venom only had the opener and Tobey Maguire lines. So working from the misses, both had one total miss with the jordan/jeopady lines which were total filler. Spideys first 2 bars werent constructed well, the Vin/Ven and diesl/des'll wp was ok, but the Vin concept wasnt completed, then the Venom/fang thing kinda didnt make sense but was an ok concept. While Venoms eminem/spidey track wasnt too bad just not real hard, but his closer was a total miss for me.
So really close here but Spidey gets it by a hair |
11-19-2018, 09:41 AM | #13 |
Stackin' wins...
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,515
Battle Record: 61-20
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - Survivor Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (6x)
- Netcees Gimmick Tournament
Rep Power: 10353694 |
Hi...
This that arachnid strength dawg, both fists will leave u leaking Fuck Ven, diesel hit his chest & change his character completely this was cool but i dont get why the vin diesel reference was used in the first place. Saving lives left & right, while ur infectious energy so lame Uppercut'll take ‘venom out his body & save a lives', like extracting snake fangs couldve been executed better Sandman? The vulture? Pick a foe bitch I'm floorin’ em easy He ain't Hardy just an actor that needs a foreign parasite to beat me nah... Web u up, smack ya face, destroyin’ cats like u for fun Tongue hangin’ out, u'll get slammed harder than a Michael Jordan dunk This was good... I'm the mightiest of my city, don't front like ur hard bitch Spill ya blood all over the street, medics can't tell if its u or carnage Fire... When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is & THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid Ok It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack Nah When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire Nah Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile Fire Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy Solid I really liked you using "we" throughout the verse... Vote SM because he had less misses really... Bye...
__________________
the Outsiders Orc | ill nik-A | Sn00p | King Karaoke |
11-19-2018, 10:28 AM | #14 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2017
Posts: 3,986
Battle Record: 11-6
Rep Power: 5633913 |
Spider-Man Wins 7-0
|
Tags |
not mick lol, should be mimic* |
|
|