CHAT/PREDICTIONS - Page 24

Pharaohs Army · 03-06-2019, 04:55 PM

Save your efforts Lars, I'm probably not showing. 20 lines for that pic doesn't seem do-able. I don't write much these days.

sral · 03-06-2019, 06:10 PM

No probs

Thanks for letting me know

Bonjour, monsieur!
I analyse the passers by walking on the pier
The black and white patterned stripe uniformity is clear,
but not all is as appears.
There’s a contrast beyond that of our tourists souvenirs.
A deep disparity between the family you can see unravelling,

The love is gone.
It’s sauvignon blanc that kisses her lips in the middle of dinner,

No ring on her finger.

Rosé tinted glasses and faux-fait interaction

Au revoir to the olive gardens and croissant bars.

I’d only really got as far as odd snippets like that at that point haha! I hadn’t even begun putting them together. Just odd musings and pairings of ideas I liked.

Guess I’ll sit this one out.

Master Rock · 03-07-2019, 01:39 PM

Yo Pharoahs army, props for voting..What up people let's get some more votes in.

sral · 03-08-2019, 10:45 AM

Just let it go, dog.

Everyone that wanted to vote has had their chance and decided not to. It's a new week, new verses to take care of, that's why I haven't pushed it. You can still be champ.

Master Rock · 03-08-2019, 11:00 AM

I like the constructive feedback...I received it before and its great to see how I can consider others perspectives and determine where I can make adjusments. I find it valuable. I write because I love writing and I been in hibernation for the past 5 years.

sral · 03-08-2019, 01:12 PM

You know you lost, though, right?

Master Rock · 03-08-2019, 01:41 PM

https://static1.fjcdn.com/comments/N...4b9aa2eabd.jpg

Cereal · 03-12-2019, 12:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

@Split Eight vs @Diablo

@bleak vs @Lucipher Howlz

@Witty vs @Knucklehead

@John Dillinger vs @dead man

@uh-oh vs @Dynomight

Mag coming tomorrow, working on it now

Master Rock · 03-18-2019, 10:05 PM

Madd props on the vote, Cereal. I was about to submit an edit of the verse and seen your vote, good thing I didn't.

Cereal · 03-18-2019, 10:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Rock

Madd props on the vote, Cereal. I was about to submit an edit of the verse and seen your vote, good thing I didn't.

no probs big guy ;)

Adonis · 03-18-2019, 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Rock

Madd props on the vote, Cereal. I was about to submit an edit of the verse and seen your vote, good thing I didn't.

I'll allow it if it's something simple. I'm the furthest thing from a stickler there is. I just want to face my opponent at his best

But yes CK. thanks for voting, May this league live through you

Master Rock · 03-18-2019, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis

I'll allow it if it's something simple. I'm the furthest thing from a stickler there is. I just want to face my opponent at his best

But yes CK. thanks for voting, Bay this league love through you

Nah, bro it's all good. You're cool peeps and you already know what it is. I got you on the rebound.

On top of that is wouldn't be a simple edit, it's revamped.

Cereal · 03-19-2019, 03:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis

I'll allow it if it's something simple. I'm the furthest thing from a stickler there is. I just want to face my opponent at his best

But yes CK. thanks for voting, May this league live through you

oh it always has :)

Master Rock · 03-19-2019, 09:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis

I'll allow it if it's something simple

Haha..I do have some mispelled and misplaced words so I'll edit those, so it doesn't compromise the vote.

sral · 03-19-2019, 12:24 PM

I’ll vote up tonight prob

Adonis · 03-22-2019, 08:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL

I’ll vote up tonight prob

I'm ready G. Where you at? I'm trying to write something

Leggo

asylum · 03-21-2019, 10:23 AM

well shit. wasn't sure if this was happening or not! just logged on to drop and hope for the best. good luck this week, everyone.

Master Rock · 03-22-2019, 09:39 PM

Imma vote on the blas and blue battle...ya'll brothers need to do the same.

Inno · 03-29-2019, 10:05 PM

@sraL

You have my eternal respect. Props for keeping this alive.

I apologize to those I let down.

Cereal · 03-29-2019, 11:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator

@sraL

You have my eternal respect. Props for keeping this alive.

I apologize to those I let down.

me aswell

03-06-2019, 06:10 PM	#2
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	No probs Thanks for letting me know Bonjour, monsieur! I analyse the passers by walking on the pier The black and white patterned stripe uniformity is clear, but not all is as appears. There’s a contrast beyond that of our tourists souvenirs. A deep disparity between the family you can see unravelling, The love is gone. It’s sauvignon blanc that kisses her lips in the middle of dinner, No ring on her finger. Rosé tinted glasses and faux-fait interaction Au revoir to the olive gardens and croissant bars. I’d only really got as far as odd snippets like that at that point haha! I hadn’t even begun putting them together. Just odd musings and pairings of ideas I liked. Guess I’ll sit this one out. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-07-2019, 01:39 PM	#3
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	Yo Pharoahs army, props for voting..What up people let's get some more votes in. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

03-08-2019, 10:45 AM	#4
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	Just let it go, dog. Everyone that wanted to vote has had their chance and decided not to. It's a new week, new verses to take care of, that's why I haven't pushed it. You can still be champ. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-08-2019, 11:00 AM	#5
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	I like the constructive feedback...I received it before and its great to see how I can consider others perspectives and determine where I can make adjusments. I find it valuable. I write because I love writing and I been in hibernation for the past 5 years. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz Last edited by Master Rock; 03-08-2019 at 11:05 AM.

03-08-2019, 01:12 PM	#6
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	You know you lost, though, right? __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-06-2019, 04:55 PM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Save your efforts Lars, I'm probably not showing. 20 lines for that pic doesn't seem do-able. I don't write much these days.

03-08-2019, 01:41 PM	#7
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	https://static1.fjcdn.com/comments/N...4b9aa2eabd.jpg __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz Last edited by Master Rock; 03-08-2019 at 09:32 PM.

03-18-2019, 10:05 PM	#9
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	Madd props on the vote, Cereal. I was about to submit an edit of the verse and seen your vote, good thing I didn't. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

03-19-2019, 12:24 PM	#15
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899395	I’ll vote up tonight prob __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

03-21-2019, 10:23 AM	#17
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	well shit. wasn't sure if this was happening or not! just logged on to drop and hope for the best. good luck this week, everyone.

03-22-2019, 09:39 PM	#18
Master Rock Steadily Lurking Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Beyond your reach Posts: 1,391 Battle Record: 7-7 Champed - Netcees Writers League Rep Power: 5599641	Imma vote on the blas and blue battle...ya'll brothers need to do the same. __________________ https://www.instagram.com/master_rock1/ https://www.youtube.com/graphicalmindz

03-29-2019, 10:05 PM	#19
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,024 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	@sraL You have my eternal respect. Props for keeping this alive. I apologize to those I let down.