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FINAL 4: Blue Bayou vs. DynamiCz DY WINS
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Due Dates: Verses are due FRIDAY and will be open until Sunday/Monday Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 20 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Edit Rules: 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER YOUR MOM @Blue Bayou @DynamiCz
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08-07-2018, 01:27 PM | #2 |
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08-07-2018, 01:30 PM | #3 |
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08-07-2018, 02:36 PM | #4 |
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08-07-2018, 02:42 PM | #5 |
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08-09-2018, 01:08 PM | #6 |
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08-09-2018, 01:19 PM | #7 |
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08-10-2018, 12:52 PM | #8 |
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame.. so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink.. leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name.. when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home.. ‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts.. you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned.. he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults.. wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf |
08-10-2018, 12:55 PM | #9 |
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Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
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08-10-2018, 09:41 PM | #10 |
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling eiither it wasn’t worded good or I just don’t get it? you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame.. so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game Who wrote this? Barcotic? Nah I’m playin this was alright blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink.. leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink lol alright since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name.. when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign this is a no attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home.. ‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone pretty cool here claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts.. you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back youd need a Rodney Hood tie in for this to work bro kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned.. he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension this is nice, fresh wordplay done perfectly tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults.. wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf nah lol 2 good 2 ok 4 misses Vs Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom this is OK, I appreciate the cleverness but it’s nothing hard hitting God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint decent here, wording a bit forced in second line I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta i fuck w/ this. Good punch here What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit lol alright Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy ahh this one had potential but I’m just not feelin how it was done here tbh Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire Good here Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother Ancient shit here lol concept and wp pretty old and overused I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin lol this was cool 3 good 2 ok 1 Decent 2 misses This was a cool battle here, can go either way but I feel like DynamiCz got it. Blue had LOTB but dyna was more consistent overall and had less misses than blue. Vote DynamiCz |
08-11-2018, 11:58 AM | #11 | |
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08-11-2018, 11:26 PM | #13 |
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Come on guys let’s get some votes
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08-12-2018, 01:15 AM | #14 | ||
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Decent battle, I don't think Blue came as hard as he should have. Maybe didn't have the time to reword a couple things. Dy wasn't str8 flames but I think he had enough here as a whole. U know what, Blue? 1 a battle, I'm gonna check on that Topeka shit. Na I still don't think so man, maybe if I had followed the story but there weren't enough tie ins with what I got from a Google. DynamiCz |
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08-12-2018, 05:05 PM | #15 |
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling this was cool assuming ur trying to predict his bars you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame.. so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game again this cool...nice wordplay but not too harsh of a line blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink.. leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink lol whoa.... this ok since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name.. when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign ehh attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home.. ‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone dope claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts.. you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back ehh kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned.. he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension decent at best tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults.. wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf nice Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom dope God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint lol nice I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta slick What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit this alright Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy st8 Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire cool bar Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother nah I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin rhyme scheme a tad off but this is st8 This is close. Blue went wordplay-heavy and I like your opener, trombone, and caddy bars but the rest wasn't up to the normal standard although that shrink line was wow. Dyn came with some harder lines(opener, police, magenta was fresh, wildfire was cool but some playedish/off worded concepts(policy, C murder). In the end, I'm going with Dyn for a more aggressive verse. Dope battle fellas. Last edited by BodySnatcher; 08-12-2018 at 11:18 PM. |
08-13-2018, 08:42 PM | #16 |
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08-13-2018, 08:49 PM | #17 |
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Everything but moet and Rodney
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08-14-2018, 09:34 AM | #18 |
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame.. so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink.. leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home.. ‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults.. wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin Both of these verses were mad consistent so I took it down to the highlights I think dynamicz had the advantage of being personal, which I like better, but those bars weren't as hard as the gun bars. Blue actually changed up his angles which might have worked against him since some of the bars weren't as hard/direct as his gun bars. It's close, but I would edge to dynamicz for consistently hitting, while blue didn't quite do that for me. I liked the Rodney Hood and moet wordplay (half of text probably can't pronounce 'Moet' anyway so respect for going for it) but they didn't feel as harsh to me. V/dynamicz |
08-14-2018, 12:39 PM | #19 |
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4-2 DYNAMICZ
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08-14-2018, 01:16 PM | #20 |
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