WK4: El Muffin 1-2 vs. Jabari Black 1-2 - Jabari Black WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@El Muffin @Jabari Black

[El Muffin]

Mad busy

But in

[Jabari Black]

Check. 12-16

[Jabari Black]

Originally Posted by El Muffin

But yeah . in conclusion . pop an extenze n fuck her to oblivion .

I keep em on deck .

Been dope since ‘02 huh...

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/
You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/
U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/
You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/
Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/

[El Muffin]

wasnt gona show but u hadda talk trash eh

fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process

gunbars rfun thx

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Jabari Black

Been dope since ‘02 huh...

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/

not very hard, veru statementish and done to death

Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/

lmao this was brilliant

U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/

nah, i hate 'that' punches. When they work they are great but alot of the time.they come off like you had an angle but couldnt word it in. This was one.of them moments for me

The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/

could of been dope but you over did it. Vwry stretched when read outloud

You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/

light but ill give you it

U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/

i did an extense bar on him already. HoT finals so this was a played to me

You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/

mm yeah ok

Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/

interesting idea

annoyed because that second bar was fire. Thats the sort or studf you should be doing reguarly. Some interestin ideas in here but overall i seen you do better an think muff probably going to come well enough to take this. Liked the use of your personals but they tough subjects so you could of been a lot nastier woth it for me. Anyway enjoyed the read an that second bar was LOLS.

Originally Posted by El Muffin

wasnt gona show but u hadda talk trash eh

fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
ok
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
ok bit light
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
ok. All feel a bit like banked bars though bro
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
coo
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
meh
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
like the reference to the modified boot. Didnt like way you used this felt a bit corny tbh
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
lol liked this
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process
nah
gunbars rfun thx

Ahh gunbars comment makes sense. Was all feeling rather banked an missin your usual rawness, deffo not your best but definately was consistent enough to take this as the more polished verse but blacks second bar was lotb for me.

Vote Muff

[GUDELJ]

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
nah this is too basic bru
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
lmaoooo this is good
U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/
alright not bad, had potential for more if done better but nonetheless it’s an ok bar
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/
damn ok, pretty good here
You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/
lol I liked this
U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/
good again, ok Jabari I see you
You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/
just ok
Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’
ehh decent at best

Jabari....good verse man, definitely the best you’ve written so far and I enjoyed reading this. Usually I skip out on 16 line battles but this was worth it. You had only 1 clear miss tbh and that’s rare in these battles that are 16 lines

Vs


fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
damn this was nice
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
ok
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
nah lol
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
alright
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
i hope people get this line cause it’s fire. I can see it going over heads tho. Good shit
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
alright pretty cool
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
niceeee
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process
alright

Jabari
3 Haymakers (1 barely made it)
3 Ok
1 Decent
1 Miss

Vs

Muff
3 Haymakers
4 Ok
1 Miss


This was a dope ass battle. Props to Jabari for dropping that fire and props to Muff for dropping as well, even tho he been whining a lot lately. Really close and hard to decide but I have Muff taking it with a tad bit more of a better verse overall. Props to Both.


Vote Muff

[DynamiCz]

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/

Lol Tawkkk!

Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/

Lmao funny personal!

U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/

Ehh, this was ok! Kinda played!

The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/

Now this was nice! Could have worded better tho!

You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/

Lol Nice!

U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/

Light, but coo

You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/

Nice

Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/

Lol ok closer!

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fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier

Coo opener

bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account

Lol coo

tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students

This was ok!

full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga

Nice!

open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class

Nahhh b

Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper

Decent

I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining

Lol nice

Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process

Cant get with this one!


Yooooo! I honestly don't know now! This here is close, but no disrespect to Jabari, but with Muff keying this right there at a split decision this obviously isn't his best work, but still cool none the less. That Dewy Decimal line was nice as hell and Muff had the kid from shining line that was nice too.

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Disrespect meter:

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/

vs

fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account

Aight! That Dewy line edged JB out this one, took me a fucking hour to decide this battle, but I got Jabari here. Shit crazy close tho

V-Jabari

[BodySnatcher]

Nigga you still queer, n ain’t accomplish much given how long you been here/
You been battling half ya life...and ya dumbass still mid-tier/
cool
Them losses gettin hard to stomach huh? Last week Blue was sonnin’ him/
And how the fuck you get no showed twice....and only won one of em/
LOTB
U got robbed once - U’ll get robbed again. Give up ya cash or the torch spray, bitch/
Cus I’ll let the ‘flame blow over the cake’...that’s a birthday wish/
not bad
The way you went behind Inf’s back on FN was truly detestable/
If I go behind ya back it’s .223s, .45s, .357s...I put these ‘numbers on ya spine’ like the Dewy Decimal/
long winded but good
You the hardest nigga out the ‘Burb huh? Well, I line eagles plus the 9’s lethal/
Leave u in a morgue w/ pale dead bodies...now you LITERALLY surrounded by white people/
good
U poppin dick pills like the shit’s cool. Saw ya bitch n now it all makes sense, fool/
Cus if I was smashing that ugly white girl, I would take extenze too/
st8
You fake fraud. That white bitch’ll have her murder scene taped off/
They’ll put that ‘white girl in a bag’...now you slinging 8-ball/
meh
Act brave n it’ll be like a Drake diss if you tryna scrap, ace/
You’ll end up ‘dead, beat’, n exposed after getting in ‘Black Face’/
st8




fraud ass alias. its a fucking joke that ur here
& i could give a fuck about Black Thoughts: Fgt, you never even been CLOSE to Premier
good
bih talking shit like i wont slap the lies from your mouth
ull only give me a run for MY money when i make u hit the atm & withdraw ur Entire account
not bad, light
tryna preach that BS. u can get slumped if u stupid
Sit Down or that Stick'll lead to Chalk: & its not a teachers introduction to Students
lol, aight
full clip no Halfpipe. cause theres no more rounds in the Kimber
u can catch that 'K off the Jump': & its no Tony Hawk challenge my nigga
dope
open up blinds? ur sole identifying traits'll get left on the glass
'Act up & then ur Principal at the Window' like he walked by n checked on the class
meh
Listen kid. im w/ the shits like your peewee's diaper.
Throw you in the Trunk & 'Put a Hole in it Just to See'...: bich, Im the D.C Sniper
st8
I hustle bitch. u just make up work like u missed an assignment
Run that Lip,Stick'll spell out Murder: - thats the Kid from the Shining
had i line similar line last week, i see i inspired you, i like mine better :)
Shoot w/ no conscious. leave u in tune w/ the darkness
Say a Few Words & that Torch'll send you on your way like a Viking funeral process
dope

This was close as 3 bars I really liked from each, the swing for me was JB had the no-show line and Muff had the shinning line that I used last week although differently different from mine. I got JB here.

[Twodrop]

this is close af. I get muff just 'keyed' this... but he must've thought he could win if he posted. Will be back by tonight with a decision.

[bleak]

Quick 1 here for the league I don't feel like waiting for battles to go up.

Muff you said it took 21 mins or something to key this and it shows, you had some decent stuff in here but I can tell that u were focused on tag shit. I think it hurt u and brought u to a level where JB could steal one.

JB that no show line was nice and should be a benchmark for what u should write every time. It's simple but simple works here if it's presented correctly. Numbers shit was a good try but it's hella long. Other than that everything was consistent and solid, this the best verse I 've read and getting better every week

Muff I think u dropped the ball on this one. I think you knew you were done with the league anyways but wanted to show, which I commend. But I got JB here his verse was really good this week

[GUDELJ]

Originally Posted by Twodrop

this is close af. I get muff just 'keyed' this... but he must've thought he could win if he posted. Will be back by tonight with a decision.

We need your decision. NOW.

3-2 Jabari Black

[Twodrop]

v/ JB

if muff wants a breakdown let me know.

Cool verses guys.

[GUDELJ]

4-2 Jabari Black WINS