Amor of Struggle

Malevolent · 04-13-2018, 12:15 PM

reach into the dark side of your mind for a solution
make use with the ruins left behind from seclusion
Without struggle and pain, happiness is an illusion
You can be happy in the rain if your used to it
look back at my darkest days to get through some shit
Without the hardship nd pain, success is diluted
The evolution of struggle is what makes us humans
habitual abuse with environmental nuisances
Its the perfect union of yin and yang we're faced with
Without hatred, how can we ever find peace in a place of sin?
Whats the point of the heavenly gates without Satan?
The good, the rage mixed and baked to create grace nd hatred
you must balance the sacred shit with hate and sin
We all in this complicated game, regardless of fate, you must play it

Exis · 04-17-2018, 09:16 AM

Short & sweet...right up my nasal passage, should collab sometime...

Stay you bro.

Elemental P · 04-18-2018, 10:32 PM

Nice piece, well written and nice flow with the multis. Good transitioning as well

iLL ScriptureZ · 04-19-2018, 04:15 PM

Good shit homie, the wording was the best I've seen from you. The transitions were smooth as well!

ACTIVATE SELF · 04-20-2018, 12:02 PM

Boom.

You dropped some jewels in this one, fam. Real talk. The flow was crisp and the wording was smooth. It was intelligent without be pretentious. Clean. Clear. And to the point. I dug it top to bottom.

Geno · 04-23-2018, 09:21 AM

Agree with everything said alrdy. Had a cut to the point syllable game going. Dug the material. Keep posting

Sammy · 04-25-2018, 01:51 PM

Quote:

The evolution of struggle is what makes us humans
habitual abuse with environmental nuisances

peace, Duzt

PancakeBrah · 04-25-2018, 04:31 PM

I, personally, disagree with every piece of feed so far. I found this to be anodyne and rather rote in terms of technical skills. Differing opinions really do make the world go 'round!

2tripple0 · 04-25-2018, 06:41 PM

Yeah i didnt really like this either sorry dont have much to say cause i dont really want to diss on your piece i mean good for dropping i guess...

dull boy · 04-25-2018, 10:26 PM

Feel like these words aren’t experienced, but a knowledge of tropes.

Malevolent · 04-26-2018, 10:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

I, personally, disagree with every piece of feed so far. I found this to be anodyne and rather rote in terms of technical skills. Differing opinions really do make the world go 'round!

The irony in this reply is beautiful.

PancakeBrah · 04-26-2018, 11:42 AM

Lol.

04-13-2018, 12:15 PM	#1
Malevolent Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 10 Rep Power: 44672	Amor of Struggle reach into the dark side of your mind for a solution make use with the ruins left behind from seclusion Without struggle and pain, happiness is an illusion You can be happy in the rain if your used to it look back at my darkest days to get through some shit Without the hardship nd pain, success is diluted The evolution of struggle is what makes us humans habitual abuse with environmental nuisances Its the perfect union of yin and yang we're faced with Without hatred, how can we ever find peace in a place of sin? Whats the point of the heavenly gates without Satan? The good, the rage mixed and baked to create grace nd hatred you must balance the sacred shit with hate and sin We all in this complicated game, regardless of fate, you must play it

04-19-2018, 04:15 PM	#4
iLL ScriptureZ Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 18 Rep Power: 0	Lacrime Di Stelle Senza Speranza Good shit homie, the wording was the best I've seen from you. The transitions were smooth as well! __________________ Last edited by iLL ScriptureZ; 04-19-2018 at 04:17 PM. Reason: accidentally posted a verse smh

04-23-2018, 09:21 AM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Agree with everything said alrdy. Had a cut to the point syllable game going. Dug the material. Keep posting __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

04-25-2018, 04:31 PM	#8
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I, personally, disagree with every piece of feed so far. I found this to be anodyne and rather rote in terms of technical skills. Differing opinions really do make the world go 'round! __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

04-25-2018, 06:41 PM	#9
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Yeah i didnt really like this either sorry dont have much to say cause i dont really want to diss on your piece i mean good for dropping i guess... __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

04-17-2018, 09:16 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Short & sweet...right up my nasal passage, should collab sometime... Stay you bro.

04-18-2018, 10:32 PM	#3
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507453	Nice piece, well written and nice flow with the multis. Good transitioning as well

04-25-2018, 10:26 PM	#10
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,075 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345601	Feel like these words aren’t experienced, but a knowledge of tropes.

04-26-2018, 11:42 AM	#12
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Lol. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?